You know, I realized the other night that computer solitaire is out to get me. Yah, I played maybe 7 games last night. Didn't finish a single one. And add to that I don't own Harry Potter. I don't it s a fact.
Chapter 4 The Man Upstairs
They sat by the fire, cards held close to their faces. He was going to win this one, he could feel it.
Across from him Maisy blew the bangs out of her face and laid her cards on the table, "I'm out."
"Wha-a-a-t!" He whined. "But I had a good hand! I was all set to win and stuff!" He pouted. Maisy gave him a stern look. She opened her mouth and whatever she was going to say was cut off by a loud, "BANG!" Maisy clucked like a bothered hen and he giggled. The Man Upstairs always made lots of interesting noises.
"There he goes AGAIN!" She snapped. Maisy always got annoyed at Mr. Evans. Too much noise, he didn't eat enough, he needed to sleep more. It was kinda' funny.
Later he brought Mr. Evans his dinner. Climbing the stairs, the cup rattled on the old metal tray. When he reached the top of the stairs he knocked on the old door. There was no answer. "Mister, Mister Evans, I've got your dinner," he called. Still, there was no response. Cautiously he pushed at the door; it swung open.
Mister Evans sat lounging in a chair, staring at the rain-curtained city below. The streetlights blinked up at him and he blew a stream of smoke out of his mouth, the cigarette in his hand burning faintly in the glass.
Alright, as always review time. In this fic:
The narrator is a little boy, he basically lives with Maisy, who is maybe in her sixties and is rather similar to Mrs. Weasley.
I was thinking that Mr. Evans, yes as in Lily's father, wasn't actually a muggle, but a wizard, a good one, who played an essential role in the vanquishing of Grindewald, however Dumbledore gave the finishing blow and he was remembered as the hero person.
Then after the clean up and grieving for those lost, Mr. Evans left. And why did he leave? Because he was having difficulty with his magic. Something was wrong, and so, as not to be embarrassed, everyone's got their pride right, he left the wizarding world, until he figured it out and got his magic back.
Well, its sorta' obvious he never did . . . but then again . . .
And as always, rate, review, comments are appreciated, no matter what I may say.
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