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"Open your eyes, Bella" I recognised Carlisle sweet melodic tone. Was this heaven? Or was I in hell? I couldn't hear the beat of my heart anymore so there was no way I was still alive. Charlie and Renée would be heartbroken. As my thoughts turned to them I felt so lost, how had I been so stupid, why did I have to go and die and leave poor Charlie and Renée alone. Only then did I realise that I had been holding my breath involuntary, so I took a gulp of air but what my body experienced was so alien to me, I didn't feel like myself at all. Instead of feeling relief and the expansion of my chest from the breath I just took, the action felt wrong. It was like my lungs didn't need the air, they weren't waiting for it. I was definitely dead. But then with the air came the taste of the room around me, the mix of stagnant air mingling from the air from the open window, I could feel the air coming through from my left, I could hear the wind lightly pushing against the net curtain trying to gain access into the room. I was feeling too many things at once; it was easy to get distracted. But I knew a couple of these for certain, I didn't have a heartbeat, I didn't need to breath (but I liked to) and I now had super hearing. It was way too much to deal with, was it like this for everyone when they've passed on?
I decided I needed to open my eyes. So I did. I was not ready for what I saw. As I lay on what seemed to be a hospital bed I looked up. Everything was so clear, sharp, defined. The brilliant light overhead was blinding-bright but yet I could plainly see the glowing strands of the filaments inside the bulb. Every colour of the rainbow could be seen, there was even an eighth colour that I had no name for. Behind the light, I could distinguish the individual grains in the dark wood ceiling above. Something touched me, a hand placed on my shoulder, my body locked down in surprise. After the first second of frozen shock my body responded, which shocked me even more. My body recoiled, I flipped of the bed, twisting away from the unknown, air hissing up from my throat, spitting through my clenched teeth. What was this? I stopped and my hands flew to my mouth, what the hell was coming out of my lips.
"Please, Bella don't be alarmed, you're perfectly safe here. No one will hurt you. We haven't been formally introduced yet, I'm Dr Carlisle Cullen" he extended his right hand out slowly towards me. I looked into his eyes, a light golden colour, they seemed sincere. He was being truthful. I felt embarrassed at my overreaction to his touch, but my body had been triggered uncontrollably. I went to walk over to Dr Cullen but instead of walking slowly like normal, I moved with incredible speed and had to stop almost immediately so I didn't knock into him. I was completely overwhelmed.
"What is wrong with me?" Huh, that wasn't my voice it sounded more like singing, my voice rang like a bell. Was there nothing that hadn't changed, I wasn't feeling anything at all like I did before I was bitten. What had happened to me? I needed answers.
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