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~Previously:

"Hey there Maxie. Ready to die?"

I whirled around at the sound of that familiar voice.

ARI?

~Present:

"Long time no see, Maxie." said Ari.

I was just about to make a snarky remark when Ari tilted his head to the side. After a brief pause he said,"Hold the mutants!"

I turned around to see my flock held by their wings by 2 Erasers each. All of them were kicking and punching and doing anything to get free.

While i was turned around Ari took the oppertunity to punch me in my stomach. Making me wheeze and cough. Then I swung both my feet down and kicked him in the cheast as hurt as I could. I heard a satifying crack!

He fell 10 feet before recovering and racing up to me and punching me in the face, giving me a bloody nose. Both my hands flew to my nose to set it before it set crooked.

Ari then kicked me right between my wings causing them to fold in and I started to fall.

I tried to open my wings but they would not co-operate. Just then i felt and hairy paw grab my ankle on my hurt leg. The pain was so intese i almost cried out.

Pain is just a message. Pain is just a message. Pain is just a, GodDamn frecking, message.

I then felt the sting of a tranquilizer dart in my neck. The last thing i remeber before blacking out was Ari saying,"Lights out birdie." And the flock calling out to me.

Fang's POV:

Right ater Max broke the flock off into groups we all assumed our battle postions. I flew around Max to be alittle in front of her. I saw a spark of pride flare up in her eyes before it dissapered.

huh... guess Max doesn't like to be protected... I thought.

To late to think about it now because the Erasers were on us.

I puched the first one i saw right in the temple. Knocking it uncouncious. I flew behind the next and kicking between its wings then bent them back sharply, pulling them out of their sockets. He fell to his death as Eraser after Eraser circled me untill i was surrounded by fully grown Erasers.

I was just about to punch one's lights out when I heard:

"Hold the mutants!"

I was so stunned to hear that voice i forgot to fight when two Erasers grabed my wings. Once i realized what was happening i punched and kicked at the Erasers holding me, untill one punched me on my forhead causing me to see spots.

I took in the scene before me.

Max was face to face with Ari. The Eraser who has caused us so much trouble over the years. He is also Max's half-brother.

I saw Max looking at the flock with worried eyes when Ari punched her in the stomach, making her wheeze and cough. Then she kicked Ari so hard she broke his ribs, causing him to fall. But he recovered quicker then Max expected because he punched her in the nose. While she was setting it he kicked he between her wings causing her to fall.

"NO!" I screamed as I thrashed even harder then before in adesprate attempt to reach Max. Her wings wouldn't co-operate so she couldnt save herself. Then Ari grabed her ankle and pulled out a syringe filled wih black liquid. He pushed the syringe into her neck and pushed the plunger down.

All at once she stopped moving, at the last minute she twisted to look to look at the flock who was calling her name over and over. Then her eyes closed and she didn't move.

"MAX!" i shouted. I managed to twist my body around and kick an Eraser in the chest causing him to lest go of my wing. The other punched me in the face causing me to once again see spots. Before I blacked out i saw them pushing an uncousious Max into a bag.

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-Emilylou97