thx jazzie-kun 4 th good review! and stop flmaing the stroy!1 i bet u cant right such a good story!1!1 (Yeah I could, any story is better than this one)
StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw and hr frend JazzPaw (Since when do cats know about Jazz music?) (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) waz slepping on the mos.
"JazzPaw get up." She cried. JazzPaw opend her brlliaint blu (lol that spelling though) eyes and looked at hr.
"Do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" (No) she asked.
"Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the moss. They leavt (What the heck) and went two the entrnse too camp.
But then, a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was BlackStar!1!11 (Oh no! ONE cat from Shadowclan is her! Maybe he just wants to talk to Firestar! Let's raise all the red flags!)
"Shadowclan are attaking!" (It's just Blackstar you idiot!) She yelled. All the cats came out from there dens. (FALSE ALARM!) She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of. (Huh, ow)
"Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was SandStrom. (SandSTROM? Really? How to you misspell Storm!) Your a good fihter!"
Sorry about the last chapter that I uploaded by accident that said wiggle wiggle, when I write a new chapter I have to upload a text document with words in it in order to finish writing it on and, well I put the words "Wiggle Wiggle" in that document, and I did finish this beforehand, I just forgot to hit "save" before I uploaded it to the story #Failure Sorry!