Minor Problems
(Hit and Sh**)
I only got I review but I'm gonna pretend it's a gazillion but thank you starlightchick your probably the only one reading this so this story is for you and I will put you in it if you give me a name!
Disclaimer: FREAK stay away from me I already told you ,no I don't own the darn beautiful books what do want from me actually nope don't anwser that question!
SPOV
"Mercy sweetie pie be a doll and get my purse so I can take you to Elise's house" a women called. I must not have answered for a while b/c the woman came in and asked me "you feelin' alright sugar?" The woman was tall lean and bony. She had dark hair like the Mercy girl and was wearing rich lady clothing. You know what I mean I'm talking about white, white pants that go to your belly and blue, green, and turquoise tank with a baggy thing at the top that's black. She starred at me quizzically then snatched her purse up and rolled her eyes. I don't know why but I don't like her I just don't. She led me to the car (which was a new shiny convertible. I figured I probably didn't like her because Mercy didn't like her. On the way to Elise or somebody's house the rich lady talked about how ugly I was in her sweet sickly kind of way. I wasn't really listening. I was really trying to figure out what was happening. I knew for some reason or another I was in this Mercy girls body and I could feel some of her strongest emotions. I also did some deductive reasoning and decided the man must have been "my" dad the little boy that the woman referred to as "my smooches pumpkin Ethan" must be Mercy's brother and this woman must be "my" mom. ICK, GROSS! We pulled into a long driveway that led to a cozy cottage that was the opposite of the giant fancy mansion we had just left. I looked down to avoid my "mothers" eyes and saw a bag. In the bag was a worn down book with the title "The Fairy Tale Detectives" by Michael Buckley. I looked closer and saw two familiar girls running from a familiar giant in familiar woods wearing even more familiar clothes. I then saw the words THE SISTERS GRIMM. "awww sh**" I said. The car screeched to a stop and the Woman I thought was Mercy's mother turned around to stare at me. "WHAT DID YOU SAY YOUNG LADY?"
MPOV
I jumped up and down on the bed before I remembered how Puck was always tricking Sabrina so I run through the hall looking for the restroom. "They talk about the restroom a lot but never actually give directions in the book" I mutter to myself quietly. I find the bathroom and check my reflection in the mirror looking for anything wrong with the beautiful image of Sabrina Grimm. She truly is flawless and beautiful in every way. Suddenly I have the erg to put on make-up. I figure this must be a very strong feeling Sabrina has towards the subject. I notice a little brown dot in the corner of my/ SG face and it starts growing bigger. It eventually covers my/her entire face. I scream "AHHHHHHHH" then I remember who I am in and remember- "PUCK!" I hear cackling then I storm down the stairs at top speed. I see a certain fairy boy hide behind a couch and I deiced to play along. I say in a hopefully confused voice "Why oh me oh my where is Puck I just wanted to ask him to give me a kiss" at the last word I look up and see a cocky fairy saying "I knew you couldn't resist me Grimm". I take him surprise by snatching his foot and throw into a headlock. "BWAHAHAHA, YOU THINK I-I-I WOULD F-F-FALL FOR Y-Y-YOU HAHAHAHA!" I laughed at him while he turned red in frustration. Then he says "Grrrr Grimm get your clean hands off me you little stink pot". That's when I remember why I was down here and my FACE (well Sabrina's face). "YOU" I scream. At this Puck kind of shrinks in fright. I smile at this in my head then say "What in Dumbledore's name did you put on me" I say a little calmer (not much). He gives a small grin and says "Arabian instant brown frown". "what" I say actually curious. Just at that moment the rest of the Grimm's and Red walked in. A girl I'm pretty sure is Daphne started asking "are you two getting cozy" (puke). Granny Relda look at my face in concern and so did Mr. Clay. The blonde with a broken nose who must be Uncle Jake started digging through his pocket s frantically while Veronica and Henry Sabrina's mom and dad scolded Puck. Ha ha ha ha he got in trouble. I silently laughed while Red rushed over to me and asked if I was okay. I looked at her funny and said "why do I look sick I feel fine". She gave me a worried look then handed me a mirror that came out of NO WHERE. I took one look at my face then at the freak baby and punched him in the gut or rather I hit him in the guts.
Well I am evil I think I will leave it on a cliff hanger until I get more reviews so HAHAHAHA! OH and I like cows so If you are the tenth reviewer I will either send you a virtual cow or….. PUCK b/c he is stinking up my story with his freak babyness! Chow for now
- treehugger1999