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Dakota

Dakota didnt know what he just did. I felt so bad. I knew that the arrow would quickly affect his blood stream. i quickly took him to the field hospital. They fed him some nectar and ambrosia, which stopped the poison. Reyna rushed in through the doors and screamed "What happened?" Then she spotted the wound on Percys leg. "You FOOL, Neptune will not forgive such and insult. There will be terror on the Apollo cabin, bigger than the one that came after the insult to Jas-Jas-Jason" she started teering up. She pulled out her dagger and slit my arm, i cried out in rage " your fighting your best friend for a new boy who just got here!" I felt so enraged. I felt my eyes glow gold, but then i heard it, from the other field hospital, the one with Bobby in it, i heard a scream that sounded just like him. Reyna and him ran to the tent and saw them.

The Venti. There was one inside the tent. He smiled while fighting Bobby who was trying to protect an injured limp Frank. Bobby was obviously distracted by the Ventis (blinding eyes.) I took out my bow and starte fireing. Arrow after arrow he fired. But then he heard a huge booming voice " Those arrows wont work", Then a huge arrow came along and slit through the Ventis throat. Everyone turned around and saw him. A huge fierce looking man with sea green eyes. "Hail Neptune." Reyna said.

"What do you mean that my arrows wont work, my lord?" I asked. "Oh not just you. The whole apollo cabin is cursed." He bellowed "Oh. And your abillity to heal is lost." Then a brave Apollo boy said "But why my lord? have we done something to disappoint you?" Neptune replied " Your foolish counselour Dakota Jhonson, has insulted me by trying to murder my son, he is still in a coma."

" I am sorry for my behavior my lord, but you cant just take away our greatest atributes!" i said. "oh but i already have" The lord of the sea told me with rage. Then he dissapeared into a wave of water.

" I told you Dakota! You idiot! You should be exiled for this! But no i will make your punishment worse you have to beaten every day by Jacob B. of mars until the attributes get back."

As he entered his cabin, Hazel screamed " I am now head councelor and I punish you, you are not allowed in the cabin until the curse in lifted, you have to sleep in the forest with no food or nectar or ambrosia. You can only have a dagger to protect you."

He begged her to forgive him, but she just denied it and told him to leave right away, He was escorted to the forest by the best archers in the Apollo cabin. They both had permission to cut him up, but not anything fatal. They used the privilege very well, and cut him bad enough so that he didn't have the ability to use his left hand.

He fell to the ground. He should have known better. They were prepping for war against the giants, and this is when they needed the archers and healers the most. He waited through the night, waited for something to attack, waited for the rest of his punishment. He waited for what seemed like hours, but was only 30 minutes, when he heard it. It was the loudest noise he had ever heard " AHDKADLKAFBNFLAFJ"

What was going to become of him. He only had a dagger, no nectar or ambrosia, this was life or death, and the worst part was, out came a Vulcan Talos.

Vulcan kids, they probably wanted him dead. But he was taught to fight, so he had to put up a challenge. The talos was 20x his size. and there was one way to kill it. A stab to the head, and it was dead.