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Hello! - Person Talking
Hello! - Person Thinking
Hello! - Person Shouting
Hello! - Bijū/Summon Talking
Hello! - Bijū/Summon Thinking
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu! - Using a Jutsu
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!- Thinking a Jutsu
Chapter 4 - Training
Kurama's Nightmare
(A.N. (Author Note) In case you forgot Naruto is Kurama)
"You failed us." Sakura said in a monotone voice
"Saku…" Kurama tried to say but stopped when he heard a voice behind him
"You failed us." Hinata said in the same monotone voice as Sakura
"Wai…" Kurama tried to speak again but suddenly more and more of Naruto friends began appearing
"You failed us, you failed us, you fail…" They chanted repeatedly
"No! No! NO!" Kurama shouted before falling unconscious
Kushina's Apartment - Morning
Kushina woke up from "her" nightmare while panting quickly. Looking at "her" clock was 2.00 a.m. while outside was a heavy thunderstorm
"Stupid thunderstorm…" Kurama thought while looking out the window "I miss them… No I can't be moping just because they died protecting me, plus I have a promise to fulfill." Kurama thought while remembering his old bijū "I wonder if Kaa-san still asleep?" Kurama thought
Kushina's Seal - Morning
Kurama went into the seal and found that Kushina was still asleep on his tail
"Heh… she look cute when she's sleeping." Kurama thought "Maybe I should get some sleep." Kurama thought but quickly decided against it when he remembered his nightmare "... I think I'll pass, I don't need sleep really" Kurama thought "Maybe It's time to tell them." Kurama thought
Bijū Psyche Plane - Night
(A.N. (Author Note) I know if I keep calling Naruto in this part as Kurama It's going to be confusing as hell, so for the sake of everyone reading I'm only going to call Naruto well... Naruto)
All the Bijū stood in a circle facing each other
"What do you want Kurama? You don't usually call us, you know." Matatabi said
"Yeah Kurama I was sleeping you know." Isobu said
"Oh suck It up bijūs doesn't need sleep." Naruto said rolling his eyes
Every bijū just stared at him
"What?" Naruto asked
"Thats… a very un-Kurama thing for you to say." Kokuō said skeptically
"Well I was about to explain myself when Isobu interrupted me." Naruto briefly stared at Isobu but stopped
"Well anyway, I'm not Kurama in a sense seeing the other bijūs confused faces continued, Since I'm terrible at explain things I'm going to just say Kurama used a time-travel jutsu to send me back in time but it used his soul but I'm pretty sure you know more about this than me." Naruto said while crying a bit
The other bijūs we're shocked not in their wildest dream that Kurama will use this I mean It literally use their soul and the fact that he was more prideful than all of them combined make it even more improbable
"... This may be very well be a prank but then again if this is true, what the hell happen in the future?" The bijūs thought
"Alright, Kurama you are probably pranking us." Chōmei said hopefully
They then all saw Naruto shaking his head
"No… I'm not lying." Naruto said "I probably have a lot of things I have to explain haven't I?" Naruto chuckled "We…" As just Naruto was about to begin Saiken interrupted him
"Actually, you can just fist/paw/hoof bump us and we can see your memory." Saiken said
"Well whatever make explaining easier I supposed." Naruto said
They all then began to fist/paw/hoof bump him and began to see his memory to his childhood to the Pain Invasion to the Fourth Shinobi War To him befriending them
"..." The bijūs we're extremely quiet to a point a person could hear a needle fall
"So… are you mad at me?" Naruto asked to break the extremely awkward atmosphere
"No." The bijūs said
"Why?" Naruto asked
"Frankly, we don't know what to say." Shukaku said surprised
"Heh… to think you manage to befriend all of us." Gyūki said impressed
"Wait, wait don't you miss Kurama? Even a little?" Naruto said while confused
"Well… a bit really, sure he's our sibling but at the same time he is pretty much the world most arrogant asshole." Matatabi said with irritation at the end
"Oh he's not that bad… seeing the other bijū ludicrous expression, well in the future anyway." Naruto said with a sigh "Well I guess I told you guys everything, see ya." Naruto said
"Wait." Kokuō said
"What?" Naruto asked
"Since Kurama didn't explain the implications of using the jutsu our father taught us, we are going to explain side-effects to you." Son Gokū said
"So… what are the side-effects? Aside from taking Kurama's soul." Naruto said
"Well firstly, it's your personality we know that you're a boisterous and exuberant from what we can gather from you memories." Kokuō said
"Well… I guess you right." Naruto said
"The reason is because that your personality changed is because Kurama past soul is still here but dormant." Saiken said
"Wait, so what's going to happen to Kurama's soul then?" Naruto asked
"Since you obviously can't have 2 souls in your body in 1 to 2 weeks, your and Kurama's soul are going to merge." Gyūki said
"So what's going to happen to me?" Naruto asked again
"Well nothing really, aside from gaining some personality traits and his memories, you're not going to be affected that much." Chōmei said
"Now onto the second side-effect" Isobu said "Because you somehow manage to still have your chakra while you we're still human you're virtually immune to genjutsu." Isobu explained to Naruto
"Aside from immunity to genjutsu and having an incredible small chakra reserve, is there anything else I can do with my human chakra?" Naruto asked
"... No, I think." Isobu said while having a thinking pose (use your imagination kids)
"Anything else before I go?" Naruto asked them
"Be careful what you change about the future, Naruto." Kokuō said
"Sure, well I think It's about the time for us to go see you guys later I guess." Naruto said before leaving
"Heh… the future just got a lot more interesting." All the bijū (minus Naruto) thought before they to started to leave
Kushina's Seal - Afternoon
(A.N. (Author Note) Now that the last part was over I'm going to call Naruto Kurama Again)
When Kurama was back at the seal he saw Kushina yawning while stretching her arms out
"Good err… What's the time of day again?" Kushina asked a bit embarrassed
"Well it's afternoon Kushina-chan." Kurama answered her
"Oh, Good afternoon Kurama!" Kushina shouted at the end
"Well, good afternoon Kushina-chan." Kurama said with a chuckle
Kushina's Apartment - Afternoon
"Ehh? Where are we Kurama?" Kushina asked him
"We're in Konoha Kushina-chan" Kurama answered her
"How did we arrived here?" Kushina asked again
"Please don't be mad at me." Kurama thought with a sigh
Kurama then explained that after Kushina fell asleep he controlled her body to go Konoha
"So… are you mad at me?" Kurama asked her
"Of Course I am!" Kushina shouted while blushing furiously
"Look, I know It's wrong but I can't just leave you laying in the middle of the road you know." Kurama argued
"Since you cared about me I'll forgive you this time, you overgrown kitsune." Kushina said happily while temporarily appeared in the seal to hug one of Kurama's paw
"Okay, okay you better get ready because you're going to meet the Hokage." Kurama said to remind her
"Oh! Right, better get ready then." Kushina thought
After her conversation with Kurama she began to brush her teeth and ate lunch before running to Hokage Tower
Hokage Tower - Afternoon
"Ah, Hello Kushina-chan" Hiruzen said
"Hello Hokage-sama" Kushina said
"No, no just call me Hiruzen Kushina." Hiruzen said "Anyway, do you know why you're here?" Hiruzen asked
"Uh… No?" Kushina pretending to not know
"The reason you're here is because the Kyūbi was controlling your body yesterday" Hiruzen said
"Oh." Kushina replied
"Now, prey to tell me why did the Kyūbi control your body." Hiruzen said
"Mutualism." Kushina said
"Mutualism?" Hiruzen asked while raising an eyebrow
"Sorry, the Kyūbi asked me not to tell anyone." Kushina replied
"Kushina is not telling me something here but why?" Hiruzen thought while narrowing his eyes but quickly stopped "Ok Kushina can you tell what happened before you arrived in to Konoha."
"Kushina give him a "slightly" edited version of the story." Kurama suddenly said
"I can't just lie to him you know." Kushina thought with a sigh
"No, just give him incredible vague answers we both know he can easily detect lies." Kurama replied
After her short conversation with Kurama she began to tell Hiruzen a "slightly" edited version of her story from the destruction of her village to arriving to Konoha
"May I ask who is the boy who helped you Kushina?" Hiruzen asked
"Sorry, Hiruzen-sama I never asked his name." Kushina answered
"Now, normally any village would immediately turn you into a weapon because you're a jinchūriki but i'm going to give you a choice of would you like being a ninja or a civilian." Hiruzen said sternly
"... May I think about it first Hiruzen-sama?" Kushina asked
"I understand Kushina you may go." Hiruzen said before going back to his paperwork
Kushina's Apartment - Evening
"So what do you think Kurama?" Kushina asked him while looking at the birds chirping outside her window
"I think It's best you become a ninja but It's your choice after all." Kurama said to her
"..." Kushina sat on a chair near her window to watch the birds chirping while having a thoughtful expression before going into the seal
Kushina's Seal - Evening
"So… what do you chose?" Kurama asked
"I chose… to become a ninja." Kushina said
"Well if you chose that, then be prepare to have a long and hard road ahead of you." Kurama said
"Hah! Nothing can scare me! I'm just going to plow straight ahead, Dattebane!" Kushina shouted with determination
"Heh… she just like me when I was a kid." Kurama thought while reminiscence about his old life
"Let's show them what we can do Kurama!" Kushina shouted with excitement
"Taking the world by storm, eh Kushina-chan?" Kurama said while chuckling "Well you better go tell Hiruzen then." Kurama said
Hokage Tower - Night
"This damn paperwork will be death of me." Hiruzen thought with a sigh "Please anyone just anyone…" Hiruzen thought before Kushina slammed the door open "Ah, Kushina-chan have you made your choice?" Hiruzen asked
"Yup! I want to become a ninja Hiruzen-sama." Kushina chirped happily
"Are you sure Kushina?" Hiruzen asked again
"Yes!" Kushina shouted
"Heh, she's a lively one." Hiruzen thought "Well here's your academy application Kushina." Hiruzen said before giving Kushina a academy application paper and a pen
After Kushina finished filling out the application she gave the paper and pen back to Hiruzen
"So, when does the academy starts?" Kushina asked
"In about 1 week." Hiruzen replied to Kushina
"Well, see you later jiji!" Kushina said before running off
"I'm not old." Hiruzen thought before continued to do his bane of existence (paperwork)
Konoha's Street - Night
After Kushina left Hokage Tower she was gonna go to her home before she felt hungry
"Man, I'm hungry…" Kushina thought "Actually the only thing I've eaten is the fish that Kurama cooked for me… somehow." Kushina thought while trying to figure out how did Kurama cooked the fish "... I'll figure it out later I suppose." Kushina thought before trying to find a place to eat
After Kushina strolling around Konoha a bit she eventually found a place to eat
Kushina's Apartment - Midnight
"I'm stuffed." Kushina thought "So Kurama can you teach me anything? You're older than dirt after all." Kushina said with a joking tone at the end
"Firstly, teach what? Secondly, I'm not ol…" Before Kurama could finished Kushina cut him off
"I meant metaphorically." Kushina said
"Oh, anyway what do you want me to teach you Kushina-chan?" Kurama asked her
"You know ninja-stuff!" Kushina replied
"Sure." Kurama said "She is so like me it's almost unbelievable." Kurama thought with a sigh "Well you better go sleep then, tomorrow is going to be long day for you." Kurama said before going to sleep
Kushina then went to the bathroom to have a short shower and brush her teeth. After that, she went to her closet to change her clothes before going to sleep on her bed
The Next Day
Kushina's Apartment - Morning
*beep* *beep* *beep* *beep* *be…
"Stupid alarm clock…" Kushina thought
After the [stupid] alarm clock woke Kushina up she then go through her daily morning routine.
"Morning Kushina-chan." Kurama said while yawning
"Oh, morning Kurama." Kushina replied while having breakfast "So, what are you going to teach me?" Kushina asked him
"Firstly, we need a place for you to train." Kurama replied "There's 2 options we can do it either at a park or a forest, both have their up and down-side's for example the the park is closer to shops where you can easily buy ninja tools or supplies but people can easily spy on you so they can find your strength or the forest or any remote place really is the complete opposite." Kurama replied
"... I think I'll go with the forest." Kushina thought
After Kushina finished her breakfast she then went strolling around the forests near Konoha, she eventually found a remote place to train
Kushina's Training Spot - Morning
"So… what are you going to teach me?" Kushina asked
"Firstly, you need to increases your chakra control because right now it's absolutely horrible and with you being a uzumaki and my jinchūriki isn't helping." Kurama said
"Ok, then so how I increased my chakra controlthen?" Kushina asked again
"Your first chakra control exercise is Leaf Concentration Practice." Kurama replied
"Leaf Concentration Practice? You mean I have to concentrate staring at a leaf?" Kushina asked while Kurama hand er… paw?palm
"No! I didn't mean you have to stare at a leaf." Kurama said with a sigh while Kushina giggle "Anyway, to do this exercise you have to try to stick a leaf on your body using only chakra, I recommend you try to stick the leaf on your forehead first because It's the easiest." Kurama said "Wake me up if you manage to stick a leaf on your body." Kurama said before falling asleep
After Kurama gave her the instructions Kushina immediately went to pluck a leaf from a tree and begin to try to stick a leaf on her body
A Few Hours Later
After, many hours and a lots of trial and error Kushina finally manage to stick a leaf on her forehead
"Yatta!" Kushina shouted with exhaustion and relief "Kurama, Kurama! I finally did it." Kushina said at her
"You did great, now stick 10 leaves." Kurama said before falling back to sleep
Kushina giving him an incredibly dark look but immediately sigh and went to do what he ask
Another Few Hours Later
"Grr… Kurama better give me something else." Kushina thought while growling "Kurama I'm done you better give me something else or I will turn the seal into a torture facility again…" Kushina growled while Kurama sweatdrop
"Oh, don't be so mad It's not like you're the only one to do this exercise." Kurama replied while his tails wagging lazily
"Wait, you have done this before?" Kushina asked
"... Yes." Kurama replied "Anyway, you're next chakra exercise is Tree Climbing…" Before Kurama could explain Kushina interrupted him
"I already know how to climb a tree, Dattebane!" Kushina shouted annoyingly at her bijū
"Actually, the name is a bit misleading when I mean [Tree Climbing] I actually meant [Tree Walking]." Kurama replied
"Tree Walking?" Kushina asked
"Yes, Kushina-chan It's Tree Walking." Kurama rolled his eyes "Anyway, to do this exercise you first have to redirect you chakra to your feet to stick to the tree, too little and you fall right off, too much however you will fall off and the tree quite literally explode seeing Kushina horrified expression don't worry It's just a small explosion really." Kurama chuckled "Instead of running up the tree which is counter-productive you instead put one foot at a time on the tree and regulate how much chakra is going there if you think it's too much decrease it and vice-versa, well have fun failing multiple times." Kurama said before cutting the mental link
"Kur…!" Kushina tried to say but Kurama cut the mental link before she could to say anything "Wait what's the time of day again." Kushina thought as she look up into the sky "Oh… It's afternoon well better get to it I supposed…" Kushina thought with a sigh
Kushina's Training Spot - Evening
"Huff… Huff… Finally." Kushina said before collapsing on the tree branch
"Maybe, that was too much… nah she be ok, she's my jinchūriki and a Uzumaki after all." Kurama thought
Kushina's Seal
"Ugh… Where am I?" Kushina groaned
"Finally, woken up Kushina-chan?" Kurama said behind her
"Gah!" Kushina shouted in surprise while Kurama was laughing "It's not funny!" Kusina shouted while blushing
"Whatever you say Kushina-chan." Kurama laugh turn into a chuckle
"So… how long I've been asleep?" Kushina asked
"About 2 Hours in the seal, the real world however only 30 Minutes has passed." Kurama said
"Wait, how does that work?" Kushina asked
"You do realize you can do anything in the seal right?" Kurama replied while raising a theoretical eyebrow
"Yeah… but I can't know everything!" Kushina retorted
"I'm not an Instruction manual, you know." Kurama rolled his eyes "Well, you better wake up then." Kurama said
Kushina's Training Spot - Evening
"Yawn…" Kushina yawned while rubbing her eyes "So, Kurama do you have anything else to teach me beside chakra control exercises?" Kushina said with a bit of irritation at the end
"Now I won't teach you very advanced jutsus yet but I'll teach you the basics like Kawarimi no Jutsu, Henge no Jutsu and Bunshin no Jutsu with the exception of Bunshin no Jutsu because that jutsu required incredible chakra control and we don't have a lifetime so I'll instead just going to teach you Kage Bunshin no Jutsu." Kurama said with a bit of irritation "That damn bunshin cause me to fail cause me to fail 3 times…" Kurama thought while twitching his eyes
"This is going to be a long week…" Kushina thought with a sigh
Translation:-
Bijū - Tailed Beast
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Jutsu
Jinchūriki - Power of Human Sacrifice
Kawarimi no Jutsu - Body Replacement Technique
Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Technique's Used:-
Leaf Concentration Practice
This training method is done by placing a leaf over an individual's forehead and having them direct all their chakra onto the leaf, using it as a focal point.
Tree Climbing Practice
Tree Climbing Practice is a training method used to gain more skills with chakra control. This training involves focusing a fixed amount of chakra to the bottom of one's feet, and using that to climb a tree without using one's hands. If the stream of chakra is too weak, the user will lose their footing on the tree and fall off. If it is too strong, the user will be pushed away from the tree, causing the tree to break around the point of contact and the user will fall.
Revisions:-
6 February 2015 (1st Revision)
7 February 2015 (2nd Revision)
Well… This chapter is done :D and no I'm not dead in case if chapter 5 takes too long