Hi this is the third chapter I hope you like it
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Chapter Three
Four moons have passed
"All cats old enough to catch their own pray gather beneath the burnt tree for a clan meeting." Goldkit and I padded over to the outer edges of the group. "Today we are gathered to make a new warrior. Seedpaw please step forward. Do you Seedpaw promise to uphold the warrior code even at the cost of your life?"
"I do."
"Then by the power of starclan I give you your warrior name Seedpelt"
The whole clan chanted, "Seedpelt, Seedpelt!"
"Another order of business he have some kits that have reached six moons. Goldkit, Loudkit please come to the base of the tree. Goldkit you will now be known as Goldpaw until you earn your warrior name. Your mentor will be Sunstripe. Sunstripe I hope you will pass your skills to this apprentice." They touched noses. "Loudkit please come here." She nervously walked forward. "You will now be known as Loudpaw until you earn your warrior name. Your mentor will be Snowleaf."
"Goldpaw, Loudpaw!" I went up to Goldpaw and congratulated him.
"Looks like we can't really play anymore." I said disappointedly.
"Ya I guess." He padded off. I sat there for little while, just thinking. I suddenly got tumbled over and pinned to the ground. It was Loudpaw.
"What was that for?"
"I want to play. Snowleaf twisted his paw while we were patrolling so he is in the medicine den." She looked disappointed.
"So what do you want to do?" I asked. She gave a sheepish smile.
"I know it's kind of a kit game but do you want to play moss ball?"
"Sure." We batted the ball, threw it and messed around until the sun had reached the top of the trees. Snowleaf slowly limped out of the medicine den.
"Snowleaf what do you think you are doing." Tigertail yelled at him. Loudpaw and I sit down to watch this play out.
"Tigertail never yells at anybody" Loudpaw whispered.
"You have a twisted paw you have to stay here so I can treat it."
"I am fine, I need to work with my apprentice." That is when Tigertail got surprisingly mean.
"Listen here flea brain, get back in there and get off that paw or so help me I will rip your pelt off!" She shouted. The whole camp froze. Snowleaf submissively crept back in the cave. I also saw Beechkit creeping into the den after Tigertail. I said bye to Loudpaw and crept closer to Beechkit and Tigertail. He started bouncing up and down. He ran up to me smiling,
"I'm going to be Tigertail's apprentice!" he said excitedly. I was shocked.
"You want to be a medicine cat?"
"Yes I think it's really interesting, you can heal your clan mates with plants, and talk with Starclan. It's the greatest job in the world." His eye shined with interest as he told about his future.
"Well awesome, only one more moon until we can be apprenticed."
"Do you want to climb the burnt tree?"
"No the tree is for the leader only, go ask Tanglekit to get in trouble with you. I'm going to listen to Dawnscar's stories with Vixenfur's kits." He looked surprised because I usually do everything with him.
"Fine then miss goody four paws." He yelled and walked grumpily away. I hurried to the elders den.
"And that is how the clans started." Palefur finished
"Dawnscar, can you tell us the one about the great clans?" Sheepkit squeaked. They are adorable. I thought to myself. Vixenfur had a large litter, three she-kits and three toms. Sheepkit and his sister, Cloudkit, had curly white pelts. Thistlekit a tom and Willowkit a she-cat are both gray tabbies. Bumblekit is a gold tabby tom. Lastly there is Birdkit a small dark brown she-cat. They are all cute three moon old kits with tons of energy. Vixenfur won't tell who the father is and I think it is Oddpelt, the deputy from Stormclan. I have heard tons of rumors from the warriors.
"So you want to hear about the great clans do you?"
"Yes!"
"Well you will have to wait until tomorrow because it is late, and you kits need to sleep."
"Awww." Birdkit mewed. "I can stay up all night." She opened her tiny mouth in a huge yawn.
"Come on lets go back to the nursery." I said as I stood up, "line up!" they all scrambled to their feet. "And march." They all sprinted to the nursery.
"Thank you for handling them Moonkit." She counted the kits and looked at me with worried eyes, "Where is Birdkit?"
"I will go find her." I trotted back to the rock pile and poked my head in. The little kit was lying next to Dawnscar and he was licking her head. He picked up his head as I padded in.
"She really wanted the story." He said with a smile. I chuckled
"Well I am going to take her back to her mother. Goodnight you two."
"Goodnight." They said together. I grabbed the small kit's scruff and brought the sleeping cat to her mother.
"Night." I walked out of the nursery and someone yelled,
"Beechkit, Tanglekit what are you doing up there!" I turned my head and saw them at the top of the burnt tree. I looked lower and saw Inkstar yowling at them. Oh they are in huge trouble. They ended up being confined to the nursery for half a moon I kept them company most of the time and we shared fresh kill. I spent the rest of the moon helping Vixenfur with all of her kits. I became great friends with moon flew by.
"All cats old enough to catch their own pray gather beneath the burnt tree for a clan meeting." Our mother, Cherrylight, quickly groomed us and sent us to the base of the tree. "We have a litter of kits that have reached six moons. Moonkit, Tanglekit, and Beechkit please come to the base of the tree. Moonkit you will now be known as Moonpaw until you earn your warrior name. Your mentor will be Softrunner. I hope you will pass your skills to this apprentice. Tanglekit you will be known as Tanglepaw until you have earned your warrior name. I will be your mentor." There was a gasp from the entire crowd. "Beechkit I hear you want to be Tigertail's apprentice."
"Yes I do."
"Tigertail please pass your great medicine knowledge to Beechpaw." We all touched noses with our mentors. Finally I am a 'paw.
