Ok first off for those who notice I dont spell very well whatever I dont care if you dont like that so if you dont like it DONT READ MY STORY! and as for this one nasty little comment from MissingPurpose you can go F** yourself For one your the F*n retard! I dont need some dumb B** telling me how to write my story this is my story and I will write it how I want to ( unless I ask my readers for ideas of coure :D) If you have a problem with my story go find something else to do than brag on about how other peoples story suck but yeah if you think I will sit there and take shit from a F**d up B** than your a sooo wrong! So how about you get that Tampon from out of your Butt! I would say something more but I was taught not to waste my time on low life losers.

( Sorry you had to hear uhm......read that! but yeah I dont like what she said witch was enough to piss me off so sorry you had to see that ok so I will put DO NOT HAVE BETA on my first chappie! :) just for those to know that lol. oh and thanks to Twilightxeclipse12 You are AWSOME!!!!! I LOVE TWILIGHT!!! I have the whole series (sp?) I am on the third book but dont ruin it for me!!! hmm personly I like Edward and Bella AND Jacob and Bella but mostly Edward and Bella lol hmm the whole Cullen family is awsome too! sorry I think I am blabbing lol. Thanks for the comment! :D TWILIGHT RULES!!!!!!

Thank you to monkeybait for the warning and yea thanks for being nice about it but thats just how I want to write it soo lol but thanks anyway! By the way I like your nam! Monkeybait LOL Its awsome.