The 2 shots and the scream made all the guys outside panic especially Jay he ran in as soon as he heard the scream. "HALSTEAD!" They all screamed as Jay ran into the building alone. He ran in not thinking that he would ever find what he had just saw. He wanted to Kill Charlie enough already but what he saw next made it become even more rage inside Jay's body.
ERIN'S POV:
I screamed as Charlie hit me and then I heard 2 shots and felt pain shoot through me once again. Charlie was beating me again and trying to take my clothes off again. I tried to fight back but I couldn't. I couldn't move he had me pinned down. And at that moment I knew that this was the end. I was going to die. I was dying. I was about to black out when I heard the door get busted down and I heard that familiar voice yell "CHICAGO PD! FREEZE! AND PUT YOUR HANDS WHERE I CAN SEE THEM! RIGHT NOW! DO IT! GET ON THE GROUND NOW!" Jay Halstead screamed. And that's when it happened. Everything was starting to go black. I knew I had to stay awake. It was almost over. Jay had found me. He was here to help me. To save me. Just like Voight did 10 years ago. I was struggling to stay awake. Then I couldn't fight the blackness anymore and I gave in. And everything went black once more. I started to hear Charlie yell at Jay. Then I felt someone kicking me and I knew Charlie had noticed me passing out. He wanted me to feel the pain. The pain that I supposedly caused him when he first attacked me. I heard another couple of shots and then felt another one hit me as pain surged through me again. Charlie shot me again I screamed and cried in pain but no one would help me. "HELP ME! SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME PLEASE!" But no one answered. Instead they all began to attack me.
JAY'S POV:
I busted down the door and screamed at Charlie "CHICAGO PD! FREEZE! AND PUT YOUR HANDS WHERE I CAN SEE THEM! RIGHT NOW! DO IT! GET ON THE GROUND NOW!" And then I saw Erin. She looked right back up at me. I felt so relieved that she was still alive. Then I noticed all the blood around her. She had been hit so many times that there was bruises on top of bruises. Her face was all bruised up. So were her arms and legs. The shirt she was wearing, had gotten ripped up in some places somewhere in the time she had been kept hostage. So you could see the bullet holes and bruises and the stab wounds too. She tried to smile a small smile at me but there was blood in her mouth. Which all worried me more. She looked at me and then looked away. I was so scared that she had given up. But then when Charlie got off of her and began to kick and punch her part of me was relieved. I was relieved to know that she was still alive. I hated that I knew she was in more pain with each wince and cry from a punch or a kick from Charlie. But it made me want to kill Charlie even more. Then the rest of the team came in. Voight shot at Charlie's leg and Charlie shot at Erin and sadly she was hit for the 4th time wih a bullet that day. I knew then that she shouldn't be alive. And then my worst fear became true.