Hello people I'm just three chapters away from actually progressing with the story better than Lady Serenity Fortunato. (No offense, but you had more author's notes than actual chapters with were short in one person's POV each time.) However chapter 5 is where I will truly break the story from her original tiny version, but having them in one person's POV each chapter isn't bad especially when chapter 5 comes when this will get good between Naruto and his future wives. I'll even try to put in a good lemon.
"Talking"
"Thinking"
"Jutsu/Demon, summon talking"
"Demon, summon thinking"
Naruto's POV
Not long after I left Ichiraku's I went to the top of Hokage Mountain. Like I used to do when I was a kid I sat on the head of the fourth Hokage. "Dad, what should I do? Mom, left and took my sister with her, and left me at the mercy of the villagers. Now, they want me to welcome them back after sixteen years of pure hell. How can I do that? I was alone for so long; it wasn't until after I defeated Pein that the villagers started looking at me like I was a hero, and after I defeated Madara they looked at me like I was Kami, herself. I'm not a God; I'm just Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze; your son and heir. A son who was abused and looked down upon by the villagers you risked your life for."
It was then I just sat there and closed my eyes trying to imagine what dad would say.
I sat there for maybe an hour when I sensed some chakra nearby, "Come on, out Hina-chan. What is it you need?"
Behind me stood Hinata Hyuuga, one of my fiancées. "Hello, Naruto-kun," after I had defeated Pein after she had died and come back, I finally got her to change. She was no longer a shy girl who blushed and stuttered whenever I was back, but a strong girl who would do anything for her village and family. "I heard what happened from Ayame-chan. Are you alright?"
"Honestly, I don't really know hime. I have no idea what I'm supposed to do. I feel so lost, and it's been a long time since I felt like this. All my life I thought I was an orphan who was also an only child, but now I find out not only am I not an orphan and I also have a twin sister. How could any woman do that to her children? How could any mother separate her twin children? I don't understand any of it. I… I wish someone could tell me what I should do now," I said as I felt tears start to fall from my eyes. As I started to tear up I felt Hinata wrap her arms around me from behind to comfort me.
"Naruto-kun, I personally think that maybe she had a reason to do what she did, but don't forgive her yet. Let them have a chance to get to know you better. Let them know who you are now. That way your mother can see what she did when she left you behind. She needs to see what a dumb mistake she made when she left you behind like that. Let her in a way steam in her own stew. She made the bed now let her get in it. She needs to understand that leaving one child behind and taking the other is just wrong. Not only did she wrong you by leaving you at the hands of people who never understood you, she abandoned her daughter's twin brother who could have protected her for years."
"I guess you're right my snow-eyed hime. My sister really had nothing to do with any of it did she? It was all my mom's fault. Hmm, I wonder how they'll react to finding out I have six beautiful fiancées? Hey, Hina-chan…when are Karui and Yugito supposed to get here?" I asked thinking about my two fiancées from Kumo. After I had helped defeat the Akatsuki and bring back Yugito Nii back to life along with all the other jinchuriki, all the villages who had lost their jinchuriki wanted and alliance, and strangely enough Kumo wanted a marriage agreement with me and two of their ninjas. I didn't complain and both Yugito and Karui had volunteered for the job. And to think I thought Karui just wanted to kill me. But after that marriage deal was made I had to get at least three other fiancées and ended up with four more. Ino, Hinata, Ayame, and Anko became my fiancées…and to tell you the truth even after four years of knowing Anko she still scares the crap out of me. What was I thinking agreeing to marrying her…oh, that's right I was drunk as hell and got stuck since in my drunk state I signed the betrothal documents. Not my greatest night.
"Well, the letter Yugi-chan sent said August 16, and that's tomorrow. Also the house is ready for when they get here. And in three weeks you'll be married to six beautiful wives. Myself, Ino an interrogation apprentice, Anko Ino's boss, Ayame future owner of Ichiraku's, Yugito an ex-jinchuriki, and Karui a sword specialist. At least I know you won't be able to cheat since Yugito, Anko, and Karui all threatened to take your manhood if you ever did. Ino said she'd tell her dad who'd lock you inside your own mind with images of naked men. Ayame who said she'd cut you off from all ramen sources. And last but not least myself, who won't sleep with you ever again," Hinata said with a smirk that made Naruto cry anime tears.
My fiancées are all so mean, all those horrible threats against your fiancé, I'm doomed," I cried playfully. "Don't worry Hina-chan; I'd never cheat in a million years. I value your opinions too much to do that. Besides why would I want to? I'll have six beautiful if not scary wives. Well, I guess I better go."
With that I stood up and kissed Hinata on the lips and walked away. I needed to get some training done soon. Before I had defeated Madara I very rarely had time to train so I'd just find small amounts of time to take for myself since I couldn't spend hours training like I wanted, but now that he was gone I've been able to train non-stop. In the last three months I had managed to learn my dad's signature jutsu the Hirashin and create my own signature jutsu. I had discovered that while wind was my main elemental jutsu I could also do fire and earth fairly well. So I ended up creating what I like to call my Faia-Kaze-Tsuchi Maruyane Hitoya, where I would combine fire, wind, and earth together to create a giant sphere that would act as a prison in battle and keep the enemies trapped inside. And the best part if they did manage to find a way out the dome explodes and will take out a good 500 meters around it as soon as someone escapes it without me letting the jutsu down. It took me a while to find a way for it to explode without harming me since I had to be close to the dome to keep it up, but I did it and I won't tell you how yet. Even now thinking of the clones that perished to help me come up with that trick makes me shudder.
In the last few months I was even able to discover why Hinata had so much trouble with her families' taijutsu style. The Gentle Fist Style was an Earth based taijutsu while she was a Water based person. So with some simple changes she was ready to kick some Neji ass…. I loved watching that fight. Her dad finally told her she was worthy of being his heir and she plain out told him to kiss ass literally. She then told him she was leaving the Hyuugas to marry me and didn't plan to take over the family and that since she was the heir she found a loop-hole in the family laws that said if the heir stepped down he/she could choose their replacement and she than pissed off the Hyuuga Elders by naming Neji her replacement. When I saw her do that I started laughing my ass off at their expressions it so priceless. I'll never forget that day. I had even discovered a way to get rid of the Caged Bird Seal and had taken it off of all Branch Members.
I'll tell you though finding a way to take off the Caged Bird Seal was a lot easier than finding a way to take Orochimaru's Curse Seal. But I found a way. Something not even Pervy-Sage could do….and yes even if he's dead he's still a pervert. He was dead almost three months when it was discovered that before he went to find Pein that he had finished the last and in my personal opinion the smuttiest Icha-Icha book ever. His manager found it in his apartment and published it. If he was alive still he'd be in a lot of pain because I read it to see what the last one said after finding the Prophecy in one of them, and guess what I found. In the book he had described Ayame, Ino, Hinata, Anko, and several other Konoha girls I am close with naked. If Pervy-Sage was alive I'd be letting Anko and the other girls have some fun with him and I know for a fact it wouldn't be pretty or painless.
When I got to my house that I had inherited from my dad and had entered, I headed to the training ground. It was there I stayed for the next three hours training my ass off even though Anko would want to do that herself.
And there's chapter 3 which is now four chapters for my version of this story. With this complete I will finally continue work in chapter five of my other Naruto story by the way I wonder how many people would want to see a GOOD Danzo. Talk to you all when I post the next chapter for my other Naruto story bye.