Chapter three the Battle 4 the caln (Great, another chapter…)
thx jazzie-kun 4 th good review! (GOOD review? What dimension are we living in?) and stop flmaing the stroy!1 i bet u cant right such a good story!1!1 (No, we really can't, can we?)
StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw (Whom are apprentices before her) and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) waz slepping on the mos.
"JazzPaw get up." She cried (Crybaby Starpaw). JazzPaw opend her brlliaint blu eyes and looked at hr.
"Do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked.
"Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp.
But then, a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was BlackStar!1!11
"Shadowclan are attaking!" (One cat comes and suddenly all of Shadowclan are attacking. Seems legit) She yelled. All the cats came out from there dens. She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of. (Haha what a wimp, only one claw scares him off)
"Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was SandStrom. Your a good fihter!"
StarPaw was happy. She wus a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant. (How exactly does Stars getting rid of tiger and Holly refer to fighting?)
thnkx and ples no more flams (Okay, no more flams, but there might just be some more flames)
(Well thanks for reading this annoyingly hilarious story with me. Cheers!)
~Echo