ok im making a sequel I dont know what its going to be called ill try to think about that during AR tommorrow thats the only tim e i have time so... well it would help if u guys would help me improve my writing a bit a few tips and suggestuions for the sequel will be great but i will try to get the first chapter of the sequel posted somtime this week because i wont have as much time and ill try to make th sequel a whole lot longer and better! o and thx guys for the reviews i didnt think id get any on the first day!