The True Legendary Super Saiyan Chapter 4: The Next Level, a dragon ball z fanfic

Once again, I have yet another chapter. I'm not sure how long it's going to be, so be warned. I have taken the advice from all of you and have even had a few people story alerting this very story. I thank Tomboy 601 for the reply she/he gave for my plea for help on creating chapters, but I think I've finally gotten the hang of it now! ^_^

Anyway, I thank The Saiyan From Hyrule for requesting not to use quite so many exclamationmarks. And if we come to the end of the last chapter, this has to be when they go to the fair.............................................................................................................................................................. ; 0 D

PS: This is where a bit of AU comes in. PPS: I finished most of it at 5 in the morning, so I suggest the most important part is at the bottom, and the chapter may seem a bit unfinished.

Oh yeah: Disclaimer: Unfortunately the Disclaimer has gone on strike until I have proof I will never own DBZ or Goten.

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The Pukerama was holding a carriage containing around 20 passengers. Seconds before they were about to blast off, several of the passengers were laughing about how their "100% Guarantee You'll Puke" wouldn't work on them. The only child on the ride was sitting at the front. Most children weren't allowed on the Pukerama, as it was almost another guarantee they would wet themselves before the ride had reached top speed. This child, however, had a VIP ticket in hand (and an ice cream in another), and was placing it in his rucksack so it wouldn't fall into the crowd below whilst they were riding. He looked almost completely identical to his father, in the seat next to him. A loud beep came through the speaker, and the voice said for everyone to buckle up, as the ride was about to begin. Everyone obeyed, and the carriage was just beginning to rise up that steep hill they would set off from. It got higher and higher, the higher it got, the whiter the look on their faces. Until...

"AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

The ride was down the hill before you could say "I'm gonna puke!" It was moving at around 150 miles per hour before it reached another steep hill, and once they went down there...

People were struggling to keep their claims of never puking, and about five macho-looking men were puking at once. They were zooming downhill at around 250mph, still not top speed.

They thought the worst was over with. But it was only just starting...

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!"

They were going vertical down a 500 foot bar, and by now everyone had puked, except for the boy and his father, who were both laughing franctically, even though they had to duck to avoid oncoming puke. By now, they were heading towards an enormous loop, and finally reaching the top speed of 350mph. Forget children, ADULTS had S*** themselves by now! When they finally reached the 300 ft tall loop, everyone puked and screamed in unison. Except for the boy and his dad...

On the end of the ride, there was a massive crowd of people waiting to see if anyone had puked. The carriage had stopped, and everyone was turning to the first one to see if the boy had fainted...

"Stupid father shouldn't have let him on there," moaned an elderly lady. "He's probably 'ad an 'eart attack."

How shocked they must have been when everybody was covered in puke from head toe, except for the boy and his dad (who, remarkably, was covered in ice cream instead).

"Wow, Goten, you're not having ice cream on a rollercoaster again..." They both laughed loudly, and walked towards the checkout.

When the elderly people had noticed most people had pooped their pants (literally) they too started puking in the nearest bucket, but Goten and Goku walked out with a massive cuddley toy dinosaur for beating the 100% guarantee of puking.

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Goku had decided it would be easier to fly home and just carry the teddy, rather than calling a taxi, waiting for an hour, and being told they couldn't bring the dinosaur, as it would "ruin their look. So they went high up in the clouds where nobody would see them. Goku had a pink and brown stain on his shirt, and knew that he needed to clean it before Chi Chi noticed and shrank it in the wash. He then looked at his happy son, holding the Dinosaur, smilimg to the heavens. Goku wasn't sure, but he noticed Goten's life force power level had increased dramatically since he went in the Hyperbolic Time Chamber with Trunks....

"Goten, do you and your brother want to spar with me tomorrow? "

Goten looked at his father, gobsmacked. This would be a great time to see how strong Dad was, and how strong Gohan had become since his strange transformation...

"Yeah, dad! That would be brilliant!" They exchanged smiles and flew off into the sunset.

"Ka...me...ka...me...HA!" Goten thrusted his hands forward, as the ball of Ki changed into a beam of energy heading towards Gohan. But Gohan was prepared, as he bounced the beam towards his father's backside...

"YEEEEOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!" Goku flew around clutching his buttocks, screaming like a banshee, and finally made it to the coolness of the Lake. He jumped in and released his butt.

"Aaahhh..."

"That isn't how you do it, Goten." Gohan formed a ball shape with his hands. "Watch and learn. Ka...Me...Ha...Me..." As the ball of Ki formed in Gohan's hands, he winked at his younger brother. "HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"

Gohan thrusted HIS hands forward and the beam of energy hit Goten smack on the face. He fell down towards the river, and had a surprisingly hard landing...

"OOOOOOOW! THAT'S MY HEAD!"

Goten looked down to se that he was, indeed, sitting on his father's head. "Sorry dad, I'll be careful next time."

"Great, now why don't you get off?"

Goten hopped off his father's head and they all laughed. But then Goku decided to get more serious.

"Let's turn Super Saiyan, Goten, and see if we can beat Gohan!"

So sure enough, Goku and Goten both transformed into their Super Saiyan states. Gohan powered up, and his hair stood up a little extra as Goten sensed tremendous power emitting from him. This was what he had been waiting for, Gohan's true power. Gohan's white aura showed a glitch of gold, and Goten knew he was ready to fight. But poor Goten knew he wouldn't last five minutes against him, his Nii-chan (japanese for brother), but he knew it would do brilliant training.

"Kamehame...HA!" The blast emitted from Goten's hands, finally large enough to destroy a small house. This was his first non-mispronounced Kamehameha, and it flew for Gohan. Gohan didn't realise this until it was too late, and was knocked to the floor. Was he out? Maybey Goten had put too much power into the blast...

Seconds later, Gohan stood up and brushed himself off, hardly scratched. "You'll have to do better than that if you want to beat ME, Goten!" He then dashed towards Goku and they started one-on-one , Goten watched on the sidelines, taking in note that the two were seriously holding back. They possessed so much power, the ground was shaking over 10 miles away. Goten longed to join in, when he saw Goku jumping out of action, and charging until he changed. Into a Super Saiyan 2.

They carried on sparring, and Goku hopped out once again preparing for a final blast. "Ka...me...ha...me..." The ball in his hands was so large, it seemed only he could posess it. But then Goku must have realised the danger of the blast, as it disappeared as quickly as it came. And then, Goku had another change of mind.

"Hey, Goten! C'mon, you don't want to sit there all day whilst we have all the fun!"

Goten smiled happily as he dashed towards the fight, but then something in his mind snapped. He walked towards his father and said some of the most difficult words anyone had heard him say for over a year.

"Can I become a super saiyan 2?" (and I think you know what will come from Gohan's mouth next! XD)

Gohan gazed at him, awestruck. He wasn't sure how to explain this to Goten... "Well, it takes years of training to reach any level higher than Super Saiyan, er... I could only transform a few times, and I was ten, not seven!"

"And?" Goten then started charging up. He was at his full known power before long, but didn't stop there. I know it's there somewhere...

Gohan couldn't believe it. He wouldn't believe it. There was Goten, his seven-years-old brother, enveloped by blue lightning. A single hair was resting on his face, and his power level had gone up substantially. Goten was in the form he took years to meet. Goten was in the form Gohan could never achieve again, for his lack of training since Cell was destroyed. This brought back memories of when he found out Goten was a super saiyan...

"Hey, Nii-chan, since Mom's not here, can I turn into a super saiyan?" Goten looked at Gohan for a response, which he replied

"Well, Goten, it takes years of training to achieve that form. Me and Dad were training for two years for me to achieve that state, which I eventually did. Anyway, you're looking at the youngest super saiyan EVER here!"

When Gohan looked back at his brother, the shock stole him of words for ten seconds. Goten was standing there, in Super Saiyan form.

"Go...Goten... When did this happen?"

To which Goten replied, "I can't remember!"

Goku, however, was just smiling and letting the amazement fly by. Something told Gohan that THIS is what brought him into training with them.

Goten just smiled and looked at his brother. "I'm ready to train now...."

Sorry if literature isn't at its best, it's five on Sunday morning, and I need to get some sleep. But this has had as much thought put into as my brain could manage at that time, and I beg you, NO FLAMES!!! Any flames, and I'll brand you NEARLY as evil as my buddy, Darkwolf 3000, who as I said I did a one-shot with and appeared in her story Reversiology in the first chapter.