Hey plz, I am really sorry about chapter four, i was making a BIG mistake! I was triying to please everypony, because somepony had pm'd me with a a request to write it. I 'm really sorry i did. but don't woory! im going to fix this mess.. i may repost that chapter later, but not sure! i won't be updatiing for a week or so, because I won't be cble to get on my computer for whle. but im going to keep writing and ill have lots of stuff for you to read!
A shoutout to Aluwen for helping e in this decision!