AH! I have gotten so many reviews and so many kittypets that it's all so hard to keep up with! I'm trying to follow as many suggestions as possible, putting cats in clans u might have suggested and having mates and kits and…AH! It's been crazy. I've looked through here is I found a HUGE problem…I'll tell u at the bottom but I want to see if u can figure it out…

ThunderClan- (15)

Leader:

Applestar- pale ginger she-cat with bright green eyes, kind and thoughtful and has very good patience, she can be deadly if angered; young for a leader, but she uses all of her skill to lead her clan

Deputy:

Creamfur- long-haired cream she-cat with light brown legs, ears, tail and brown diamond on face; very independent, she can be a bit sharp at times and is very protective and motherly to all of the cats of her clan

Medicine Cat

Brookstripe- dakr and light brown she-cat with white belly; friendly most of the time but does have a mean, agressive side

Warriors:

Silverstripe- small silver tabby with pretty green eyes, very quiet and subdue; intelligent and kind but can get annoyed easily

Hazelfur- black she-cat; she is independent and stubborn, yet she listens very well

Firestorm- large marmalade cat with dark tabby stripes and green-yellow eyes; very lazy but friendly, sickly and sneezes a lot

Mousetail-long-haired gray she-cat with white belly, legs, muzzle and chest; loves attention but can be rather snotty and mean, attacks things just for fun

Cinderstripe- gray-brown tabby tom with white under belly and orange flecks, yellow eyes that are rimmed with blue; kind and loving and can be hyper and playful, weird fluff ball of purrs (sorry… I just had to put that! )

Apprentices:

Windpaw- big black and white tom with very long tail, very curious and always getting into trouble; he seems to always think about his stomach and can be very annoying; enjoys playing and wrestling

Blackpaw- black with cloud shaped patch, cocky and tries to act tough, funny and very caring

Duskpaw- dark brown tabby tom; he is very intelligent and listens to his mentors, anxious to become a warrior

Silentpaw- tabby she-cat; she is very quiet and kind of shy but she is keen to learn

Dawnpaw- dark brown tabby she-cat; she is very cautious and never one to leap headfirst into anything

Autumnpaw- white and orange tabby she-cat; very fast and very good hunter, slightly cocky at times

Smudgepaw- dark gray tom; he is a very good listener and picks up on things fast, he really pays attention to things that might go unnoticed otherwise

Queens:

Kits:

Elders:

FireClan- (15)

Leader:

Darkstar- black tom with bright green eyes; he can be dark and cruel and tends to like to be by himself; he is a strong leader and defends his clan loyally, but he is easily angered and has to be calmed by his deputy and medicine cat at times

Deputy:

Riversong- gray tabby with black tipped tail and blue eyes, loves to hunt and race through the forest; she is older than most warriors but still full of energy and a strong deputy

Medicine Cat:

Greenhaze- gray tabby she-cat with white belly and striking green eyes; loving but grumpy at times

Warriors:

Hawkshadow- black tom with white paws and white belly; he is friendly and a good stalker, but will fight when threatened, he seems to have a strange interest in hawks, having to stop whenever one passes over head

Blackfeather- lean black she-cat with white flecks and very long tail, green eyes; easily irritated and short tempered, can be loving when she feels like it and loves to hunt birds

Foxfur- big red tom with orange patches, large paws and golden eyes; gentle, loyal and loving, laid back

Shadeclaw- charcoal black with taunting eyes; docile cat and tends to not get along with his brother (Hawkshadow), hates dogs and badgers

Graycloud- gray she-cat with bright green eyes; loving and kind at one moment and then mean and arrogant the next

Mistleaf- white she-cat with orange and black patches; very self obsessed and cocky, bratty but lovable

Swiftheart- white she-cat with orange and black patches, eyes pale, misty color; never really grew up but rather playful and curious, enjoys talking

Apprentices:

Flamepaw- cinder colored pelt with gem-like green eyes; fun and very loving although at times he can be naught and get in trouble

Patchpaw- white tom with orange-red spots and amber eyes; he is playful at times but is mostly pretty lazy, oldest apprentice in FireClan

Dawnpaw- black she-cat with dark green eyes; lovey-dovey, doesnt really enjoy to fight and hates hurting other cats

Sootpaw- long haired white tom with dark gray tabby 'helmet', tail, and back, very small; energetic cat, very curious and playful and tends to be a handfull

Queens:

Kits:

Elders:

Gingerstripe- huge red tom with dark, dark red stripes, amber-gold eyes; very dignified and loving, sometimes active but usually laid back

WaterClan- (13)

Leader:

Dawnstar- pretty small tortoiseshell she-cat with white chin and sand colored paws, orange tipped tail; loves to be out patrolling and is good at fighting and completely loyal to her clan

Deputy:

Blackstrife- big black tom with cinder flecks in pelt, quiet and very protective; can be mean

Medicine Cat:

Oakflame- brown she-cat with black stripes and caramel belly with black spots; very sweet but also a short, dangerous temper

Warriors:

Whitepetal- long-haired white she-cat with black eyes; loves everyone but can become cranky at times: senior warrior

Lightgaze- white she-cat with black paws, black tipped ears and tail, pretty silver-blue eyes; kind, nice and helpful to her brother (Darkgaze) when fighting she is ruthless however and fierce

Darkgaze- black tom with white paws and white tipped ears and tail, foggy silver eyes (blind); very kind and nice to his sister, not much of a fighter or hunter bur will attempt to fight back is attacked; he sleeps in the warrior's den with his sister who he feels comfortable with rather than the elder's den

Dawnheart- pretty long-haired calico she-cat with gold eyes; kind and gentle

Apprentices:

Eclipsepaw- black tom with white forepaw and golden eyes, big for his age with broad shoulders; very outgoing and friendly but can be sarcastic, he is intelligent and stubborn, very determined

Smokepaw- dark gray tom with black stripes and yellow eyes; gentle and kind, somewhat of a coward but very loyal which tends to win over

Dewpaw- dark brown tabby with hazel eyes, white chin and small tufts of white fur on her ears with long, fluffy tail; very playful and hyper, constantly getting into things that she is not supposed to and breaking the rules; she can be calm during rare occasions

Cometpaw- silver-white with black paws and golden streak from nose to pelt, kind but fierce when fighting, very curious

Ivypaw- white and gray-brown tabby she-cat, stocky build and long legs; sharp and very independent, spunky at times

Queens:

Kits:

Elders:

If I got any cat wrong, wrong name, wrong rank, wrong clan, then just tell me and I can fix it. I will have to start giving out apprentices and trying to 'hook up' mates and I could use your help. I am going to put some together and whatever cats r involved, I will tell u if it is ur's and see if u like the pairing. I cant give every cat a mate and not every cat will have an apprentice but I will try to please everyone. i know that this is not perfect and not every cat has made it on here yet. this is just a rough draft...i wont be posting the next chappie for a little while (on account that i'm grounded :( but also cuz i need to sit down and redraw out everything) it has gottin out of hand a very confusing and so i'm going to fix it. i will however be checking my email (not grounded from that . ) so u can still do that.

Also, I have too many apprentices and I would prefer if u give me more warriors, queens, kits, and elders. I really need to fill these clans up with the right cats in the right ranks. I have enough med. cat apprentices and med. cats (thx to all that let their kitties become a medicine cat…I was really freaking out about that… :D ) I don't need any kittypets for the story or rouges…I already am having someone's help with that. Thx so much!

Have u spotted the problem with the clans? Well if not let me clue u in…there are four cats with the beginning of the name, Dawn- !!!!!!!!!!! not good cuz I love all of the names…2 is okay but I honestly cant have four…if ur cat happens to b one of them then plz check ur email. I will be sending u lists and lists of other names for u to choose from. I'm soooo srry that this has happened and I was afraid that it would. Its hard to remember what names I have given out… 2 dawns will be staying but I need 2 of them to change. Again I am so srry

Remember to check ur emails!!!! If ur cat is not posted then make sure that u have chosen a warrior's name for it from the email that I sent u. also check to see if I am doing any pairings with ur cat and if u have a cat that is a dawn look for a post of lists of names. I want to thank u all so much for the help and I could have never done this without u! .

Here is the form to fill out if u happen to have a kittypet ready to join warriors!

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