Allo peeps! Anyways, I was having some issues with the last chapter so now Cinderheart IS included and Cherrypaw and Molepaw have their original appearances and names back! (the OTHER Cherrypaw and Owlpaw will be included MUCH later in the story! Or, maybe even in the *SPOILER ALERT* sequel!)
Replies to my AMAZING Reviewers:
Silverwish of Windclan: I'm glad you think so! :D like is said, some of those characters annoy me to death so naturally I had to make some changes!
Vocal Flower: thx!
Annabelle: XD I'm glad you like it! Oh, and as for capitalizing 'Cliffside,' it auto corrected me to do that
Zoeboo61: I just have one thing to say… LOL!
Oblivionxiii: I'm SO happy you like it! I love your book!
DISCLAIMER: I do not own warriors! Erin Hunter does!
Chapter 3:
"FOXES! FOXES ARE ATTACKING THE CAMP!" A silver scrap shot out of the 'warriors' den and yowled commandingly, "Thunderclan warriors, to me!"
Without hesitation, two more patches of fur ran to her, "Shimmerstar, they took over the elder's den!"
The silver she-cat continued to shout orders, "Foxstorm!" the dark ginger and black she-cat stood attentively, "take Shadefang and drive them out of the elder's den! I will go get more warriors!"
The cats nodded and bolted away. 'Shimmerstar' bounded to the 'warriors' den, "everyone, everyone, help! Lilyclaw, Seedroar!"
"WHAT IN THE NAME OF STARCLAN IS GOING ON HERE?!" a powerful voice boomed across the clearing, causing everyone to become silent.
Shimmerkit crouched low and dipped her head down. Oh boy, she thought, here comes trouble.
"Shimmerkit, Foxkit, Shadekit! Come here at once!" the three nervous kits obediently crept forward up to their leader, "Now I have half a mind to delay your apprentice ceremonies! Just what were you trying to do? Scare us all out of our wits?"
The silver kit winced at Bramblestar's harsh words. But part of her knew that he would never delay their apprentice ceremonies, they were too short on apprentices already.
"We were just playing," she finally squeaked, "we didn't mean to scare everyone!"
Bramblestar narrowed his eyes, "and you also interrupted the sleep of my warriors! Starclan knows they need it!"
Shimmerkit crouched down lower. The Thunderclan leader let out an aggravated sigh, "I won't delay your ceremonies, but you are confined to the nursery unless you need to make dirt or get fresh-kill!"
Just then, the moonhigh patrol strode into the camp. Lionblaze and Cinderheart gaped as they saw their kits.
"ah!" Bramblestar purred, "just the cats I was looking for! The-" Cinderheart cut him off, "yes, I know. They planned a fox attack on the camp. I heard them plotting about it last night."
Shimmerkit felt her fur get hot. She had been positive that their mother hadn't heard!
Bramblestar looked a bit taken back, "well- er- I mean… good…" Lionblaze arched his back luxioriously, "well that's all done so can the warriors please go back to sleep?"
The leader shook his fur out, embarrassed, "of course," he turned to Cinderheart, "the kits are confined to the nursery for the next half moon. They may only come out if they need to go make dirt of get fresh kill."
Cinderheart nodded curtly, "let's go, little ones," she mewed, sweeping her tail around the kits, "you've had enough fun for one night!"
Spiderleg snorted with amusement as he watched the defiant kits being dragged into the nursery. It's hard to imagine that Shimmerkit is the same kit I rescued so many moons ago. Glancing one more time towards the nursery, Spiderleg stalked back to his nest and fell to sleep.
Wow guys… I cannot express my hate for this chapter with mere words… the bad thing is, I HAD to make it so everyone could see that the little silver kit that Spiderleg rescued was now Shimmerkit!