Hey guys thanks to those who commented I fixed those errors and now please read enjoy and review and any ideas you can think of I really am re writing this part but I have this story written well up to like chapter 20 maybe so any ideas for this would be great.
Nikita had been sick her heart was breaking. Violent shudders rippled through her body as she sobbed, Michael held her in his arms "we are going to get her out I promise you" he told her,he hated seeing her in this much pain he was already in an incredible amount from seeing Alex. "hey niki miky we are almost to the local I was able to trace both calls and the Video feed ...Nikita give em Hell for me"Birkoff said on com his voice thick with emotion. Nikita loaded her gun and seethed "oh I will". The van made a sudden stop. Michael and Nikita were thrown forward. "what the hell" they heard Birkoff say, there was a series of thuds Nikita raised her gun as the back of the van opened a masked man had a gun to Birkoff's head. " whoooa we don't want any trouble just let our friend go" Nikita said. The man turned his head "Nikita is that you?" Nikita gasped "Sean?" the man removed his mask and lowered his gun his eyes were red from crying. Nikita automatically knew that Sean knew about Alex. "oh Sean" she whisperd jumpping out and wrapping her arms around him he stood there stiff for a moment a tears falling down his face he suddenly gripped onto Nikita hugging her back "Nikita we godda find her please please I can't lose her too!" he cried Nikita sniffled and replied " we are on our way come on get it. Oh and this is Seymore Birkoff and you know Michale." Sean nodded and jumped in the van. They drove down the road Nikita briefed Sean on the plan. "okay we will split up here" she said pointintoo a map "Sean go with Michael and find the com room" Sean was going to protest but Michael placed a hand on his shoulder. "Okay we are here good luck bring her home guys" Birkoff said Nikita looked at Michael and Sean "let's go get our baby girl back"