Ok in a latest review I have gotten my story was called mediocre. This has led me to do something so crazy it just might work. I have been thinking about this for awhile so if it seems a little farfetched don't worry it will make sense. I am also sorry if my spelling and grammar are a little off. No flames just review! Oh and I do not own Veronica Mars Rob Thomas does. This is AU

Killer world

POV

This was all working out as planned. All Logan now had to do was go into the elevator and he would have them trapped. The papers would deem it as an accident. The security people would say they were on break. He had made sure that rescue dispatch and police were out. It had been so easy to trap them. It was almost comical that Veronica's downfall would be because she had taken the elevator after seeing the man she loved with someone else. There was one more thing she had to take care of. Veronica's father had a tracking device in his phone, if he were to track Veronica down, his plan might go up in smoke. Wait a minute there was a way to disable it. He typed something into the computer. There now my plan is nearly complete.

"Veronica" Logan said into the phone "Ronny are you there?" His question was met with shallow breaths. He had to get in there to get her out of there. Wait a minute there was a ventilation system! He went down into the basement. There had to be a way to cut off the carbon monoxide flowing into the elevator. He went over to the control panel and found out he could cut it off. After he did that, he opened the vent and started to crawl through.

It was dark in the vent but Logan didn't care. He had to get to Veronica. Even with the carbon monoxide stopped she had to get to the hospital. She could still die. He jumped out of the vent when he reached the elevator.

"Oh my god Veronica" he said and hugged her. She started to wake up.

"What is going on"? She asked groggily finding it hard to breath.

"Your going to be ok" Logan told her.

"Yeah but your not" she said all seriously with a hint of laughter in her eyes." At least when I get through with you your not going to be" and punched him in the arm. Not meanly though, it was more loving. "That was for lying to me". Logan just pulled her into another hug.

"I meant what I said, I still love you" Logan told her.

"I love you to" Veronica said "Even if you are a piece of lying scum" she joked with him. All was going well until Logan heard something.

"Do you hear that?" Logan asked

"Hear what" Veronica said groggily.

"It's a hissing noise" Logan began "It's the vents! The carbon monoxide is flowing again we have to get out of here!" He tried his cell phone. "Shit no service!" "I will have to go back and get some help". He hated leaving Veronica but it was the only way to get her out of there alive. He crawled back through the vent and gasped. Someone had put the bars back onto the vent and there was no way out.

Remember the faster you review the faster I write more. Oh and now that my plot bunnies have reawakened after my story was called mediocre, I wont need any more ideas. Just review!