Okay no real support for this, so I end it here.
A few notes:
My spelling is fine, I do see no problem with it and I use spell check. If it is not right, it is probably because you are not used to seeing Australian spelling, which is what I use.
I know my grammar may not be perfect but I try to improve and I do not know how I really can, not without any real example on how to fix it!
The official definition and the cultural definition of a celebrity depend on whom it is used by. My angle in the story was to point out that as far as the storyline goes he is not a celebrity as such of my purpose. It was to be that this would be a fun one where we made fun of pop culture and how things were but you have driven my passion from it; it had begun to show when I had, spoken of hooking up and relationship wise things.
I asked for constructive criticism! Please that would have been better. Please do not review just as a reply to my author note.
Seto Goes Celebrity
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"This is ridiculous I cannot do this!"
"What do you mean you can't do this?"
"Give up all the privacy I have left!"
"You aren't thinking of going back on your promise."
"It wasn't a promise! It was a deal and I am breaking from it."
"I would rather go back on this deal than give that up."
"You sure, Seto? It could be a huge mistake."
"I need a huge mansion to get the privacy I have now, there is no way I am going to risk needing more."
"C'mon Seto, you sure?"
"Yes, I just want to go home."
"Fine, but why?"
"One, I do not want to have to listen to an obnoxious blonde bimbo, who sleeps with every second guy just to be in some big important group. I do not want to die in a spyder car before I can retire; I do not want to be in so many relationships I have to buy a magazine to see who I am with at the moment!"
"Hey it is not like that!" Mokuba yelled to him.
"It so is!" Seto yelled silencing his brother knowing that he was right, as you all do know that is true.
THE SHORT ABRUPT ENDING