In the search for Menma

by D-gausser

If you came here, with the same whinning that Sasuke came with, then i have only one thing to say: I broke my bonds with everyone in Konoha, and that includes you. But... Should you ever want to play catch up... well, i could never refuse such an offer. / Road to Ninja based, MenmaHina AUNaruhina.

4. UPDATE: Chapters corrected!

So, i decided to re-read the fic.

Part of it because i just wanted to read it in english after having read it in Spanish a billion times, but also because i wanted to know what errors i had in them.

I thought i didn't had too many, i figured there wasn't much.

Honestly, i was shocked to see how many problems there were with the writing. Spelling errors, grammatic errors, LOTS of accidently skipped words, etc... Just ;_;

I couldn't believe it, and was terrified because i thought i had just, right there, lost readers. I'm sure many people don't notice because they read fast and their minds automatically corrects things(that's what happens to me), but some people read things slowly(sometimes too slowly, but that's not the point xD), and with those people, these kinds of things are noticable. Very noticable. And with the amount of problems i had, i wouldn't be surprised if many people gave up on the first chapter thinking it would suck because of the spelling, grammar and stuff(Even though they're not exclusive, shit fics are almost without exception writen with poor grammar, spelling, etc).

Lucky for those people, i'm a perfectionist. I like making things as good as they can.

And so, for the sake of everyone, i corrected every single mistake i could. I re-read everything carefully, and corrected everything along the way, including adding a FEW little new descriptions to make things a little clearer(it doesn't change anything, there are no new characters or plots or situations or anything with those new little descriptions, they're just there to make things a tiny bit clearer).

And so, i re-uploaded all and now you can see the new versions. Some people probably won't notice a lot of difference, as i said, some people read fast and the brain just automatically corrects things, but people who read slowly will be thankful for this.

And if you had already liked what was up so far and didn't noticed/mind a lot of those things, theres no real reason for you to re read them, so you don't have to do it if you don't want to(But if you want to that would be awesome XD)

Everyone else, i swear i'll try my hardest to make sure this doesn't happen anymore.