Aerith had already gotten a head start on the other girls as they ran from the hotel to the first district, where they would be safe. Yuffie was barely ahead of Akemi but, as they were heading out of the door to the first district, Akemi felt something tug on her ankle and she tripped. She hit hard on the stone walkway, and saw the heartless just before she blacked out again.
Author's Note:
I've been writing this non-stop, but I have many chapters in the works. Plus I am splitting my time with a fanfic for Series of Unfortunate Events. It all depends on my reviews, whether people like them or not. I also would greatly appreciate emails from people suggesting things.
Now, just because I ask for suggestions doesn't mean that I have no ideas for what will happen. I am on a pretty good roll right now. It also doesn't mean that you should get angry and flame me because I took a different approach.
Got any problems? Think I've stolen something of yours? Email me, though I assure you that Akemi is my character, I may have made her look somewhat like Sora, but her personality is from my mind. Chapter 5 is probably already in my document manager, and is just waiting for reviews.