Authoor's Note: Well welcome to part 4 which is now Chp.4. I really didn't want to do this BUT Del-Spooner (Deluxe Pooper) inisted me to do so. I was going through a lot of depression, sorry about that I'M a thousand times better now. TRUST ME I AM! :D I'm stuck on anti-depression medication, that nut-house did help me. I've got a lot of homework now, whew. I also lost 2 of my relatives, and one of them I was very close to. I found a girl I completely fell in love with is now gone from me. BIGGEST MISTAKE OF MY LIFE! (More yet to come .-.) What can I say, life is full of risk and I took one. I have to stop writing after part 5 is out, and that will be posted on this chapter. (DON'T WORRY I'LL BE HERE AND BACK TO WRITING THIS STORY AROUND SUMMER! OR I'LL BE BACK EARLY WHEN EVER I FEEL LIKE I'M READY!)
Back to the depression, it made writing this part very difficult but thankfully to Spooner and sky the white dragon helped me out which are NOW my co-author and Beta-reader. Spooner is Co-author and Sky is beta reader. Spooner was so mad at me for all my mistakes, he wants to "strangle" me now. (He's joking. **Whispers** I hope D:) I have a lot of Suprises for the new Chp.4, and the previous chp.4 which I really want to do is now chp.5 -_-. I will have to write a 'part 5' (Part 2) for this chp. cause this was so lonnnnngggggg.
I have part 5 written but will need major fixer-upper. (OHHHH SPOONER! JK! Spooner I promise to review and fix most of these apostrophes, and screw ups with their, there, and they're before having you review! I PROMISE! SCREW MY ASPERGERS!) ONE LAST THING PAY ATTENTION TO MY BIO. THAT WILL HELP YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT'S GOING ON WITH PROGRESS OF ANYTHING!
-Bambi and his son were walking away from the Lake, meanwhile Bambi was thinking, " How should I teach him a lesson. Scold him? No, that will make him hate me. What to do..."
-Lato was walking along side his Father's side, Lato stared at his father wondering what was on his mind.
-Lato thinks:" What does he have planned for me... I hope whatever it is, it won't be to bad... huh."
-Bambi talks (firmly): "Lato."
-Lato whines: "Yes F-father?"
-Bambi: "I just want to talk."
-Lato: "Talk about what!? I didn't even do anything wrong!"
-Lato mumbles: "I just didn't do want to go."
-Bambi: "Lato, their isn't a point in making excuses, when your told to do something by your Mother or I; you do it, understand?"
-Lato: "Understand what Dad!? I didn't want to go, this is a stupid idea; I don't get why I have to do this."
-Bambi was getting frustrated, he looks at his son right in the eye and yelled, "Lato enough! Ok! Everything you did back their was an excuse you pulled not to go. The words you spoke hurt your Mothers and mine own, feelings'."
-Lato mumbles: "Yeah, and I meant every word."
-Bambi:"And the reason you need to come with me is to learn what being a prince is all about." Bambi looked onwards walking a head of his son.
-Sometime went on and Bambi has been thinking of a test for his son. Bambi looked through the forest as he thought, he then spotted a small little pond with rocks sticking out on the surface.
-Bambi: "Hm. Could he jump across without making a splash... He could to easily." Bambi kept looking around until he noticed a challenge Lato needed.
-Bambi: "Ah-ha!"
-Bambi turned around: "Lato, this will be your first test. I want to see your physical ability."
-Lato:"What does Physical ability mean?
-Bambi lifted an eyebrow at his son, he knew Lato was pulling a game. Bambi got snarky, "It means I want to see how strong you are."
-Lato gulps: "Um.. then what am I doing?"
-Bambi tossed his head pointing his snout to a hill. Lato looked to the top, in his eyes the hill got further away from him. Lato stared at his Dad and got the idea of what his father wanted. Lato decided to look at the Hill again to see if his mind was playing a trick on him; his mind wasn't. The hill is very long, sharp rocks, and very steep.
-Bambi: "I want to you to try to climb to the top, or see how far you can make it up the hill."
-Lato walked in front of his father still looking at the hill. Lato faced his father and whined, "Please Dad, I don't want to do this."
-Bambi: "Huh Lato... Just go."
-Lato: "Yess sirrr..."
-Lato walked away from his Father slowly towards the hill. Lato looked back at his Dad, Bambi tossed his head signaling Lato to start climbing. Lato set his front left leg onto the the first rock. He began to climb slowly up, Lato kept going for awhile and struggled getting further. He made it to a point where the rock in front of him was out of step height, he would have to jump to make it to the rock's edge. Lato ready himself and leaped into the air, his front two legs made it but he slipped and fell on his butt.
-Lato looked back at his Father: "Dad! I can't go up any further."
-Bambi replies: "Lato! You gave it your all, come on down."
-Lato felt embarrassed, he ran down the hill and said, "That was dumb! I don't see the reason why I needed to do that." Lato walked away (angered) from his father.
-Bambi sigh's: "Huh."
Faline and Lila
-Faline was just finishing up her breakfast, she chewed up her last patch of grass and walked over to her daughter. Faline asked Lila, " Sweety, what do you want to do while your Father and brother are out today?"
-Lila faced her mother, (Lila's head was bent down.) Faline noticed her daughter looking upset.
-Faline: " Whats wrong honey?"
-Lila: "I don't want to see that Howler again." Lila sheds into tears, "Mommmeeey, last night was terrifying! I couldn't sleep... I thought... I thought" **sniffles**
-Faline:" Lila you didn't see what happened last night."
-Lila: "I did see some of it."
-Faline:"H-how did you?"
-Lila:" I faked not 'seeing' it Mother. I didn't want you guys to worry about me, i-it's to much for me to keep inside. I need to tell you." **sniffles**
-Faline thinks: "I need to know what she saw."
-Faline nuzzled Lila: "Their, their sweetie, everything will be alright. Now what did you see?"
-Lila:"I saw Rea all beaten and bitten up, she was... hurt... and bloody. I also saw The Howler ignore Ronno and drool for Rea."
-Faline: "Ooohhh Lila... poor little girl. Its alright, I promise."
-Lila whines: "No its not..."
-Faline stopped nuzzling Lila: "Lila, huh. I need to tell you something. Something I wasn't going to tell you until you were older, but assuming your Father already told you and your brother so much about Man... Well.. here it goes. Life is full of experiences, some are bad... but others are good. Very good darling. Look here's some good things Lila."
-Lila: "Where? I don't see anything."
-Faline smiles: "Us silly! We're all here for a reason, to take care of you. Rea is still here cause she's needed for her son, and Hali. Look around you, look how happy the forest is every mourning brings new hope and joys'; remember that everyday. Look at those young birds who are learning how to fly. The mother bird is spreading her wings teaching her two young ones. There she goes Lila, and look her younglings are flying to; see how happy they are?"
-Faline looked at the waterfall crashing, making its roaring sound as it hit the surface of the water below. "Lila, look at the waterfall and listen to it then follow me when you're ready. I won't go to far."
-Faline walked up the hill and Lila followed. Lila took her mother's advice and looked back at the hill. She stared and perked her ears to listen to the falls crashing on the rocks, and the clear, blue water beneath it.
-Lila: "Hmph. I guess this is a wonderful feeling."
Lila ran after her mother, disappearing with Faline into the forest.
Bambi and Lato
-Bambi and his son were heading to the South-West point of the forest; Bambi has been thinking of Lato's 'attitude' for sometime, "What is wrong with my son? He's been worse than usual. Hm, maybe last night is bugging him. Huh, I don't know anything anymore..."
-Within time both deer made it to the South-West point, Bambi noticed his son wasn't around him. Bambi looked around wondering where his son went off to. A sound from a bush behind Bambi was rustling, Bambi glimpsed at the bush. Lato came out and Bambi was relived his son was fine.
-Bambi shouts: "Lato come here."
-Lato walked towards his Father: "Yes Dad?"
-Bambi: "A Father's wisdom passed to his son. Well.. Now I do the same for you." Bambi smiles.
-Bambi closes his eyes:" Look around you Lato, see everything has a purpose in life."
-Lato wasn't listening, he was looking at the Meadow watching other Fawns and animals playing.
-Lato: "Hey Dad!"
-Bambi popped an eye open: :"Y-yes Lato?"
-Lato:" Why can't we get closer?"
-Bambi: "What do you mean?"
-Lato sighes: "Huhhhh.."
-Bambi thinks: "I don't understand him, what is he really feeling; boy how history repeats itself."
-Bambi didn't know what to do, so he gave up at the min to teach Lato. He did his job and listened for danger.
Roga
-For sometime Roga has been hiding away from home, his hiding spot was very special to him. He had a lot of good times here; what made this place special to Roga was that his Dad would take him here to train. Roga was remembering when it was just him, his Mother, and Father.
-Roga's thought: "This is so unfair, I'm their child; she isn't! Why is that runt living with us...?
Roga had multiple thoughts running through his head at once, and the next thing he said was, "I didn't get to have a say in this, they just say yes and let her into our den, our lives! Its not fair!"
-Roga thinks: "That runt just moves in, and my Mother loves her more than me already; this is so unfair!" Roga poured into tears, "wah-huh." **sniffles** "I mean for crying out loud it was so stupid of my Mother trying to save her life! She doesn't even know that stray!"
-Roga stopped his crying, he felt enraged and hatred growing inside him. "Grraaahh. Its' all that Runts fault!" Roga's body was twitching, his eyes tightened, and his pupils shrank. Roga's suppression was the only thing holding him back at the moment but his anger eventually broke through. Roga put his down and aimed his (small) antlers down, he was ready to ram anything in his way; he charged smashing through some bushes not doing to much damage to them and hit a tree.
-Roga: "Oooffff!"
-Roga accidentally stuck his antlers deep into the tree's bark, Roga put his fours legs onto the tree to push himself off. Roga started to push his antlers out little by little, until he succeed but rolling backwards.
-Roga whines: "Ouch that hurt..."
-Roga sat himself up, and shook his head.
-Roga thinks: "I don't want to go home just yet. I'll go see Lato."
-Roga took off through the bushes going deep into the forest.
Ronno's den
-Rea and Hali have been sleeping for sometime, as well for Ronno in his dark corner. Rea awakes, she got up and stretched her good legs before realizing Roga was missing. Rea limped over to Ronno; she nudged him and whispered into his ear, "Ronno... psst Honey wake up."
-Ronno raised his head; blinking his eyes: "What is it Dear?"
-Rea:" Where's Roga?"
-Ronno immeditley got up, searching around the room, he knew something wasn't right. "I know where he is."
-Rea's ears perked from sensing bad vibes, she knew Ronno was worried. "Go get him, hurry!"
-Ronno: "I will, stay here."
-Ronno ran outside, he stood by the den looking around to see if Roga came back or was coming back. He stood there for a moment and then ran off passing the small pond; he ran on a head to Roga's previous direction, shouting, "Roga!" Ronno was jumping every obstacle in his path. Ronno made it to the deer trail he made for him and his son to get to their training ground.
-Ronno made it to the training grounds, he looked around for his son (shouting): "Roga!... Roga!... Roga!"
-Ronno thinks:" I need to find him, I swear if the Howler... aahhhh!"
-Ronno smelt the air, he didn't pick any scent except for his son; he followed it taking off deep into the forest."
Faline and Lila
-Lila and Faline were walking through the forest meanwhile Lila was thinking, "I wonder where my mother is taking me, maybe I should ask her where we are going."
-Lila: "Mother?"
-Faline: "Yes Lila?"
-Lila:" Where are we going?"
-Faline smiles: "I know someone who you may find very enjoyable."
-Lila tilts her head:" Who is it?"
-Faline: You'll have to find out. We're almost there."
-Lila kept wondering were her mother was taking her, who she was taking her to. Lila gazed around the forest noticing their weren't many oak trees, a lot more pine trees were around this part of the forest; this was telling her she had never been to this side of the forest.
-Lila was disrupt from her astonishment by a stream she walked into, Lila stop to see what she had stepped in. After realizing what she was in she notice 3 catfish circling each other. Their was a big one, and two smaller ones.
-Lila thinks: "Mhm. A family, a mother and two young ones. They look happy, they're lucky they don't have to fear death."
-Faline shouts: "Lila! Come on, it's just over here."
-Faline grabbed the bushes infront of her with her mouth, she pulled back revealing a beautiful place with lushes green grass, pine trees in the center. The place also had a cave surround with rocks and grass mixed in. (The grass was on top of the rock, and rocks where underneath the soil.)
-Lila widened her eyes out of curiosity Lila asked, " Mother, what is this place?"
-Faline kept smiling: "This is my friend's home, she has a little girl just about your age. I thought you would like to meet her, and have a gal friend besides two males."
-Lila didn't mind for Lato and Roga's company, but she like the idea a little, "Alright Mom, I'll give it a try."
-Faline: "Good! I'm happy to hear you'll give her a chance. Now stay here, I'll see if they're home."
-Lila watched her mother walk out of the bushes cautiously, Faline was alerted looking every direction taking small steps getting closer to the cave.
-Faline (thinks): "I need to stay quiet, if the Howler is here... It already.." Faline shakes (side to side) her head, "got them."
-Faline was right beneath the cave. She walked up the hill and stared into the darkness of the cave,she couldn't smell, see, or hear anything. Faline called for her friend hoping she would get a reply. Faline heard hoof steps echoing throughout the cave, she readied herself to flee until a female adolescence walked out of the cave. The adolescence was just about the same size of Faline, she was a little off Faline's top; the Doe is also dark brown.
-Faline: "Whew."
-Lila noticed her mother chatting with the each other. Lila perked one of her ears to hear what the two doe's were saying.
-Faline: "Have you heard of the Howler Dear?"
-Adolescence doe: "Oh yes. Its a shame we have a new predator around. I wanted my little Fawn to have a peaceful life, besides man being in the forest. Worse as things are, things become worse."
-Faline nods her head, "Yes, yes. I know."
-Adolescence doe: "Are you alone Faline?"
-Faline: "Uh-no. I brought one of my children."
-Doe: "Which one? Is it your daughter or son? My little girl would play with either one."
-Faline: "My daughter. Bambi has taken my son out on patrol."
-The Doe smiles: "Aahh! So the Great Prince has taken the Young Prince out on patrol. Looks like the young prince will learn the ways of life, and survival within the forest."
-Faline thought how Bambi and Lato were getting along. Faline imagined her son making tons of disasters for her mate.
-Faline thinks: "Maybeee... this wasn't... a good idea, oh boy I'll be dealing with an angry mate and troubled son when I get home."
-The Doe (curiously) screams: "Faline!? Faline!?"
-Faline stepped back a little, shaking her head: "Heh! He-ha.. Sorry about that."
-Lucy: "Its alright sweetie; He-ha. You call your child and, I'll call mine."
-Faline turned around and begins to shout, "L-" before she could finish Lila came running out of the bushes arriving at her Mother's front legs.
-Faline smiles: "Maybe I shouldn't have let your Dad teach you how to in-height your senses."
-Lila (giggles): "He-ha."
-Faline: "Mhmmm."
-Faline: "Lila this is my friend Lucy."
-Lucy (Doe): Nice to meet you Lila, I heard you came over to meet my daughter."
-Lila: "Y-yes, I guess."
-Lucy smiles: "Mhm. Fawn come out here darling, we have visitors."
-A little light brown fawn came out of the the cave. Her eyes were barley opened, she yawned as she walked outside. The fawn twitches her head from the sunlight in her eyes. Lila notice she wasn't use to the light level yet. Lila determined the age of the young Fawn, she was a few weeks younger than herself.
-Fawn (speaks): "Yes Mama?"
-Lucy: "We have company."
-The Fawn walked up to the side of her mother; Lucy nuzzled the young Fawn, "Oh my young little Fawn, how are you doing this morning?"
-Fawn: "I'm doing fine Mama."
-Lucy: "That's great, and Fawn we have company."
-The Fawn looked at the older Doe (Faline), then at Lila.
-Lucy: "This is Faline, and her daughter Lila."
-The Fawn smiled and shouts: "Oh boy! A new friend."
-Fawn tackled Lila and both deer rolled down the hill; Lila got up and glared at Fawn, she was not pleased by the unexpected tackle.
-Fawn got up: "He-ha!"
-Faline and Lucy watched the young doe's playing it's made them really happy. Laughs: "mm-hm."
-Lila thinks: "Mmmmmm. My Mothers laughing... I guess it was just a joke... Huh.. Its not worth getting upset about.. I guess."
-Lucy crys out: "Fawn! Please stay near by! I don't want you out of my sight or scent."
-Fawn: "Yes Mama!"
-Faline shouts: "Lila you to."
-Lila: "Ok!"
-Lila and fawn walked away from the den, meanwhile Lila was thinking on a conversation to start with. (Lila) "What should I talk about... Well she is called Fawn a lot, maybe I should ask her why she's named Fawn. That's a good way to to start a conversation with her, I'll get to know her a little bit more."
-Lila was walking right beside Fawn, Lila stared at Fawn. Lila noticed Fawn's body language, she was nervous but dieing to play.
-Lila: "Fawn?"
-Fawn replies: "Yes?"
- Why did your mother name you Fawn?"
-Fawn: "Actually my name is Elaine."
-Lila: "That's a beautiful name... but why does your mother call you Fawn?"
-Elaine (Fawn): "Cause my Dad use to call me that."
-Lila saw Elaine was very upset: "Whats with the long face?"
-Elaine (Fawn): "He left us. He 'figured' it wasn't right for a buck to raise a child."
-Lila frowns: "I'... I'm sorry I asked."
-Elaine: " It's alright, you didn't know Lila. Huh... I-I don't want to talk about it anymore."
-Lila: "Alright then, I understand Elaine."
-Elaine: "Actually I prefer Fawn."
-Sometime past since the two last spoke, Elaine knew they were coming onto her favorite playing grounds. "Hey Lila!"
-Lila: "Yeah Fawn?"
-Elaine: "I want to show you my favorite playing spot."
-Lila: "Where is it?"
-Elaine: "Right here."
-Lila gazed at her surroundings, she saw how 'gold' everything looked through the rays of the sun glimmering through the trees. The water (lake) was shining gold, the grass was a beautiful shining yellow color.
-Lila: "I've never seen anything like this around the forest before. What is this place?"
-Elaine: "Somebody special to me told me that these kind of places are very rare to come by."
-Lila assumed it was Elaine's Father, but she didn't ask Elaine about it. Elaine watched waiting for Lila to gaze around the place some more, and when Lila did Elaine tackled her. Lila's playful side kicked in, and both deer pretend to fight like grown bucks.
Bambi, Lato, and Roga
-By the time Roga showed up noon was upon the forest. Roga noticed Bambi was walking towards him, Roga assumed Bambi was doing something with Lato. That meant to Roga Bambi wouldn't want him to interfere. Roga jumped into the bushes right as Bambi came walking by. Bambi peeked an eye out. He saw leaves scattered everywhere.
-Bambi's thought: "Hm, Must be a rabbit."
-Roga whispers: "Oh come on, he thought I was a rabbit. How disrespectful. I made those leaves scatter farther out than a rabbit could. Oh how do I hate rabbits, even if their not around me they haunt me."
-Roga perked his ears up:" What the? They stopped moving... whats going on?"
-Roga peeked his eyes out out of the bush a bit, he saw Bambi was standing still on top of a cliff with Lato next to his left legs.
-Bambi thinks: "What should I teach him?"
-Lato looked at his father, he could tell his Dad was thinking, but he couldn't tell what his thought was. Bambi just stood there, letting the wind breezing through his hair without flinching.
-Bambi: "Now Lato the senses..." (Voice gets quiet) Lato heard familiar voices from behind him. Lato turned around and saw his four best friends Jumper, Fluffy, Milly, and Topsy. The four of them seemed to be racing each other. Lato watched the four of them jumping from log into a bush screaming, " You can't beat me." "Yes I will!"
-Lato looked back his Dad, he was still talking, " When you get acquainted with your surroundings, you can feel..."
-Lato interrupts: "Dad!"
-Bambi: "Uh-what is it Lato?"
-Lato: "I-uh just saw my friends, and well... I want to know if I can go play with them?"
-Bambi thinks: "How should I tell him no? Yell at him? No he's already in trouble, and he'll think I hate him. Should I ignore him? No he'll ask it again. I need to be nice with him best I can."
-Bambi speaks: "Son. Please listen to me, you need to learn this; its for your safety and survival."
-Bambi then smirked: "Don't you want to be strong as your Father?"
-Lato just kept looking at the bushes tussling and his friends screaming: "You can't beat me!" (Sound fades away)
-Bambi sighed: "Huh."
-Bambi whines: "Lato."
-Lato: "O-k." Bambi went back to explaining the senses, "Alright."
Lato thinks: "I don't want to be a prince. Its just taking up my time to play with my friends, and whats the point anyways. The Howler could just kill them any minute."
-Lato heard his father talking: "As I was saying when you calm yourself, and become part of your surroundings; you can feel, hear, taste, and see them. Now let me teach you one sense at a time."
-Bambi walked forward, he closed his eyes: " Lato do what I do, and hear the forest."
-Lato's thought: "This is pointless, but might as well try." He glared at his Dad, and mutters, "Got nothing better to do."
-Lato stood up, sticking out his chest, and perked his ears. He heard a weird buzzing sound. He focused on where the sound was coming from. Lato opened his eyes, and gazed around, he focused back on the sound and heard it to his right above him. Lato dashed his eyes and found a bee hive above him. Lato looked at his Dad again, he was still talking.
-Bambi:"Now Lato."
-Lato looked back at the hive, something inside him wanted to mess with the bee's hive. Lato jumped up, he missed it. He tried again, and got a little further. Lato jumped again, he almost had it in his grasp. Lato jumped reaching the stem of the hive. Bambi felt vibrations through his hooves, he turned around and saw his son about to cut the stem of a bee hive.
-Bambi: "Lato! NO!"
-Lato finally cut it with his teeth. The hive fell hitting Bambi and slide off him; the hive hit the ground. A swarm of bees came out, pointing their stingers towards Bambi. Bambi was stunned, the only thing he moved was his throat with a gulp. The bees' stung Bambi on his lower back to his butt.
-Bambi closed his eyes from the pain and screams, "Ooooowww aaahhwhhoo."
-Lato: "Ha-ha-ha!"
-Roga: "Ow! Thats gotta hurt."
-Bambi opened up his eyes and saw stingers from his lower back to his butt. Bambi saw his son on his back laughing kicking his legs up and down.
-Bambi glares (screams): "Lato! This isn't funny!"
-Bambi growls: "Stay here! You're in so much trouble!" Bambi walked away limping on his back leg, "Ouch. Ouch. OUCH!"
-Bambi walked through the bushes near Roga. Roga jumped out of the way to avoid being stepped on. Bambi arrived in a short grassy area, surround by trees. The grass was shorter than usual, but Bambi didn't seem to notice. Bambi pulled the stingers out, "ouch! I can't tell if this is worse than the porcupine. At least no one can see me this time."
-Bambi was wrong, a shadowy figure of a male deer was in the shades of the trees. Bambi felt a presence around him, he looked around to find the presence.The male deer was surprised, he took a few steps back to ensure Bambi didn't see him.
-Shadow deer: "Heh. Good job; I'm proud of you.."
-The buck vanished into the forest. Bambi didn't feel the presence around him anymore but he kept looking around and still saw nothing.
- Bambi shook his head (side to side): " Huh, I'm just embarrassed; Don't worry no one can see me."
Author's Note: Ok, I know their are a lot of questions going on through your mind. Who's Shadow Deer? Why did you stop right here? What do you mean by how history repeats itself? I'll answer 2 of those questions (If anymore concern you plz send me a PM, I'll see if I can answer it, or give a hint.) Alright Shadow Deer Nope won't tell :)! Why did I stop here? Yet again it was very long. what do I mean by how history repeats itself? That was a tribute to Bambi and his Father of the mid-sequel Bambi II, when Bambi was asking his Dad to play with the the other deer.
DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN THAT PART OF THE MOVIE OR DO I INTEND TO CHANGE OR WHATEVER TO MINE OR WHOEVERS' LIKING! I DO NOT OWN ANY OF THE CHARACTER FROM .GREATMARTA'S FANFIC OR DISNEY MOVIES! (THE ONLY CHARACTERS I OWN IS ELAINE AND LUCY WHICH I MADE, AND THIS IS MY FANDOM OF GREATMARTA'S FANDOM.)
An apology, I'm sorry to people who don't like Lila seeing the Howler to Greatmarta's fanfic of chp.9 THAT was a HUGE MISTAKE ON ME AND MINE ONLY, part. Like I said I was depressed and I didn't want to change the whole story when I realized that; I did research on Greatmarta's fanfic. to edit that to wherever I could fit it. I'll see you guys soon.
Authors note: Wow I can't believe it! This is out, I thought it would never be released! I've got good news for everyone! I've got a new account, pm me for the link. I'll be writing on that for new stories where ever and when ever. Another thing is I figured out why I've got so many mistakes. It's cause I'm lazy. You see when I write I like to get done with iit instead of making sure it's ready. This better than the other ones I should say so myself, cause I made sure this time it was ok, not perfect but O.K. :) I did a lot on my own this time, and re-arranged sentences, cut ones out, or shorten them. I'm just lazy and want to rush my work. Sorry guys, I'll work on my patience skill better. ;)
PART 2
Lato andRoga
-Roga watched Bambi leave the area, he waited until Bambi was out of sight in the bushes. Roga then looked at Lato for the time being, Lato was sitting on a rock near the edge of the cliff staring into the sun. Roga looked at Lato's face, Lato was frowning, eyes down (covering up most of his pupils) and his ears lowered. Lato pouted as he stood up and walked off the rock. (Frowning.)
-Roga thinks: "Man he looks really down….." Roga squints, "Heh-ha. I should cheer him up, and I have just the idea!"
-Roga bent down on his four legs waiting for Lato to get closer. Lato came towards Roga's bush and Roga jumped onto Lato. Both deer rolled over and Roga pinned Lato to the ground.
-Lato winced: "Ooohh."
-Roga smirks: "Gotcha ya! He-he!" Roga walked back off of Lato.
-Lato stood up: "He..he. Hey… Roga, (**gulps**) how-hows it going?"
-Roga looks at the ground: "Not very well either."
-Lato: "Either? How l-long were you here?"
-Roga grins: "Um.. Yea! I saw everything."
-Lato frowns: "Oh… alright then..."
-Roga: "Listen man, if you want your Father to be pleased with you, you're going to need to show him…. some kind of skill!"
-Lato: "Skill?"
-Roga smilies: "Yea. Skill! You're going to need to amaze him."
-Lato: "What can I do? My Father hates me, and my Mother…. is mad with me.
-Roga grins, darting his eyes left and right: "He whispers, I know what you could do.
-Lato smiles: "What is it?"
-Roga: "Ok it is..."
-Roga was interrupted while Bambi came walking out of the bushes, looking back at the grassy plain. "I feel that presence again. Hhmmm. Its' not man or the Howler. I must be still paranoid."
-Roga ran and jumped into the bush: "Yikes!" He raised his ears to hear what was going on.
-Bambi turned his head towards his son: "Lato time to go. You're going home so your mother can deal with you."
-Lato gulps and thinks: "Not Mom..."
-Bambi started walking back to the den, Lato ran to catch up with his Dad. Roga ran through the bushes carefully, he didn't want Bambi to think he was a predator or know he was following them.
-Roga whispers: "Psst. Lato"
-Lato stopped and raised his right ear up leaning into the bush. "Yeah? What is it?"
-Roga: "Ok. Here's the plan."
-Bambi stopped, he heard a familiar voice that wasn't his son's. Bambi raised an eyebrow and shouts, "Come out Roga, I can hear you."
-Roga obliged and walked out slowly with a nervous smile: "He.. he, hi…." **gulp "Lato's Dad…."
-Bambi turns around: "Why are you here?"
-Roga: "Um…. ah.."
-Ronno walked out of the bushes behind Roga and Lato, "yes son why don't you tell us, I like to know as well."
-Roga's voiced squeaks: " Daaadd."
-Ronno grumbles: You're in a lot of trouble son."
-Bambi thinks (while Ronno talks.): "Huh… Look at this, Ronno's and my son, both introuble; this looks great on us males. Oh boy….. Faline will laugh at me…. Uggh,"
-Roga: "I'm… uhhh. Out here for…. uh. You see…. I left home for…. Uuuhh."
-Bambi looked up at the sky, it was evening. Bambi stared back at Ronno, Bambi could tell Ronno was getting fed up.
-Ronno growls: "Roga! I want an answer. Stop trying to make up a story."
-Bambi interrupts: "Ronno calm down. It's getting late, sundown is near and night will fall soon. Your son is getting a bit scared, just calm down and talk with him later."
-Ronno looked to the sky and knew he needed to go.
Ronno: "Roga. Lets go."
-Bambi: "Lato. Same here."
-Lato walked behind his Father, looking back at Roga. (Ears down.): "Bye Roga."
-Roga whimpers: "See you later Lato."
-Bambi: "Lato, it'll be sundown by the time we're home."
-Both families left into the tree's not able to see each other.
Faline, Lila, Lucy and Elaine
-Faline and Lucy caught up with each other lives, Faline checked the sky to see what time it was, she saw sundown was approaching.
-Faline: "Lucy, It's time for us to go. Sundown is here and you know…."
Lucy: "Oh it is almost sundown! Yes, yes. You need to go and get home safely."
-Lucy and Faline called their kids': "Fawn! Lila!"
-The two young doe's heard their mothers'.
-Lila: "Sorry Fawn, I need to go home."
-Elaine: "Race ya!" Fawn dashed into the bushes before Lila could get the chance.
-Lila" "Hey! No fair! Get back here!" Lila ran into the bushes.
-Lila sprinted after her, dodging branches and logs over the ground. Lila noticed Elaine was faster than her, but Elaine's endurance was a little weaker than her own; Elaine was slowing down.
-Lila thinks: "This is my chance!."
-Lila picked her speed up, it wasn't enough to out run Elaine, but she knew she could out run her.
Lila spotted a short cut, then she saw a low branch in front of her eyes. Lila squatted quickly and lunged herself over the branch, she caught up with Elaine. Both deer splashed through a creek heading onwards to the 'finish line'.
-Lila thinks: "Ok. We're almost there. Oh boy am I getting tired but so is she. Huh! A log! If I jump this right, I should..."
-Lila jumped over the log, hoping she wouldn't exhaust herself to much. Elaine saw in the corner of her that Lila found a shortcut. (Again.)
Elaine dashed herself to the left, jumping with Lila over the log. Lila successfully made it over and Elaine stumbled on top of the log; Lila took the lead. Elaine regained her balance and took off, she was catching up with Lila but slowing down to the same speed as Lila.
-Lila saw Elaine's cave, she knew she was about to win.
-Lila thinks: "On five, I need to jump! Five… four.. three.. two.. one!"
-Both doe's jumped out of the bushes and landed. Lila won by her two front legs.
-Lila jumped around, chanting: "Yes! I did it!"
-Elaine was panting heavily, she noticed Lila wasn't as tired as herself.
-Elaine: 'L-Lila. He-huh."
-Lila looked at Elaine: "Yea?"
-Elaine smiled: "Good game! Huu-hah!"
-Lila: "Thanks, you to."
-Faline smiles and walked over to her daughter: "Mhm. Looks like you two had a lot of fun."
-Lila nods her head up and down, "Yea! We did we had a…"
Elaine jumps in front of Lila: "A RACE!"
Lila glared at Elaine, Lila walked around her speaking to her Mother: "back to here."
Faline smiles (again): "I see, well it's time to go darling."
Lila: "Ok Mother."
Lila turned around:" Bye Fawn."
Elaine: "Bye Lila."
Lucy walked over to Faline asking her, "Hm the kids really like each other… You think we should let them see each other regularly?"
Faline: "Yes, sure."
Lucy: "How about tomorrow at the meadow?"
Faline: "The meadow? Uh.. I need to ask Bambi."
Elaine pranced screaming, "Yayyyy!"
Faline:"Well.. we need to be on our way."
Lucy: "We'll see you soon then I suppose."
Faline walks with Lila into the sunset and smirks, "Now Lila, tell me about this race."
Bambi and Lato
Bambi and Lato were walking home, with Bambi leading the way; since then Lato has been thinking of his actions. Lato watched the sun set and thought, "What should I do? My Father hates me." **sniffles** " Should I apologize? For what I didn't do anything." "Huh…"
Lato looked at his Father, Bambi looked angered, confused and upset all at once.
Lato stutters: "D-dad?"
Bambi looks behind him, replying with a deep tone, "Yes son?"
Lato took a deep breath in and let it out as he spoke, "I'm sorry…."
Bambi turns his head back, facing his front and sighes, "Son… I'm very displeased with your behavior. You don't listen to anyone, you hurt your mother's feelings and mine. You also laughed at me when you dumped a beehive on me. That hurt me when you laughed and it was humiliating."
Lato chuckles under his breath, "He-ha."
Bambi: "I don't understand why you don't want to learn something very unique."
Lato shouts: "Why do I have to?"
Bambi: "Because you're a prince. Someday you will protect and rule the forest." (While Bambi talked, Lato mocked him.)
Bambi thinks: "Maybe, but I should wait. They're both not ready. Yet.. Lila is closer."
Bambi speaks: Son, I love you.. just… huh. You need to stop acting up, I need to prepare you for survival and ruling the forest."
Lato thinks: "Blah blah blah blah! It's not fair, all he cares about is me becoming a Prince and ruling this place."
Bambi slightly tilts his head towards Lato's direction and frowns: "I'm sorry son…. you had to see such a terrifying thing last night… at such a very young age."
Lato stopped mocking his Father and thought, "Wow.. I thought he only cared about me ruling his forest…."
Bambi: "But! This is a another reason why you must learn these skills."
Lato: "Uggh."
Lato thinks: "Oops."
Bambi stopped, he turned facing his son: "What was that for?"
Lato took the oppurtunity to tell his Father what he thought, Uuhh..uh." **A-hem** "D-dad… I feel like all you care about is prince this and prince that.. You don't let me have any fun, you don't let me who I am."
Bambi thinks: "He's just a boy… He didn't say it really mean but I remeber how things were with my Father."
Bambi speaks: "Son. I'm just trying to teach you for your saftey."
Lato cries and screams, "I don't care!"
Lato whines: 'What if one of my friends were killed!?"
Bambi stutters: "Lato… I didn't mean.. I wasn't trying to…"
Lato screams: "You only care about your forest and not me!"
Bambi shouts: "Lato! Enough!"
Bambi softens his voice, "I try my best son to care for you and this forest, and your friends."
Bambi: "Lato… just.. walk in front of me. You really know how to hurt someone's feelings don't you."
Lato sniffled and walked in front of his Father with tears dripping down from his eyes. Sometime went on and both made it home, Faline walked out of the thicket seeing her son crying; Faline watched Lato walk by her with his eyes very wet and moist. She ran over to her mate to talk with him.
Lato walked inside the thicket, Lila was curled up and sleeping until her ears perked hearing her brother. She opened her eyes and slowly lifted her head.
Lila: "Lato are you ok?"
Lato glares at her for a moment, he didn't say a word to her and walked over to the corner of the thicket and laid down a lone.
Lila thinks: "Poor Lato…. I wonder what happened?"
Faline and Bambi
Faline: "Bambi what happened?"
Bambi walked by Faline slowly: "Lato is what happened."
Faline: "What do you mean?"
Bambi: "I don't know, I can't tell how I feel or how he feels. I'm angry with him for Today and yet, I feel so bad for him cause of last night."
Faline whispers: "Last night…" "Bambi."
Bambi: "Yes Faline?"
Faline: "Same with Lila."
Bambi: "That Howler is not just messing with my forest but with everyone's lives."
Faline: "Did anything happen after this mournings incident."
Bambi: "Yeah, he back talked more, insulted me for how I raise him, protecting this forest and he dropped a beehive on me."
Faline raises an eyebrow: "A beehive!?"
Bambi blushes: "He-ha…"
Faline smiles at him.
Bambi: "A-hem."
Faline walks up to her mate: "Should we punish him?"
Bambi: "No. He thinks we hate him, if we do that he'll hate us more. One of us should talk with him in the mourning. I'll-."
Faline interrupts: "I'll do it."
Bambi stares at her: "Well alright then."
Faline smirks at her mate, "Alright then… I'll go check on him."
Faline walked to den, she looked back: "Bambi! You coming in?"
Bambi: "Go on in, I'll be out here for a while."
Faline: "Ok!"
Faline walks through the bushes disappearing out of Bambi's sight. Faline checked on her son, she saw him sound asleep; Faline didn't bother him, she laid down beside him and wrapped him up in her pelt. Lila watched her mother wrapping him around her neck, Lila walked over and laid in between her mother and brother. Lila closed her eye, hoping that Lato will have a better day.
Ronno and Roga
Ronno and Roga were nearly home, nightfall had hit; the moon was 3 qts. full.
Ronno wondered: "Why did he leave home like this? How should I bring it up to him? So many questions!"
Ronno (talks): "Huh... Son. Why did you run off?"
Roga: "Cause. I don't like that new doe! She almost got my Mother killed."
Ronno: "Huh… Roga. I understand that, but that didn't give you a good reason to run off by yourself. Your Mother choose to save her, I wish she hadn't. But I must give her credit for her bravery."
Roga shouts: "You should have given her to the prince then!"
Ronno growls: "Roga watch your mouth."
Roga mumbles: " I don't care…"
Ronno: "Roggaa!"
Roga: "Uuh.. uh sorry Dad!"
Ronno: " You better be. Hali is acquainted with us now. It would be wrong to give her away so suddenly and quickly for nothing especially. I will worry for you only, and only her if I must."
Roga squinted and tossed his head to the right: "Oh alright."
Time went on and Ronno's den was in front of them. A howl was heard as they approached the den.
Howler: "Aaawwhooo!"
Ronno: "Roga! Run!"
The Howler jumped out of the bush right in front of Roga.
Roga shook: "Aaahhh! Dad!"
Ronno: "Roga get out of the way!"
Roga turned around and ran for it. The howler tried to jump on him but missed. Then Ronno game charging in hitting the Howler with his antlers into a tree. Roga safley made it into the den.
The Howler stood up on all fours, "Gggrr". The Howler jumped into the air landing on Ronno's back. The Howler dug his claws into Ronno, blood dripped out of Ronno's body.
Ronno: "Aaahhhh!"
The Howler bit his teeth into Ronno's neck, trying to squeeze to suffocate him to death. Ronno kicked his legs back and forth to loosen the howler's grip. The Howler's grip eventually loosened and Ronno threw his back forward throwing the Howler towards the ground.
The Howler was hungry and had enough of this fight, he was compleley feral and couldn't think for an apporiate move. All on his mind was food.
The Howler drooled: "Grrrr."
The Howler charged at Ronno, Ronno knew The Howler try to attempt the same move. Ronno lowered his antlers and charged, The Howler jumped but Ronno countered and got The Howler between his antlers and threw him. The Howler went a short distance and rolled after he hit the ground, he rolled into a boulder.
The Howler got up and snarked his jaws, "Gggrrrowww!"
Both animals walked slowly in circle staring each other in the eyes. Ronno noticed The Howler's wounds were all gone.
Ronno: "Hmm."
The Howler charged Ronno and swiped him in the face.
Ronno: "Aaahhh!"
Ronno couldn't see the wound but he had four claw marks under this left eye, he did notice the blood dripping from under his snout.
Ronno leaned his head down and lunged his body forward while swinging his antlers left and right; The Howler dodge each of Ronno's attacks. The Howler noticed something, he dashed to by Ronno; Ronno charged after The Howler.
The Howler jumped onto a rock, and pounced on Ronno's head. Ronno shook his head to weaken the Howler's grip. (Again.) Ronno threw his head to the right and tossed The Howler off into a tree branch.
The branch pierced right through The Howler's stomach region, Ronno stared for a moment at The Howler (struggling) bleeding to death.
The Howler whimpers: "Mmmmphhphhmph."
Ronno stared at the dieing Howler, he pity it, "I'm sorry, it was either me or you." Ronno walked away towards his Den.
Ronno walked inside, they saw Ronno's body figure in the moonlight. Rea and the other two fawns couldn't see Ronno's wounds, for they only had the moonlight.
Rea: "Ronno! Oh my gosh! Are you-"
Ronno: "I'm fine."
Hali walked over to Ronno, she was crying tears of joy to see her foster Father alive.
Hali whimpers: "Daddy."
Ronno walked away ignoring her. Hali ran in front of him whimpering, "Daddy."
Ronno: "Huh."
Ronno decided to nuzzle her, he didn't want to hurt her feelings.
Roga whines: "Dad! I'm so sorry,"
Ronno: "Roga, It's okay, I'm alright, everyone please go to sleep. The Howler's dead this time."
Rea and the fawns stared at Ronno as he laid down in a dark corner of the den. He looked soulless and didn't even look alright through them.
Rea thinks: "Oh poor Ronno…"
Author's Note: Oh no! How could you've done this! It was the predator! You runined the story! NO! I won't follow'read it anymore! Keep your panties and boxers on guys and gals. ;)
Chp.5... wloevs dnot hnut aonle
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