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Setting sun
Yuma looked at her pale 16 years old self in the reflective water of the pond. Her long black hair, pulled back into a high ponytail, fell lured over her shoulder and her bangs covered her black Ninja headband. She wore that green chunin vest, matching with her leaf green eyes, a red T-shirt and some navy blue shorts. Bandages were wrapped around her knees and elbows. Her hands were covered with blue fingerless gloves.
Since it was such a hot sumer day, she zipped her vest open and led the wind cool her wet clothes. Yuma looked back at the reflection and grinned. Looks nice.
Whatever...
She kept on walking and put her hands behind her head. It's so boring without any missions...
Maybe I should make some friends... haha, as if thats going to be easy. Yuma shook her head.
I got an idea! She taped her fist into her palm. Maybe I should train something...
But training, without partners wasn't really effective...
So Yuma woman decided to search herself a nice morsel meadow.
She had lain down on a huge hill with a great view of Konoha City and watched the beautiful sky for hours, not really noticing that the clouds had slowly taken a nice orange color. She smiled while closing her eyes. I really like those hours. When everything takes that nice … warm orange glow.
Fresh air filled her lungs and with that she wished the time would stop. Hey Yuma, you got no purpose at all, hu?
"Hey, you dead?"
Yuma opened her eyes, nearly getting a heart attack as blue ones stared right back at hers, only two centimeters away from her face.
"... No, I am not" and she pushed him away roughly.
"Back off, yerk..." Yuma sat up and looked confused at Naruto which had sat down and was looking at the setting sun. "Can I ask you something, Yuma?"
"Hm"
"How does it come that you're always alone... when I see you around?
"How the hell should I know?" Yuma took a deep breath, trying to control her temper. She looked down as she continued talking. "I only meet people while missions. It's like I am invisible after I leave the Hokage's office and before entering it."
"Hm" Naruto was still looking at the setting sun.
"You know I-" he began but got interrupted.
"You know what? I don't even want to know your story. It just doesn't interest me, you got it?! I don't need your pity!" she jumped up and Naruto frowned, his face darkened with anger. He got up too as she shouted "You know what?! Who are you to tell me how I feel?! Who do you think you are?! Just some bastard! A looser! I mean, look at you-"
"Now you went to far!" he waved his arm, clenched his fist and gnashed his teeth. "How should you EVER understand the meaning of friendship, if you don't EVEN CARE ABOUT YOUR TEAMMATES?! YOU KNOW WHAT?! YOU'RE HELPLESS! IF THERES NOTHING YOU BELIVE IN, YOUR FRUSTRATION IS GOING TO DESTROY YOU FROM WITHIN!"
Yuma stood there, with wide eyes and was speechless. He new more about how she'd feel as she'd ever expected.
Naruto grabbed her at the collar and whispered dangerously.
"I just can't stand people like you, they piss me off"
And than he turned his back at her, leaving Yuma and the setting sun alone.
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how this story develops.
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