Yes I know the chapters are short, but I'm just trying to get to grips on somethings. Short always leads to a climax. xD
Though will be trying to make it longer this time!
CHAPTER FOUR: THE SLAP OF A LIFETIME
Rose was talking to her mother, while the Doctor got on with more official business to do with Gallifrey, he was still in the room with them all though. Slowly listening to Jackie's bewildered responses to what Rose is proposing to her mother. He knew he would be getting a growling for suggesting that her daughter becomes a Time Lady to spend her days with Doctor, forever. Though she some how kind of liked the idea of Rose living forever. But she wasn't going to allow it anytime soon.
"Mum! Please! It's My life! It's now or never!" moaned Rose. Her voice was slightly high pitched. The Doctor looked up but continued to write in Gallifreyan on his report for the planet. He was not in the mood.
School was over for Logan and he ran in the room and jumped up on his Father. "Daddy! This guy pushed me in the mud" moaned his son. Rose looked at the sight.
"Push him back in the mud and then tell him he is a smelly boy too!" told the Doctor. Poking his tongue out at his boy.
"But that's not all! He said 'your the presidents son, your the presidents son' and I couldn't deny it. Now everyone is staring at me oddly and I lost a few friends because of it! But! They all forgave me for lying to them, my friends. But still, I feel sad," told Logan. He recieved a hug from his Dad.
"Well it's out now, you'll be a smart boy and deal with it," told the Doctor with his boy on his lap.
Jackie was next to him and slapped him, which made the Doctor's head collide with his son's.
"Oww! What was that for?" Moaned the Doctor. Holding his face. Now Logan was crying. "And look what you've done!"
"You are not making my daughter a Time Lord!" told Jackie.
"Technically the term for her would be Time Lady, last time I looked at her she was a girl," told the Doctor. Who was rubbing his son's face, ignoring the throbbing of his own cheeks.
"Daddy she is scary!" told Logan, through sobbing.
"Yup, Jackie Tyler scariest woman in the entire universe. Even more scarier than the Rani!" teased the Doctor. Jackie raised her hand and gave him one hell of a slap which made him yelp. Also collided with his son again. Rose had come over, Logan was crying again. "Want me to take your son Doctor while you fix your bleeding cheek..."
Paula had gone to do some shopping, The Doctor nodded. Logan looked at his dad with tears in his eyes. "Is she gonna slap me or you like she did?"
"No son, she's very nice," told the Doctor. Logan then crawled into Rose's arms. Rose realized he was quite light for a boy. She shrugged it off.
Jackie and the Doctor got into a massive argument fighting over who's choice is it to make. Jackie was adament that it was hers, and he was adament that it was Rose's. Pete evidently agreed with the Doctor. If Rose wanted to spend her life forever with the Doctor then she must change. Jackie buckled down, though without a bit more fight. The Doctor bounced on the balls of his feet. He was still shaken by the slap.
"That was one hell of a slap!" said the Doctor walking over to where Logan and Rose were sitting together.
"You'd make a good mother, you know." told the Doctor.
"Don't give her ideas Doctor!" screamed Jackie.
Review please! I hope this is longer than the last chapter, or both of the two put together.
I tried my hardest with this one.
