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With Jack still in his lap Riddick could smell her hair. "So Jackie where's your parents?"
"They died in an accident but that was my adopted parents. My birth parents where found in cryo. My mother was pregnent with me. I was born just fine but my parents never really woke up. After a couple of years they just flat lined." Jack just sat there with her head on his chest. "What about you?"
"I was found in a liquor store trash bin with my umbilical cord wrapped around my neck. Then I was pinned for murdering the closest woman to a mother to me."
Before Jack could ask more Riddicks head jerked up. "Someone's coming go hide."
John's comes into view, just as Jack hides behind a broken cryo-chamber.
"Finally found something worse than me, huh?"
"So here's the deal. You work without chains, without bit, and without shivs. You do what I say, when I say it."
"For what? The honor of going back to some asshole of a cell? Fuck you." But I can protect my Jackie girl.
"The truth is, I'm tired of chasing you."
"Are you saying you'd cut me loose?" Fat chance he will just go back on his word in the end. I'm just a pay day, but this gives me a better chance of also getting Jack out of here too. If he maneges to get me back in the slam I'll just break out and go back to my girl.
"I'm thinking you could have died in the crash."
"My recommendation: Do me. Don't take the chance that I'll get shiv happy on your wanna be ass."
"Ok".
"Ghost me, mother fucker. That's what I'd do to you." John finally snaps and fires the gun braking Riddicks restraints leaving them useless.
"I want you to remember this moment. The way it could have gone and didn't Here." John's held out Riddicks googles, but instead of going for them he grabbed the gun. Then pointed it at John's face "Take it easy."
"Fuck you!" Riddick heard Jack gasp.
"Do we have a deal?"
"I want you to remember this moment." Riddick could hear Jack sneaking out the back. He throw the gun down took his goggles and followed her sweet scent.
He finds her behind the cargo bay putting stuff in her backpack. "Why did you leave?" She didn't answer him.
"Jack. Why…"
"Answer this Riddick. Why did you provoke him? He could of just shot you?" Jack was pissed off at him. "We just found each other and you were just going to throw it all away."
He reached forward resting his hand on her cheak, wiping away her tears. "I wanted him to shot the restraints off of me making it so he can't use them on me again."
Her shoulders slumped, all the anger leaving her "please don't leave me." He pulles her in to a tight hug and kisses her head.
"If I ever leave you I'll always come back for you. I promise you."
After she was done putting all her stuff and some food rations in the backpack.
"Lets head back before anyone notices us gone." Both stood up and Jack started to follow him "You need to go that was. We can't let anyone know that we're soulmates John will oues you against me. So stick with the story that your a boy got it."
With a mocking salute "Yes sir" then turned on her heels to heas out the other side.