So the reason why I call them champion's is because when I was thinking about what to call them I was playing the legend of Zelda breath of the wild


Raymond's pov

me and Neptune went to tell histoire about Neptune making me planeptune's champion and let's just say that she wasn't to happy about it

"Neptune you made Raymond planeptune's champion he is too young and is nowhere near experience enough" histoire says in an angry voice

"I know Histy but I don't know anyone else that and I trust Ray, I think he will make a great champion in time"

"Neptune i don't think we have an enough time to train him we do however have time to find someone else and I know you trust Raymond but making him champion is a bad idea"

"Histy come on give him a chance

"I'm very much against this but fine I'll give him one month and I will test him and if he doesn't pass you have to fine a new champion"

"He will pass I'll make sure he will"

"do I have a say in this"

Both Neptune and histoire "no"

"Yeah ok good to know"

Well Neptune and histoire were taking I walk away for a moment and see Nepgear she asked what was going on I then tell her that Neptune make me planeptune's champion

"Goodness she did"

"Neptune said that she didn't know anyone else and that she trust me"

"I could see that i wouldn't want someone I didn't trust"

"Ray" Neptune called my name

Me and Nepgear walk to where Neptune and histoire were taking only to see Neptune was alone

"Hey Neptune where did histoire go"

"She went out anyways Ray let's go nep'jr you could help too

"Okay sis"

"where are we going?" I say

"The training room" Neptune says

I don't have a good feeling about this" I said

Me, Neptune and Nepgear enter the training room

"Ok we're here Ray now I want you to have a little match with Nepgear

"that doesn't sound to bad"

"Nepgear I want you to go all out"

"ok now it sounds bad"

"Neptune are you sure about this I don't want to hurt him"

"It's fine Nepgear it's only to see how long he will last against you"

I whisper to myself "I'm so going to get my ass kicked"

Me and Nepgear summon our weapons

"let's do this fight" Neptune says

I run at Nepgear as fast as I can and try to get a hit in But she dodged she then attacked me I blocked the first hit but the rest of the attacks hit me and I went down

a hour later

I woke up with my body in pain I looked around to see that I was in the living room and saw Neptune and Nepgear looking at me

"Oh Ray you finally woke up" Neptune says

Nepgear came up to me and said "I'm so sorry Raymond i didn't mean to hurt you

"I know you didn't Nepgear

"Ray came on let's do a quest

"Look Neptune I know that you want me to become planeptune's champion and this is a part of my training but can you give me a minute. I just got my butt kicked

"sure thing Ray"

a little later

me, Neptune and Nepgear go to the guild and get a quest to kill 15 bit's

"Ok so where do we find bit's?"

"We can find them in the Station area Raymond"

"Well let's get going"

Station area

"Ok we're here let's go kick some bit" Neptune says

We walked around little bit until we saw a couple of Bit's

"There they are let's go get them" I say

"Wait Ray I need to tell you something"

"Yes Neptune"

"Well you see Ray you're going to fight the bit's alone

I sigh then say "if I'm doing this alone than why are you and Nepgear here"

"One you needed us to get here and two if you're having to much trouble me and Nepgear well help you"

"That is good to know and I'll try my best" I walk away from Neptune and Nepgear and go to where the bit's are at

"Neptune are you sure about this shouldn't we help him"

"I want to Nepgear but Histy only give him a month before she puts him through some kind of test and I need to make sure that he will pass the test" Neptune says

"Neptune why did you want Raymond to be planeptune's champion anyway"

"well yesterday everyone was taking about the champion's and I was asked if I found someone and kind of said Ray's name but I thought about it. I don't want him to be alone he seems like he has been through a lot and he doesn't have any family I'm worried that when he thinks he is ready he will just leave and get himself hurt or killed"

"I didn't know you cared about Raymond like that Neptune"

"What Nepgear It's not like that it's just he has nobody to look after him and if he becomes planeptune's champion he will have me, you and our friends to look after him"

"Oh I see"

"HEY I'M DONE HERE LET'S GO FIND MORE"

"Come on Nepgear let's get going"

1 minute later

"look there more of them"

I ran at one of the bit's and kill it in one hit another one tried to attack me but I was able to dodge and counter attack one of them tried to attack form behind but I quickly turned around kicking it away from me i turn back and finish the one I had already attacked I then finished the one I kicked

I look back at Neptune and Nepgear and say "how did I do"

"I think You did pretty good Raymond"

"You did better than you did least time with the dogoo's Ray"

"thank you Nepgear and Neptune I had a feeling that you were going to say something like that be the way what were you too talking about little bit ago

"Oh nothing just a little sister chat" Neptune says

"Oh ok then let's find more bit's"

After awhile we find more bit's and it didn't take me to long to finish them, we return to the guild and turn in the quest we then when back to the basilicom

"Ray Wait"

"Yes Neptune"

"I just got a idea"

"Something tells me that I'm not going to like your idea"

"Hey don't be like that Ray I think this will be good for you in the long run"

"Ok what is it"

"Well Ray instead of taking the elevator up I'm going to have you take the stairs"

"Don't you think that's a bit much Neptune"

"He's gonna be fine Nepgear don't worry"

"ok Neptune one You're crazy two what makes you think that I won't just wait awhile then take the elevator"

"Oh Ray that's because you're also going to carry me on your back"

"So what you're telling is that I'm going to have to walk up a lot of stairs and I also have to carry you"

"Yep"

"do I have a say in this"

*nope"

"Of course I don't fine get on"

"I didn't think that you would give up that easy well anyways jump"

"hey Don't just jump on me like that"

"sorry"

"Whatever at least you're pretty light"

"I'll see you later Nepgear"

"Don't hurt yourself"

"I'll try not to"

After awhile of walking up some stairs

"hey Neptune"

"Yes Ray

I forgot to ask but how long was my fight against Nepgear"

"5 seconds"

"well i didn't last long. Neptune Why Are you making me do all of this and why make me the champion when there is much better options"

"it's because I trust you Ray"

"I know that there is more to it than just that"

"Well Ray to tell you the truth I don't want you to go. you will have nobody to look after you what if you get hurt or worse nobody will be able to help you but this way you will have friends to look after you"

"I-I see so you're just worried about me. thank you Neptune it means a lot"

"No problem Ray anyways I think I'm going to take a nap now

"Ok Neptune"

Neptune fell asleep I stopped and through about using the elevator now that she is asleep but I also thought about what she said i sigh then I started to walk up the stairs again

By the time I made it to the top of the stairs my legs were killing me and I was out of breath

"Nep-Neptune wake up"

Neptune opened her eyes "what's the matter Ray"

"We're at the top so please get off of me"

"Oh sure thing"

"Thank you"

After almost dying me and Neptune make it to the living room I sit down and see Nepgear and ask her "Nepgear can you get Me some water please"

"Of course I'll get it for you"

"You know Ray you're going to have to do that everyday"

"what I'm going to die if I do that again"

no you won't besides what doesn't kill you makes you stronger"

"Here you go Raymond"

"Thanks Nepgear"

I drink my water and got up "I'm gonna go to sleep for a little awhile can one of you wake me up when dinner is ready"

"Sure thing Ray"

I walk to my room and as soon as I hit my bed I fell asleep


with Neptune

"Neptune don't you think that you should go a little easy on Raymond"

"I want to Nepgear but if I know Histy she will make the test hard" but once the test is over I'll go a little more easy on him"

"Alright Neptune i'll see you later I need to start making a watch for Raymond"

"why are you making a watch for Ray?"

"well you see Raymond can't see his own HP, stats and level so I'm making the watch so he can see them

"What I didn't know this but anyways you should probably start making that for him because he is going need it"

Nepgear leaves the room

the front door opened

"Hey nep-nep

"Compa it's so nice to see you by the way where iffy

"Iffy is talking to Histy right now but she should be here soon oh I almost forgot but where is Ray-Ray I wanted to make sure he's ok

"His sleeping right now

"Ok I'll wait till he wakes up and Nep-Nep why is Histy mad at you"

"She is mad at me because I made Ray planeptune's champion

"Planeptune's champion?"

"that's right you don't know well to put it easy the champion is going to help The CPU

"Nep-Nep why doesn't Histy want Ray-Ray to be planeptune's champion"

"because he doesn't have the experience for the job

"Nep, Compa"

"Hey Iffy long time no see" Neptune says

"Yeah sorry about that but I had a lot to do and by the way why would you pick someone who has no experience to be the champion"

"I'll tell you later once this chapter is over iffy"

"okay fine but where is he"

"asleep"

"And why is he asleep"

"I kinda over worked him"

"How did you do that"

well we did a quest and made him do all the work I also made him walk up the stairs here with me on his back"

"Why would you make him do that"

"It's for his training Histy is going test him and I need him to be ready for the worst"

"Well anyway where Is gear at"

"Oh she is making something for Ray"

"I'm going to talk with gear for awhile so I'll see you later"


some time later Raymond's pov

"Ray wake up"

I got up and saw Neptune "oh hi Neptune is dinner ready"

"Yep it is"

I follow Neptune to the dining room and I saw Nepgear, histoire, Compa and someone who I haven't seen before

"So you must be Raymond you're a lot younger than I thought you would be " the girl I haven't seen before says

"I get that a lot anyways you're one of Neptune's friends right"

"good guess and my name is IF the wind-walker of Gamindustri!"

"Well IF with to you do for a living"

"I'm working for the Guild

"I actually was going to work for the Guild once I got better with a sword but the whole Neptune making me planeptune's champion happened"

"Well whatever the reason nep must trust you a lot for her to just make you the champion"

"I don't know why she has so much trust in me we have only known each other for a week I but if she has trust in me then I do the best I can for her

"Uh Ray that's nice of you do say but you do know that I'm right here and that everyone is looking at you"

It was at this moment I knew I fucked up "I-I knew that it's just that"

"you forgot that she was here didn't you" IF says

"I j-just kinda forgot she was here at the moment"

"But how she was the one who woke you up"

" I know but sometimes I just forgot because I'm taking to someone else my mom had this problem too"

"That doesn't really explain it but if we keep taking the food is going to get cold so let's drop it for now"

We all began to eat there was a lot of talking but I noticed that histoire and Neptune would not talk to each other after we were done eating everyone was doing there own thing I went to where histoire was at

"Hey histoire can we talk"

"Of course Raymond what do you wish to talk about"

I wanted to talk about the champion thing"

"I see go on"

"Well I know that you don't want me to be planeptune's champion and that you're mad at Neptune because she picked me but Neptune when I was hurt she talked to me and I told her about my past she only wants me to be the champion because she is worried about me. because she thinks that when I'm ready to leave that I will get myself hurt or killed and nobody will be able to help me so please don't be mad at Neptune

Histoire give me a smile then said "I understand Raymond but I think there may be another reason why Neptune picked you"

"You do?"

"Yes Raymond I think Neptune picked you to become planeptune's champion because you have a kind heart"

"Y-You really think so"

"Yes Raymond I do"

"Thank you and I'll try my best to be a good champion I promise"

"I know you will Raymond now if you don't mind I'm going to talk with Neptune

"I don't mind at all"

and with that histoire went to find Neptune. Me however with to find IF

"there you're IF i wanted to ask you something"

Without even looking at me she said "No"

"But you didn't even know what I was going to say"

"Fine let's hear it"

"I wanted to ask you if you can help me with my training"

"Oh sure I thought you were going to ask me something else"

"wait What did you think I was going to say?"

"I thought that you were going to ask me out"

"Wh-What I wasn't going to ask you out I mean we just meet not to long ago what kind of person do you think I'm?"

"I don't know it's just most of the time when a guy wants to ask me something it's usually to ask me out"

How about we forgot this and go to the training room"

"Sure why not"

the training room

"ok let's began

IF rushed at me with attacks I blocked a few of the attacks she then used some kind of fire move on me I then fall to the ground in pain

"OW it hurts more than I thought it would"

"Are you ok Raymond i might have over did it"

"I could be better by the why what was that fire move you did to me

"We should probably get you to Compa but if you must know That was fire magic"

"Fire magic can you teach me it"

"Maybe later" but right now let's go to compa"

It didn't take long to find Compa but she wasn't happy about me getting hurt again but she was worried about me

"Iffy you should have went easy on Ray-Ray"

"I know but i thought he would be a little better

"you know IF I could have told you I'm not very good

"That's no excuse iffy and Ray-Ray you should try to be more careful"

"I can't make any promises but I'll try"

"Well i should be going see you later Compa, Raymond"

I'm going to go to Ray-Ray remember try to be careful"

I will bye Compa"

It was getting late I thought about going to bed but before that I thought I'll go see what Neptune is doing

I find Neptune in the living room playing a game

"what game you playing Neptune

Neptune stop what she was playing and jumped at me giving me a hug I was a bit surprised at it and my face was probably a little red but I could tell she was happy about something and I think I know what it is

"Ray I have good news Histy said that you don't have to take the test and she's ok with you becoming planeptune's champion now but you do have to keep training" she then looked at me and noticed that I was little beat up "Ray what happened to you?"

"well I asked IF if she could help me with training let's just say I got butt kicked"

"I'll go a little more easy with you for now on ok"

"That's good to know anyhow I'm gonna go to bed now"

"Wait Ray before you do go to bed do you want to play a game with me"

"Sure but not for long"

After playing a game with Neptune i went to bed and through about how my training and about what Neptune told me before i fall asleep


I would like to think that I'm getting better at this except for the fights i still suck at them but anyways I hope you liked this chapter