A/N:
Before I say anything else, I would just like to apologize to everyone that I did not update this story yesterday (Friday). I was ill in bed and, therefore, could not write up Chapter 4. In fact, I'm still a little ill right now but I didn't want to keep you guys waiting. (Always thinking of you guys out there)
Thank you for subscribing/favouring/and reviewing this story so far! It means a lot to me! :)
EXPLANATION ON CHARACTERS ACTING "OUT OF CHARACTER:
OK, So I received a lot of reviews for Chapter 3 and some of the reviews said that some of the characters are "acting out of character". I will explain why the characters "seem" out of character in this story:
So, remember I said that "The Chipmunks and The Chipettes are sixteen years old in this fanfic story" right? (Go back and check) Well, as teenagers (Which I'm guessing most of you are) you learn a lot of interesting things; it is the time of life where you start to "mature" As both The Chipmunks and The Chipettes have grown over the years, maturing (and immaturing) is what they have done. They have learnt a lot of naughty words and such. I mean, you cannot tell me you have not sweared at least once in your life?? (If you have a religion, I can understand why you haven't) All teenagers, will at once, swear and The Chipmunks and The Chipettes have done so already.
Now the reason Theodore was saying mean things to Alvin and "swearing" at least once to his brother was because he was trying to express to Alvin how angry he is at him. I mean, that exam meant everything to Theodore; it was the one subject he thought he would pass with flying colors but, unfortunately, Alvin had to spoil that for him. What catering college will let Theodore join them, now? Overall, Theodore was just expressing how angry he was at Alvin. (Would you forgive a person that messed up your dreams?) Deep down, Theodore is very, very upset with his brother...
Simon also has a very good reason for "punching" Alvin. You all know that Alvin and Simon were always arguing with each other when they were, like, ten years old. Over the years, that "arguing" has grown (Even though Theodore has tried countless of times to stop his two brothers for arguing) over the years and has developed into "physical" arguing and fighting. Just like Theodore, Simon was expressing how angry he was with Alvin (But in a different way than Theodore). Again, Alvin had ruined a dream from his brother's (Simon). That one assignment (that Alvin had rubbed out Simon's name and replaced with his own) had cost Simon a place onto a high, educated college. Where will he got to study now? And Simon swearing; He learnt to swear just like all the other teenagers who learn to swear.
You may think there isn't a big difference to the way Theodore and Simon treated Alvin; But, I can tell you, there are. Theodore used "spoken" abuse towards Alvin (Not that it was his intention to hurt Alvin; just expressing how he was feeling) and Simon used "physical" abuse (I have a feeling, it was Simon's intention to hurt Alvin. LOL) I think it would have been out of character if Theodore had started beating Alvin up, don't you?
And Alvin and Brittany shouting abuse at each other; they don't mean any of it!! Their just hiding their true feelings from each other and their just expressing how their feeling to each other (By "how their feeling" I mean, how angry their feeling) Alvin and Brittany have been arguing (and hiding feelings) from each other since they were ten years old so, I don't see how that could be "Out of character" The only difference is that their swearing and saying really mean things to each other.
Another reason why they "seem" out of character is because a lot of people aren't used to The Chipmunks and The Chipettes swearing and saying certain things to each other. I can't blame any of you if you feel like that.
I hope you take all this into account when you read the rest of the story. Thank you for reading this! :)
-END OF EXPLANATION-
Sorry for the longness of the explanation!
Disclaimer: I do not own Alvin Seville, Simon Seville, Theodore Seville, Brittany Miller, Jeanette Miller, Eleanor Miller, David Seville, Miss Miller, Principal Milliken or any of the character in this story (Unless they are created by myself which I will say here) These characters belong to Ross Bagdasarian Jr.
Sorry for any spelling or grammar mistakes!
To All Minors: Do not read this if you are under the age of thirteen years of age!
I have nothing else to say than: To enjoy! :)
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His lost something
It's the most precious thing in the world
It's a thing that should last till the end of ends
It's his friends.....
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Jeanette and Eleanor were waiting patiently for their sister to join them at the school's gates. They could see Alvin at the school steps, outside the entrance doors to the school; obviously, he waiting for his brother's, Simon and Theodore.
"I can't believe him!" Eleanor exclaimed, angrily. She was eyeing Alvin with a glare from the gates. Jeanette looked at her sister and nodded.
"I know" Jeanette said, agreeing to what her sister had just said. "How could he push Brittany over? Why did he do that?" Eleanor turned from Alvin to look at her sister.
"No!" Eleanor said loudly.
"What?" Jeanette asked, confused.
"I'm not talking about Alvin pushing Brittany over!" Eleanor said in an annoyed tone. "I'm talking about what Alvin did to poor Theodore!"
"Oh" Jeanette said, not understanding completely. She didn't even know what had happened between Alvin and Theodore. What was up with Alvin today? "Well, what happened?"
Eleanor growled under her breathe.
"That prick of a chipmunk, Alvin, ruined Theodore's cookery examination!" Jeanette could tell that Eleanor was furious. And why shouldn't she be?, Jeanette thought. Eleanor was Theodore's best friend.....she was thinking for him.....she cared for him.
"How?" Jeanette questioned. "What did he do?"
"While both Theodore and his thickhead brother, Alvin, were working together for the examination, Alvin had passed Theodore the wrong ingredient and had ruined Theodore's chance of passing!" Every time Eleanor said "Alvin", she said it as if it was a disgusting dieses.
"You saw the whole thing while you were taking the cookery examination?" Jeanette asked, feeling sorry for Theodore.....and angrier towards Alvin.
"Yup!" Eleanor replied, fists clenched. "I comforted Theodore after the examination was over. He went to the boy's room to clean off all the gunk in his hair, afterwards"
"What gunk?" Jeanette asked with one eyebrow raised.
"Alvin poured all of Theodore's soufflé mixture onto his head!" Eleanor said with an angry expression. "The asshole!"
"Oh my god" Jeanette couldn't believe Alvin had done that! What an idiot! "Poor Theodore. I hope his OK"
"Me too" Eleanor agreed "Cause if he isn't OK, I'm gonna kill Alvin and I don't care what Brittany says!"
Jeanette sighed.
"I won't stop you either, Ellie" Jeanette said to her angry sister.
Eleanor was a little bit surprised by this statement. She raised up her eyebrow and said:
"You won't?"
"I won't" Jeanette said in a truthful tone. "I'm not the physical type so, I don't think I would actually hurt Alvin" Jeanette shrugged. "I don't know; it's just me"
Eleanor looked a bit worried.
"Jeanette, aren't at least a little bit worried that Alvin will hurt Simon?" Eleanor asked with concern in her voice.
Jeanette shook her head. "I think Simon can defend himself against Alvin. I know Alvin is a lot tougher than Simon but, Simon can sure put up a good fight when he has to"
"That's good to hear" Eleanor said with relief.
"And besides, I don't think Simon would have to defend himself against Alvin" Jeanette said in a knowing voice. "It will never come-"
But before Jeanette could finish another word, her feet were moving her away from the school gates. Someone had grabbed onto the sleeve of her purple neck shirt and had pulled her into a fast walking pace. She couldn't see the front of their face but, just by looking at the back of their head, Jeanette knew that Simon was pulling her...
"Simon, what's going on?" Jeanette asked, perplexed at Simon's odd behaviour.
"No time to answer questions, Jeanette" Simon said in a fast talking voice. "Just keep on walking"
"But why?" Jeanette was finding it hard to keep up to Simon's walking pace. "What's gotten into you?"
"Nothing, Jeanette" Simons said quicker than what he said previous. "Nothing's wrong. Everything is fine"
But Jeanette was not convinced.
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Eleanor too was finding it hard to talk to her unusual behaving best friend.....
"Theodore, tell me right now, what's wrong?" Eleanor too was being pulled by Theodore by the sleeve of her green blouse. She couldn't see his face (Like Jeanette with Simon).....
"I'm fine, really" Theodore replied but Eleanor could hearing the sadness in his voice.....the sniffs he made....
"Then why do you sound so sad?" Eleanor asked her lying friend.
"What do you mean "sadness"?" Theodore asked, trying his best to hide the sadness in his voice....but he failed miserably.
"OK, that does it" Eleanor stopped walking, which caused the fast walking Theodore to fall to the ground. Eleanor helped him up, trying to get a glance at his face, but Theodore hid his face with his arms.
"Theodore, let me look at you in the eyes" Eleanor said in a demanding voice.
"No, go away" Theodore said in a childish voice, hiding his face. Eleanor was getting very fed up by Theodore's behaviour. In the end, she had, somehow, forced Theodore's arms down to reveal his face. His eyes were glistening with tears, his cheeks were covered in tear stains, his face was in an expression of......of......heart-broken?
Eleanor took one look at Theodore's heart-broken face and, almost immediately, she turned around and walked in the direction of the school entrance.....in the direction of Alvin and Brittany talking.......NO, arguing.......
"Eleanor!" Theodore called after her. "Come back! Just leave it!" But when she kept on walking and didn't come back to him, he ran after her.
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"Simon, what did he do to you?" Jeanette asked shocked at the bruise she saw on Simon's face when she had forced him to face her.
"What do you think he did to me?" Simon asked sarcastically and angrily. "He fucking punched me is what he did to me!"
"Why?" Jeanette asked her bruised friend.
"Because he's a freaking self-fish asshole, that's why" Simon replied in a hatred voice.
"Well, where is he now?" Jeanette asked.
Simon gestured in front of him (Which was behind of Jeanette) toward the school. Jeanette turned her head and saw Alvin and Brittany near the entrance to the school, shouting insults and abusive language at each other. She turned back to Simon and said:
"I think you should explain what happened"
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"Eleanor, just let it go!" Theodore begged to the marching Eleanor as he catched up to her. They were nearing the entrance gates to the school.
"No!" Eleanor replied in a stubborn and furious voice. "He fucking hurt you! And, now, I'm going to fucking hurt him back!"
"No!" Theodore said back. "I don't want to cause any more trouble! I fucking hate him for what he did and I don't think I will ever forgive him for what he did but, I don't want you to beat him up for me"
"I don't care, Theodore!" Eleanor said in a determined tone. "His going to pay" Theodore had stopped walking with her......he had stopped stopping her from doing anything she might regret....she was determined as ever to see that Alvin will pay for what he had done.....
As Eleanor walked past the school gate, she saw Brittany walking up to her.
"Let's go, Ellie" Brittany said in a demanding tone.
"No, I won't to teach Alvin a lesson!" Eleanor said as she tried to get by Brittany but failed to do so as Brittany was blocking her path. "And you ain't going to stop me!"
"ELEANOR, WE ARE FUCKING LEAVING, RIGHT NOW!" Brittany screamed in her sister's voice. Eleanor had never see Brittany so angry and (upset?) in her entire life. What had ever happened between Alvin and Brittany, Eleanor could tell it was nothing good.
Seeing the anger in Brittany's eyes, Eleanor did as her sister told her to do. It didn't matter to Eleanor if she beat up Alvin now or tomorrow; she just wanted him to pay someday..... Both Brittany and Eleanor left the school grounds and met up with their siblings on the sidewalk further down the road...
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"He did what!?" Eleanor exclaimed, not believing what she had just heard.
"He rubbed out my name and replaced with his own!" Simon repeated, yet again, to the still stunned Eleanor, Brittany, and Theodore. He had already told Jeanette. "And then he gave in my work with his name on it as his finished assignment!"
"Wow!" Eleanor said with hate. "Alvin's being a real fucker today"
"What are you talking about?" Simon said as he turned his face to Eleanor. "His always been a fucker!"
Eleanor and Jeanette giggled at Simon's joke. Theodore and Brittany however, remained quiet.
"What's wrong with you two?" Jeanette asked Brittany and Theodore. Both looked at her, smiled fakily, and said at the same time:
"Nothing" They looked at each other and said "Hey! Stop copying me! I'm copying you? You're copying me!"
"Theodore, what wrong?" Eleanor asked, calmly.
Theodore sniffed and then turned his head to look at her. His eyes were still glistening with tears.
"I just can't believe I said "I fucking hate you" to Alvin" Theodore hung his head.
Eleanor put her arm around him. "It's OK, Theodore" she said, comforting. "I'll fuck him up tomorrow" Theodore turned to look at her again and he saw a gleam of anger and determination in Eleanor's eyes.
"No, Ellie" Theodore said, seriously. "Don't beat up Alvin. Who knows what will happen to you! He might.....do something bad to you and I don't to feel guilty afterwards when i could have stooped you"
Eleanor looked back at Theodore. She could see the worriness in his eyes.
"Theo, I'll be fine" Eleanor said as she patted Theodore on the back. "Trust me"
"I do" Theodore replied. "I just don't want you to get hurt. If you really do care for me, Ellie, you won't hurt Alvin. Please?"
Eleanor closed her eyes, sighed, glanced back at Theodore and said:
"OK, fine, I won't beat up Alvin"
Theodore put his arm and Eleanor and squeezed her, saying "Thank you!"
"But I'm doing this for you; not him" Eleanor said. "If you hadn't said anything, he would have been dead tomorrow"
"I know" Theodore smiled. "That's why I stopped you" Eleanor smile back at Theodore and then turned her attention to the next quiet person:
"Brittany, what were you and Alvin arguing over?" Eleanor questioned her unusually quiet sister. Brittany looked at Simon and Theodore; she wondered if they both knew. She guessed they didn't....
"I told him to apologize to me for pouring paint over me and he didn't and so we had an argument" This was a lie and Brittany knew it.....so did a glasses wearing chipmunk that was looking at her curiously.
"Brittany, I've been around you for almost seven years now and I know when you're lying and telling the truth" Simon said in a matter-of-fact tone of voice "What you have just said, was a lie"
"No it wasn't!" Brittany shouted, defensively. "It was the truth!" Brittany had stopped walking with her sisters and Alvin's brother's, walking together on the sidewalk. The rest had stopped and looked at her.
"Brittany just tell them what happened!" Eleanor exclaimed. Eleanor thought it was a good idea to let Alvin's brothers know what Alvin had done to her.....it was for the best.....
"What?" Simon looked at Brittany to Eleanor, trying to figure out what was going on. "What happened?"
Theodore looked confused.
Brittany glanced at Jeanette, hoping for a confirmation from her to tell Alvin's brother's the nasty and brutal thing he had done to Brittany......just this morning..... Once Jeanette had nodded, Brittany took a deep breath and said:
"Well, you two remember when Alvin and I was told to go to go to Principal Milliken's office because Alvin had poured paint over me?" Brittany looked at Simon and Theodore, who both nodded. She continued:
"Well, after we came out of Principal Milliken's office, Alvin was very angry at me and.....he.......he......err......" Brittany just didn't have in her to tell Alvin's brothers. She knew they should know but, she just couldn't tell them. She hoped this whole day was a dream and that she would wake up in her bed.
"He did what?" Simon asked.
"What did he do?" Theodore asked.
And Brittany let it out in one scream:
"HE FUCKING PUSHED ME OVER!"
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A/N:
Another Cliffy! Not again!
Well, that's it for today everyone!
I hope you understand the how the characters are acting and why. I also hope you're not that angry for not updating yesterday (Friday). I hope you enjoyed this chapter!
Review and I will update tomorrow (Sunday)
Thanks guys! :)