Hello everyone! Okay I'd like to clarify something. Yes the last chapter wasn't my best work, Yes I suck at spelling and Yes Franziska did call Phoenix a retard in German. Okay that over and done with this is my translation for the note in chapter 3. At the end it said " Mess this up and your friends are dead" in chinese. Okay with that over and done with I'd like to say hello to: Commadertorture: Ya that is what it ment. Thanks for pointing it out. Lex Lexa: Honestly your review was, kinda insulting. I'm working my ass off at Spellings and stuff and if thats my thanks I'd NEVER update again. For anything. Random Reviewer: Ya.. I know. That wasn't a great chapter was it. Edgeygavin: Thanks for the help. I changed chapter 3 to like you did in the review. Thanks:). Okay lets go...
I stood there with my mouth wide open. There was a gun in front of me! The shock nearly made me piss myself. Instead I completly froze, I had to force myself to blink and take a breath.
"Bonjour M. Wright. J'espère que vous allez bien." said the man.
I gathered my thoughts. The man had just spoken French which I had studied for 3 years at College. Think Wright! THINK!
"Ugh.. Bonjour." was all I could muster. I was so frightened I forgot my accent and this man was holding back laughter.
"You forgot your accent Monsieur." He lowered the gun.
"It's hard to concentrate when there's a gun pointed at you." I mumbled.
"Excusez-moi" he raised and eyebrow.
"Nada." I said then immediatly regretted it.
The man raised the gun at me again. "I will not have my Lanugage mixed up with that French copied Bullshit!" he screamed.
"Lo siento." I pushed my luck. He took aim and fired. At the same time I was tackled to the ground.
"Are you okay, pal." the voice of Detective Dick Gumshoe was in my ears.
"Yeah. I'm fine." I sighed a sigh of relief. I looked up and the patroitic French man was know where to be seen. Where did he go? I thought.
"Hey, where the armed man go? asked Gumshoe. I crawled out from under Gumshoes grasp and walked into my apartment. The aparment was ripped apart almost literaly. The Cushions were in shreds and all over the place the house place looked like a bomb hit it.
Oh crap. I thought. Pearl is going to slap me so hard I'll feel it for a week.
I walked around the apartment to inspect the damage. I was in Maya's bedroom when it caught my eye. Behind Maya's pilow was a book. I picked it up and opened it, It was a journal of a sort. With all of my court cases in it. I picked it up and something fell out of it. It was a note. I picked it up and read it.
Dear Nick,
It's me Maya. I was dragged here and told to tell the French man where something he just called "IT" is or I'd die. I just have time to tell you where there holding Pearly. She's in the cave on the north side of the city. Hurry Nick! Don't worry about me. Oh and Nick last night well I felt like I was-
The note ended there.
"Detective! Come here." I shouted and Gumshoe ran in.
"Ya, pal what's up."
I handed him the note and he read it. When he was finished he grinned widely
"You Dog!" he laughed and gave me a friendly punch in the arm. "Nice One! What was it like."
"What are you talking about?" I raised an eyebrow,
"This note says "Last night I felt like I-."
I cut him off. "No, no, no, no, no." I scratched the back of my head. "We didn't do that last night."
"What did you do then? he asked
I tried to think of a response when we heard screaming from outside.
I looked around and saw three armed men pointing there guns at Franziska and Edgeworth. I presummed the scream were from Von Karma but then the screamer screamed (LOL) again. It was Maya she was held in front of Von Karma and Edgeworth with a knife at her neck and another hand moving towards her lower female area.
I was suddenly filled with rage I felt something hard hit the back of my head. I turned around.
"Can't do much without one of these, pal." Gumshoe had hit me on the back of the head with a gun. I took it and took aim. I fired. It missed, I fired again, It also missed. Just before I fired the third shot another shot rang out and one of the men colapsed. Out of the corner in my eye I saw a man in a poncho walking slowly towards the corpse, Behind me Gumshoe moaned and I heard a thump on the ground. I turned around and got a got hit in the head by a baseball bat.
Thats all folks. Review if you wanna but keep contructive critism pls. THANX
