Alright so I'm spoling u lot because I only got two reviews! (From the same person)
I've decided that since I haven't had any feed back that I shall do a filler chapter, this chapter is based on James.
I have decided that I'm not gunna be EVIL and just do what I want, instead I shall do another filler chapter if I don't still have anymore feedback. remember the story is in your hands now!
Okay so enough of my rant.
Clooie - Glad to c u on here mate, can't wait to read some of yr work, I know u've done some good work and I am quite happy to have u on here. Thank u for taking part in the poll
I do NOT own any of the character's beside Collin and Ted, they are mine! Everyone else belongs to the great Robert Muchamore!
CHAPTER 4
James Adams stood half hidden behind the closed gate of the boy that he had followed. His eyes were just above the top of the gate, watching as the boy he had soon known as Collin picked the lock of the back door of what James presumed to be his house. James had followed Collin all the way from where he was currently being schooled at for the remainder of his mission witched he hope would end quite soon, he hated where he was currently.
James had watched as Collin had took on three sixteen year olds and had managed to break one's nose and knock all three of them out. He was impressed by the eleven year old and hoped that they would be great friends. He had cautiously followed Collin out of school and stood hidden behind a corner as Collin had put on a blue coloured polo and stuffed his jumper and tie into his school bag. James watched as his expectations rose, he hoped that he could finish his recruitment mission, and hopefully Collin was his ticket out.
James had continuously tried to keep Collin in his sights as he followed the brown haired lad down and alley way and hopefully towards his home. Collin had kept weaving in and out of the crowd, hoping to lose anyone following. This had made James' job one hell of a lot harder as James tried to keep near but not too close to Collin, on the bright side however things were looking good for Collin's acceptance into CHERUB and James could taste life back at CHERUB already and the end of such a mission like the one he was on.
He had luckily enough followed Collin all the way to where he was, however it got harder as Collin had walked straight into an almost deserted road. James had crossed the road and followed Collin until he had walked straight down an alley in-between two terrace houses, James had presumed that these had led into a personal back garden and he was right.
James had crouched behind a small wall and watched as Collin had vaulted the gate on the left hand side before he had went down the alley and waited until he was sure that the boy was away from the gate to silently look over and watch him.
James quietly vaulted the gate for himself as he Collin had walked inside the back door. He silently ran over and peered into the small kitchen. James watched as Collin tip toed past the sofa and out of his sight off to the left. James looked over the small dirty kitchen and noticed the stacked up cans of beer on the counter opposite as well as an ash tray full to the brim with burnt out cigarettes.
James then saw a man that looked passed out on the sofa holding a can of beer in one hand. The man reminded him of his mother, his mother had died because of alcohol, of course it weren't just alcohol. James looked over to the passed out drunk and felt a sense of sympathy for the man witch he had regretted as soon as he had found out what the man had done to both Collin and Ted.
James had then followed Collin who had fled from the house carrying two back packs and a fresh pair of clothes on. James had kept his pace with Collin and followed him until they had reached an infant school not far from where Collin's house was.
He had watched as Collin had met up with a younger child, he presumed the age of five. He had become concerned as soon as Collin had gone to pick up the boy, but his concern was short lived as soon as the young boy had obviously asked to be picked up.
Okay so that's the end of chapter 4 and it's on time! Do u like it? I hope u do :D
Anyway I am yet AGAIN writing up my three questions, please answer them in a review!
1) Who should I follow for the remainder of the story?
A) Collin
B) Ted
C) Both
2) When should Collin's first mission be?
A) 1st book
B) 2nd book
3) What should the sequel be?
A) Sequel with Collin
B) Life as a red shirt with Ted
Ok then! today is the 3rd of December so the next chapter should be up between the 6th and the 8th December, however these will be school nights so it might be on by the end of this weekend or later on. KEEP AN EYE OUT and REVIEW!
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YOJ (YellowOspreyJaguar)
