The story is called "Kinmotsu"
The story is called "Kinmotsu"
Translation; Taboo; Forbidden thing
So basically it says Forbidden Love.
Here is chapter four of my story, "Kinmotsu". I hope you guys like it. And I had a review on this story. And I'm not naming and also, they were anonymous so I can not PM them. But this is for you.
Thank you or what you said, and I know that I have some grammar problems when I write, but my grammar is usually correct. But I think you're correct. I need a beta. Maybe they can actually push me and everything and maybe they can get this story out of me and onto the story. Haha ;)
And also that I know Naruto sounds… weak, but he's only like for a reason. With everything else he's strong. I try.
'Thoughts'
"Speech"
Flashback which we're still in
Scenery Change
Kinmotsu Chapter 4: I can't believe this.
The morning sun shone through the window of Uchiha Itachi's bedroom. It was about 6 going in the morning. Itachi knew that he had to get up, but that didn't mean he wanted to. He wasn't looking forward the events to come.
Today Itachi was going to find out about Naruto's past. One way or another. He new that Naruto most likely wouldn't be telling him EVERYTHING, but he wanted to break that barrier of his.
He pushed the blankets off of him and got out of the bed. The teen walked over to his wardrobe and pulled out fresh clothes. He had to get a shower, you know.
After doing that Itachi walked out of his room and to the bathroom to get a shower. Pulling back the curtain he was thinking what his fallowing events might be. As he stepped in the shower he turned the shower on when he found his desired temperature.
After his shower he dressed and slipped out without being noticed. His father would not like that he skipped the meeting he was to attend with him. It wasn't all that of importance to Itachi, just things his father wanted to discuss with him. About what he was to do about things and when. Things of the clan; that was something Itachi hated the most. It seemed more and more that the clan was getting needier of Itachi. For Kami-sama's sake, he's only a teenager.
Outside Naruto's apartment door
Itachi arrived at Naruto's door and knocked. As expected Naruto did not answer his door. Itachi unlocked the door and walked in. He looked around and saw the apartment. It was surprisingly tidy. He was expecting it to be more dirty, I mean come on! He's a, what, 5 year old boy? Would YOU expect his own apartment to be dirty.
He was about to enter the kitchen when a kunai flew a liiiittle to close to his face and hit the living room wall. Itachi quickly turned to see who was it who threw the sharp object.
It was Naruto.
"Itachi, it's you….Don't ever come into my apartment uninvited, I thought you were an intruder."
"I apologize, Naruto-kun."
"You're lucky I didn't really want to hit you, just scare you. Or you would be dead and I would have to clean up the body, then explain to the old man what happened and how you ended up dead on my kitchen floor."
Itachi was astonished, he had that much control on his weapons, and he wasn't even in school.
"You have that much control?" Itachi questioned.
"Well, yes. I had to learn how to protect myself somehow, didn't I? Well, anyway; It's a good thing you're here, I was in the middle of getting changed as you can see."
Itachi looked down and chuckled in his mind. The blond was in his boxers and a tee shirt.
"Let me finish getting my clothes on and we can go shopping for things."
After the blond got changed, they went out to the market, just as Naruto said.
Already Itachi noticed that Naruto was getting dirty looks. What the hell was wrong with these people. He looked at Naruto; he didn't show any emotion or sign to show he noticed the people, but in unbeknownst to Itachi, Naruto actually saw the people and heard everything they said about him.
They were entering a vegetable stand and the keeper gave Naruto the rudest look as he approached.
"We are closed." The keeper spit out evilly.
Itachi just wanted to punch the guys lights out for being that rude to him.
"Sorry to trouble you, sir." Naruto said. Itachi couldn't believe he kept his cool so well. It was surprising.
"Itachi, could you please fetch me some fruit down the street while I go over here to grab some cleaning supplies?"
"Yes, of course, Naruto-kun."
Itachi watched as Naruto walked away. He was about to do the same as well before the vegetable stand owner spoke.
"I warn you Uchiha-san, do not be around that demon. He will surely kill you when you two are alone and out of site."
Itachi looked at the guy and grabbed him by the shirt.
"Now you listen to me, Uzumaki Naruto is not the demon. If I hear you speaking of him again in that manner you will surely not be seeing the next rising sun." Itachi said before he let the man go and walked off to the fruit stand down the street.
After he bought the fruit and was walking back to Naruto, he looked around for him. He was gone…
He looked around and saw a bag on the ground by an ally. Itachi immediately ran over to the ally and looked in it. In the ally were a bunch of people gathered and seemed to be beating something; or some one! Naruto!
Itachi quickly set his things down and ran over silently to the gang and beat them all to a pulp in a matter of 5 seconds. He turned to see Naruto curled in a ball, crying and bleeding from various places.
"…Naruto…" Itachi said, breathlessly, as he kneeled down to touch the boys face. Naruto whimpered even more.
That got Itachis' blood boiling. He turned to the 5 guys laying on the ground in pain. "If ANY of you EVER touch Uzumaki Naruto AGAIN, I will personally castrate you and then kill you, very painfully and slowly. Do I make my self clear?!" The furious teen asked, practically yelling at the top of his lungs.
He turned back to Naruto and picked him and went to pick up the bags. Then he teleported to the blonds' apartment.
Itachi laid the smaller boy on his bed, ever so gently. He was still crying, and half asleep.
Itachi decided that he would make dinner for the blond when he woke up, which would probably be in a while. Since by now it was noon.
What Itachi didn't know was that Naruto saw and heard everything Itachi had done in that ally. And Itachi was the last thing he heard before he fell asleep.
5 pm
Itachi was getting an Italian dish ready. It was called Chicken Cacciatore (pronounced Catch.ay.tori.). He was slow cooking it so it would be done by supper time, which was six pm.
Naruto woke up about a half an hour from when dinner was to be served. He was sore so we went to the bathroom to clean up and take a shower.
When he went into the kitchen, he did not expect Itachi to be cooking in his kitchen. He did not expect that at all.
Itachi, previously hearing footsteps and the shower running; knew that Naruto was up. So he expected him to be in the kitchen and was not surprised to see him when he turned around to set the plates on the table. Itachi smiled at the boy and told him that dinner was just about done.
"Well, what is it?"
"It's called 'Chicken Cacciatore'; an Italian dish"
" 'Italain'? I've never had an Italian dinner before. I can't wait to try it." Naruto said as he sat down; only wincing slightly from the pain in his sides.
Those guys really did a number on him so fast, but he wasn't worried. Naruto would heal by nights end.
"Thank you for cooking this for me, Itachi. I really appreciate it. No one has ever been this kind to be. People don't take to me very well."
"Well Naruto-kun, I am no ordinary person. You will find that soon enough. We shall be spending every day together from not on. Maybe some nights. I don't like how people treat you here, it's disgusting."
Itachi had an upset look on his face as he was looking away from Naruto; at the pot. He muttered a 'dinner is ready' and served the food.
Naruto was hesitant about trying it, but Naruto will be Naruto the first bite, he fell in love with it.
"Wooow! This is great, Itachi; how did you learn how to make such wonderful western food?"
"I pick up a few things here and there every now and then." Itachi said; smiling at the younger boys expression.
"I hope you don't mind, though, Naruto-kun. I would feel safest staying the night here with you. I want to make sure that you are okay."
"…" Naruto was speechless. Somebody actually wanted to stay the night to 'make sure he was okay' and with they're own free will?
"uh.. Are you sure?"
"Yes, of course I am."
"Then it's fine. I don't have people sleep over so I have no idea what we would do or where you would sleep."
"The couch is fine, Naruto-kun."
After that they finished their food and washed up for bed. By that time is was about 8 o'clock. And they thought that they should turn in now, because they were planning to go out and have a nice long walk tomorrow; Itachi's idea.
That night, around midnight; Itachi felt something on him. Something that was big. It woke up him, so he slowly opened his eyes and was surprised to find that it was Naruto.
Konichiwa, Minna-san! Gomen-nasai yaku waga chikoku! senshu
(Hello, Everyone! Sorry about my lateness! bows)
And sorry for this LOOONG flashback. It's been like 3 chapters now that is flashback. I promise that the flashback will be over soon.
Also, I should let you know, I am very lazy when it comes to writing, but when I get down in a good writing mood, I get a few pages done. I'm sorry that I always take so long to get the next chapter up. 'Cause, like, seriously, technically the real story hasn't really started all that much, we're in the forth chapter and this is still a flashback, so nothing has really happened. Haha. –sweatdrop-
