May be a little OCC.
Chapter 3
About 1 hour later mom came out. Jesse went in. About a half hour later Jesse comes out and I go in. She smiles. "Hey sis. Did you work out?" Her soothing voice said.
"Mom thinks I am lying. She thinks I am doing it because I don't want to be in pain while you are in pain every day." I tell her. "You have to tell mom that next." I say. "I have to walk home because she might think I told you to and she will get mad because you know." Kate kisses me on the head I head out her room and towards an exit.
I was wearing no jacket. I had on a short sleeved shirt on with pants. It was raining outside. About halfway home I started to cough and my nose was getting runny It was freezing outside. Cars went zooming pass me so I took no notice to see if one was mom.
"Hello." A voice from the side of the road said. "Do you need a ride?" She asked.
It was a girl with brown hair and I hopped in the back seat having no idea who it was but I didn't know I just wanted to keep warm. "What's your name?" I asked so it wouldn't be a stranger anymore.
She was sitting in the front seat and there was a boy in the back. "My name is Leah and this is my son Brain. Isn't it cold to be walking?" She asked.
"Yes, it is." I answer. "I was waling home from the hospitable." I say truthfully.
"Why were you there?" She asked. "If you were visiting, what is wrong with them?" She asked.
"I was there with my sister Kate who goes in a lot and is there most of the time dying." I answer question number one. "My sister had leukemia. Leukemia is when you're with blood cells go higher than needed and you need bone marrow. She had been living longer because of me." I say.
"What is your name and what do you mean living longer because of you?" I looked around and see Brain just staring at me.
"My name is Anna and she been living for a while because I gave her the bone marrow and the needs and the cells. Now I am forced to give my sister my kidney tomorrow when she doesn't want it. She doesn't want it because she wants to die because she been thinking she should have been taking care of me." Leah nods.
Then we stop talking. I never told her my address. She was going to her home. I would call my mom to pick me up there. Then a car pulls in front of us and she slowed down. Then a car pulled in front of us again. When she saw no one in front of her she went the speed limit and then a car pulled in front of us and we crashed in to them. It caused me to hit my head hard on the seat and all windows to break.
Cliffhanger!