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Transformation

I was laid on my stomach as Carlisle assessed the damages. I closed my eyes and concentrated on something else until pain ripped through my body as the stake was removed from my back.

When the pain subsided I opened my eyes. Carlisle was working intensely on the area where the stake had been removed from. He saw my eyes open and starring.

"I have to thank you" He said slowly.

"For what?" I asked carefully shifting my head so I could see him. He was no longer doctoring the area in my back. His eyes were locked on mine.

"You saved my family tonight. You saved my son." He said seriously. "You don't even know us yet you laid down your life to defend us." He added. I chuckled.

"One of my gifts is I can feel. Sort of like Jasper, but I can't control the atmosphere. So when I heard about you I wanted to visit. And when I did I felt how strongly you all felt for each other. The moment that was threatened I wanted to protect it. If anything ever happened to any of you the family would suffer greatly. It's…well it's been a long time since I felt family love. I'm tangible. Your family is not." I finished strongly.

"I see" He said continuing to work on my back. It was then that a strange sensation came over me. I wasn't sure what it was so I ignored it.

"Well you are welcome to stay with us if you like. We would be glad to have you." He said pleasantly.

"Really?" I asked surprised moving slightly.

"Yes, we would be honored." He said with a chuckle.

"Thank you so much!" I replied with a bright smile, but almost instantly my smile began to fade.

"Carlisle something's wrong." I stated plainly. The strange sensation I was feeling was getting stronger.

"What's wrong?" He asked alarmed.

"I can't see, well I can see but I can't see." I said again. "Carlisle, something is very wrong! I can't feel!" I said with alarm, my eyes wide with shock. Without a word he turned me over and swore under his breath.

"The stake went all the way through. What's this?" He asked removing a small broken black bead from the gap in my stomach. Just then the worst pain I had ever felt ripped through my body. I screamed in pain and strained against it. The door flew open seconds after my scream as my body convulsed.

"Jada!" I heard when the door flew open. It was my savior.

"Jeremiah!" It was Edward's voice. "Carlisle I'm sorry, I couldn't restrain him."

"It's alright, we're going to need help." He replied. "Hold her down, we can't let her hurt herself."

"Carlisle, what's going on?" Jeremiah asked, fear streaking his voice.

"I'm not sure." Was all he said as his eyebrows furrowed in frustration.

My body was being rocked with pain causing me to struggle against them. I felt a hand in mine and I squeezed with each new wave of pain. Then I heard a voice at my ear, "Hold on my darling, I won't leave you." My eyes flashed open on who I assumed was my savior Jeremiah. I was right. I hadn't really gotten a good look at him before because it was dark, but now I could see how gorgeous he was. Dark hair, pale skin, eyes the color of molten gold flecked with ocher in regards to my current state. Despite the pain I smiled. I liked how reassured and comfortable he was making me feel despite the pain. My smile was short lived once again as the pain escalated to an incredible amount. It was getting worse every second. Then at the peak of the torment it stopped for a moment. It was then that I heard a sound that I had not heard in my body in over eighty-seven years. A heartbeat.

My hand flew to my chest where I could feel the steady thump thump thump thump of my beating heart.

"No!" A voice called out next to me. It was Jeremiah. He had a look of horror on his face.

"What happened?" He demanded. Just then the pain shivered through my body again.

"Carlisle!" I shouted. I opened my eyes and held up my wrist in despair. "Don't let me go! Please Carlisle help me!" I shouted frantically. The pain escalated again and I struggled against the strong arms pinning me to the bed.

"I can't my dear, we have to wait until it exits your system. Then I will do everything in my power to help you." He promised. Just then the pain began to subside. Slowly I became aware that the hands holding me let go gently. All except one pair. Jeremiah still held my hand gently. The pain was slowly becoming bearable. I was no longer convulsing. My breathing decreased and I began to relax. Edward slowly left the room, no doubt returning to his faithful Bella and to spread the news of what had happened.

Carlisle stayed by my side as the pain became very distant. Jeremiah didn't move. He was like a statue carved from the purest marble. Slowly as the pain subsided I leaned into him. He wrapped me gently in his arms and held me close. It was strange, He was so cold and stone-like, and yet so comfortable as his stone contours formed around me. I stayed there for awhile as Jeremiah gently rocked me back and forth.

Not long after another strange sensation came over my body, once again something I hadn't felt in over eighty-seven years. Sleep. It was swift and quick.

"Jeremiah…" I muttered inaudibly as I slipped into unconsciousness.

"I'm here, I'll never leave you." He whispered. And with that my world went black.

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