The older kings and Queens of old

We are on are way into the caste gates now I can't believe Caspian has been kidnapped its terrible we are going to rescue him and I will fight I'm not a little girl now so I can fight. I won't be doing archery either I will fight with Edmund and peter using a sword I hate that women are treated differently I will prove that I am as good as my brothers. In the distance I can see trumkin, Susan ,Edmund ,reepisheep,a man I don't know but seems familiar and mr tumnas I can't believe he is here it's amazing. As soon as we get there I hug them all and find an older Eustace which shocked me lots and we went into a meeting room,

"Say we attack the castle to get Caspian" said peter

"No we would be killing servants as well then" said Susan

"We can't do that peter it would kill to many innocent people" said Edmund

"Well we could sneak me, peter, Susan, Eustace, Polly and the professor into the castle and have the army hidden in the forest and signal them if something goes wrong" I suggested

"we could send the army in and tell them not to kill people that don't fight" said Edmund

This isn't going anywhere "let's take a vote raise your hand for peter" asked the professor two people raised their hands "for Lucy" ten people raised their hand I won with ten votes ,peter with two votes and Edmund with eight votes so we put final touches to the plan put are armour on and are weapons and set off for the colomen castle. Susan had her bow and arrows, Polly had a bow and arrows and some daggers, the boys all had swords and a dagger and I have a two swords and my dagger. We were all in teams to search the castle me and Edmund, Susan and peter and Polly, the professor and Eustace.

Caspian

I have been here for a week now and still no one has come to save me they keep trying to get information out me but I won't tell them anything. The door to my cell opened and a woman walked in followed by a man "are you king Caspian?" asked the woman.

"Yes who are you?" I asked

"Polly and diggory we are here to rescue you"

I remember a old Narnian story about a Polly and digory they fit the description they just seem a bit older "are you Polly and digory from the dawn of time?" I asked

"yes its nice people still remember us" replied digory with a smile

They cut off the ropes holding me and we ran through the door there was a man standing there with blood running down his arm from a cut "Caspian it's me Eustace I grew when I came into Narnia" said the man. Really it does look like Eustace wow aslan brought polly, digory and Eustace I must be really important. We started running out of the castle fighting guard trying to stop us when we got to the main courtyard there was fighting going on six guards and three people fighting and one woman stood with her bow and arrows trying to help. When they saw us we all ran out into the forest when we got in I could see the narnian army we set off back to Narnia we got to Narnia midday and I went to talk to the council. As I got in there I could see Polly ,diggory ,Eustace and the other people that saved me one man had blond hair with broad shoulders the next man had dark brown hair slightly smaller than the other and younger next was a woman with long dark brown hair she is pretty and next to her the youngest of the four has light brown hair and is very beautiful and she looks my age yay.

"hello I am king caspian thank you for saving me who are you?" I asked

"well we have already met we meet when we looked younger but now we are our real age"

I don't understand that at all "yes but who are you?" I asked again

"high king peter the magnificent, king Edmund the just ,Queen Susan the gentle and Queen Lucy the valiant"said peter

"your majesty they are telling the truth" said trumkin

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