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Chapter 4
Cassie and I are shocked when the other Goseigers appear in their GoseiAdvent and start to attack Gendrex.
"Whoa." Says Cassie, shocked when the Goseigers zoom past her and attack Gendrex.
"Oi!" I shout because they butted in. "NO cutsies!"
"Nani?" the Goseigers ask not taking their eyes off of their attacks on Gendrex.
"You heard me!" I yell as I jump back in with my tiger zord.
"Yeah!" agrees Cassie doing the same. "NO cutsies!"
Cassie and I then attack Gendrex with the Goseigers.
Gendrex then goes down and explodes with an, "ARRGGG!"
We all then de-transform and meet up again.
Alata walks up first and says, "Arigatou. Your help, helped us in the final attack."
Cassie walks up to him saying, "Whoa, whoa, whoa. THAT was UNINTENTIONAL!"
I walked up nodding in agreement with my arms crossed over my chest. "Sou, sou! You guys fired as we attacked." I looked at Alatas shocked face and then to the others. "It was a coincedince. An Ac-ci-dent." I say as I look at everyone of their faces.
"Oi!" Moune stomped up to me and got in my face. "You wouldn't have made it WITHOUT our help!"
Cassie and I smirk. Cassie walks over to Moune and bends down a bit. "Yeah yeah. Whatever shrimp." Cassie then puts her index finger on Mounes forehead and pushes her back.
Agri and Hyde come running up, as soon as she charged Cassie, holding Moune back.
"You little-" Agri puts a hand over Mounes mouth.
Eri walks up and puts a hand on a sad Alatas shoulder. "Demo… it's better if we all work together. Ne Alata?" Eri looks at Alata.
"Un!" nods Alata smiling in agreement.
"Ne mina?" Eri looks at the others
Hyde and Agri smile and nod in agreement as Moune got free and yelled, "No way!"
I smirk and look over at her. "Why? You afraid to be around us?" I walk over to her. "Afraid you'll get replaced?" I look up at Agri and smile. He smiles back not getting what I said.
Moune growls. I straighten up in amusement with a smile on my face as I look at her struggling, as Hyde and Agri hold her back desperately. "You'd better stay awa-" starts Moune as Eri runs over and puts a hand over Mounes mouth.
"What she meant to say was, You better not stay away because we need you. Ne Moune?" Eri asks as she looks over at Moune.
Moune scowels under Eris hand and shakes her head as she positioned herself so she could speak, "No. They are bi-"
Eri slapped her hand over Mounes mouth and she cried 'out' in pain. When Moune stopped 'whining' Eri asked her, "Now. Do you want to try that again?"
Moune sighs and nods. Eri lets go of Mounes mouth. Moune breaths deeply before she starts. "Please stay? We… need… you…" Moune half gagged. Eri slapped the back of Mounes head. "Owww!" Whines Moune.
Cassie and I smile. We look at each other and nod. The others smile at our agreement. Cassie and I then look at them and say, "Naahhh!" And we then walk away, leaving their jaws in the dirt.
Well? How was chapter 3? Good? Bad? Boring? Ok? Please tell me what I need to improve on and what you liked. Arigato. :D