Hey peoples I updated in around a week just like I promised. This one is kind of slow and maybe a bit cliche but it is just a transition chapter so please deal with me and keep reading my story.


Terrible Surprises

(Loki's POV)

"Stop!" she screamed throwing herself against my chest and stopping me and that kid from tearing into each other.

"Mayura don't you have any idea what this kid was doing? Why would you want to protect him?"I was barely able to keep himself from pushing Mayura to the ground just so I could hit that stupid kid. But then he seen it, it was the same thing Seta had saw. Mayura was no longer staring at him curiously and she wasn't blushing all goofy like usual. He saw sadness and fear and...and indecision in her eyes. She looked like she was fighting herself on every word she said. It was as if she wanted to get out of their way and let him kill that guy, but at the same time it seemed like she wanted to run into that other guys' arms. Then I realized something. That cocky, little idiot had completely stopped fighting from the second Mayura got involved.

"O.K., she's coming with me, Blondie." the kid said jerking Mayura into his arms and stalking off. I... I honestly didn't know what to do. I just stood there like a statue. I couldn't make myself move from that spot. I only knew two things:

1.)I had just SCREWED up. BAD.

2.) I didn't know why I cared.


(Seta POV)

"What is wrong with you, Seta! What is so important that you had to attack me?

Why are you acting so strange? Seta, why won't you talk to me? You've haven't said anything since we left him." Mayura was talking-he knew that much- but he didn't know what to say anymore. He knew minutes had passed but...he didn't want to mess up again.

"Look, if you really don't want me around then I'll leave!" that got my attention.

"What are you talking about, Mayura?"

" I get it! I'm too much trouble for you and you don't want me around anymore. I saw what he tried to do to you. You don't want me around anymore, you just don't want to have to deal with that kind of trouble. So I promise I'll leave and you'll never have to see me again just say something to me! I don't honestly know exactly what I did but I'm sorry!" She began to turn away, he could see the tears about to fall.

'Wow, I'm bad at this.'

"Whoa, whoa,whoa. Mayura don't do this. That's not what I wanted you to think." I said catching up and pulling her into my arms, "Sorry...It seems like I just can't stop screwing things up when it comes to you."

"Uh-huh." she murmured pulling herself into my arms. Then she did something that surprised me. Mayura lifted her lips to my ear and brushing against it she whispered, "I'm glad you're finally back."


If you're saying 'yes it's finally over' you are sadly mistaken. It may seem like that but it's not and like I said at the beginning of this chapter it is just a transition so it was kind of slow and most of you probably didn't like this one that much but the next one will get better. I seriously promise that. I've got people who are all checkin over my stories and everything.

Anyway, hey I told you I would hopefully update in a week. Talk about a nice promise with screwed up word and internet. By the way has anyone ever noticed Mayura never breaks any promises-at least in the anime she doesn't-that might make for a good addition to my story. If you have any ideas to help me improve review or send me something kk. I know I need some help.

Last but not least- *thanks Amika-Sanya for dealin with me constantly asking you to read my stories even though you don't know the first thing about this anime. Keep writing your Kingdom Hearts stuff.

*Thanks to Lady Skadi and cece009 for being my first people to review and ask me to please update. I wouldn't of got this stuff up as fast if it wasn;t for you guys asking me too. sorry this one wasn't as good. See ya around.