Jacks POV

"Where am I" I said as I opened my eyes but yet I still couldn't see anything it was so dark.

"Do you remember what happened?" A voice echoed through out the darkness.

"I was with sg1 we need to get to the village to see if they had zpm… I saw something move through the trees I decided to go check it out. It moved really quickly so I went back to the village. Daniel and the others were already sitting with the guy so I thought I should check out the village. There was something strange everything was in a set of twenty that was strange. But when I went to the church there were Goa'uld symbols on the walls…" I said remembering what had happened what felt like years ago man does my head hurt.

"Anything else?"

"Yeah a girl came in wait not a girl a Goa'uld. Oh no, I have to warn them" I said as I realized that they were in danger.

"It's ok she dead"

"No she is not I was there I didn't know how but she could see me even when I was invisible she had that hand device… She knew who we were… She was going to kill me… Then a blue light appear that's all I remember then. I woke up here… And who are you and why is it so damn dark." I said realizing I was talking to someone I didn't even know and who was one step away from getting a bullet in his head.

"We are sorry we spent so much time hiding that we forget that humans spend there time in the sunlight hmm we guess this form will do" The voice said as I began to see a little blue light but then it started to get closer. This kind of reminds me of that episode of the simpsons were Mr. Burns gets mistaken as an alien because he under goes medical treatment to cheat death and is glowing… Ehem! Anyways, the blue light was in a shape of a human… Hooray another alien.

"So what are you?" I asked getting straight to the point.

"We don't have name never given one no one see us so no one names us except you. You're human so why can you see us?" The form asked.

"You've got me… wait you can see me?" I asked here I thought I was invisible.

"Yes we can see everything"

"We who's we you mean there is more of you?" I asked.

"Yes we're everything everywhere we are here and then." The form said. What's with aliens and the weird answers.

"So what, do you know the ancients I mean they had a machine back at the Stargate that turn me invisible?" I asked.

"SHHH DON'T SPEAK OF THEM?" It screamed as it turned from blue to red. "We hate them they hurt us."

Well I know I'm not going to ask about them again. "What do you mean hurt you?"

"They needed us to learn to be like us we were there before them but they wanted us so they learned to catch us with there machines. Soon they built a machine which made you like you are now. Then they left."

"You mean when they ascended?"

"Yes… But soon the insects came we don't like them so we squash um. To think they made home here on our land…"

"You mean the villagers?"

"Yes, nasty little things to think they start mating more and more we try to delay them."

"You mean you kill them? You kill Humans?"

"Nooo not humans… You call them Goa'uld"

"So all the villagers are Goa'ulds"

"Yes"

"Oh no… Daniel he's with them… The team they're with them right now I have to go to them." I said as I got off my ass. Lot of help that going to do I can't even see my own hand what makes me think I can find my way out of here.

"Wait Jack" The voice said

"How do you no my name."

"Your mate… Daniel addressed you by it"

"Daniel…. He's not my mate" I said how can he even suggest that we haven't even you know.

"But you show the feeling love for him. We saw…"

"Wait now you're the peeping energy thing" I said as I looked at it.

"We are sorry we weren't sure if we could trust you when you past through the ancients ring we first thought you were them but you smelled different. So we thought we might trust you."

"So we smell that's good to know. I have to go back I have to get the rest of my team so we can get out of here."

"We are afraid we can't let you go not until tomorrow…"

"Why?"

"Because then we are finally free and we can eat the insects."

"Okay creepy… but aren't you already free I mean you spied on us and don't forget you captured me" I said.

"It's the 19th day. on the 20th day on the 20th year we'll be free"

"But my friends are in danger right now!" I yelled "I can't leave my team."

"Fine but we can't let you go through the Stargate it's the only thing keeping the insects here. Tell Daniel not to fix the machine." It said as it walked closer to me. "Grab your friends and hide wait for tomorrow we will come" It said as it touched my forehead and blue light again appeared and I was back at the church nobody was there.

"I have to find them."

Jack POV End


"How did you figure it out?" Sam asked as they were on the path to the machine.

"Well when I was doing an archeology dig in Egypt some nut job kept on going on and on about what the numbers mean in the bible. So when Alzmen started talking about the village and the numbers it popped into my head." Daniel said as memories went through his mind.

"So what does that all mean?"

"I seriously have no clue only that they are expecting something." Daniel said as they finally got to the machine. Daniel bent down and grabbed the handle and pulled it open. "Sam the ZPM" I said as I held out my hand for it.

"STOP" A familiar voice yelled.

"Jack?"

"Stop don't fix it" Jack yelled running towards them but something was different.

"Jack your visible"

"Really" Jack said as he stop what he was doing and looked at his own hand. "Ehem! Anyways don't fix it"

"But this could be a great discovery it could be use as a defense weapon against our enemies" Sam said.

"Well while I was gone I made a new best friend or friends I'm not quite sure yet but anyways they asked me to tell you to stop. Oh and F.Y.I. the villagers a Goa'ulds. So we should get out of here." Jack said as he pointed away from the machine. "Oh and we can't leave through the Stargate my friends won't let us."

"O' Neill!" Teal'c yelled. The group turned around to see Alzmen with the hand device using it on Teal'c.

"Let him go!" Jack yelled as he approached Alzmen.

"Not until you fixed the machine." Alzmen said.

"Daniel what time is it?" Jack asked me as he looked at the machine.

"11:54pm but what does that have to do with anything?" Daniel asked why was he thinking about the time all of a sudden when Teal'cs life is in danger Daniel thought.

"It has to do with everything… Alzmen why do you want the machine to work?" jack asked him.

"Why would I tell you that?"

"Well probably because once we fixed it you're probably going to kill us anyways? Oh and can you please release my friend or we will defiantly won't help you." Jack said.

"Fine…" Alzmen said as he released Teal'c.

Teal'c was about to punch him when Jack told him to stop.

"We gated here through Chappa'ai to find new ground for our lord. But then we found out, we couldn't leave nor could we call for help. We had to stay here then the lights came and started to pick us off one by one we found out that this machine caged them. Then you came along we hoped you would solve what we wrote on the wall and turned it on and be caged with them. But that didn't work. Now all you have to do is fix it and we can keep the light locked up." Alzmen said as he pointed the hand device at us. "Or do I have to take a life first." Alzmen said as the sound of a staff weapon going off sounded.

Jack looked around at his team. "Is everyone okay?" He asked.

"Yeah" Sam said as she cheaked to see if she was hit as Teal'c just nodded his head.

"You think I would have gotten used to getting hit by now" Daniel said as he looked down and put his hand on his stomach and fell backwards.

"Daniel" Jack shouted as he ran towards Daniel and fell to his knees.

"Now can you fix the machine or do I have to kill another." Alzmen said as he snapped his fingers and other villager came out into the open.

"We would if we could but you killed the only person that knew how to fix it." Sam yelled.

"Daniel Stay with me okay don't leave me" Jack whispered into Daniel ear. "I can't lose you… not again." He said as he placed his hand over Daniel Wound.

"Jack I can't… I can't move." Daniel said before you coughed up blood.

"Just hang on… Carter what time is it?"

"Its 12:00am hardly the time to be worried about the time"

"I'm not worried." Jack said as blue light began to escape from the machine.

"Sir what is that" Sam said as she held up her P90 along with Teal'c.

"Put down your gun they are here to help us" Jack said and they put their guns down.

"Thank you Jack" Blue light said as it turned into a human form once again. "You have freed us and we thank you"

"Tal shak! Mol kek! (Translation: Attack! kill them all!)" Alzmen yelled in it's Goa'uld voice as all the Goa'uld stated to shoot at the blue form.

"Yeah you shouldn't have done that." Jack said as the blue light form screeched and turned in to red light and started to attack the Goa'ulds. "Daniel please stay with me" Jack said as he lifted Daniel into his arms and rocked him back and forth. "Please"


4th chapter finish please review and don't worry there will be sexual content in the next chapter