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HERE WE GO
Shreya came out of her bedroom holding her hand bag and gave the wallet to Daya.
Ye aap ka wallet…
Daya took the wallet and said: ye Ashu kahan reh gaya…
Chote sahib abhi tak taiyyar ho rahey hain…
Kia….? Yaar itna time to me ne aaj tak nahi lagaya …jitna ye laga raha hai…
Aap ka hi beta hai…
Haan ye to hai.. agar is ke baqi shoq bhi meri tarha hotey to kia baat thi… nahi?
Haan…acha ab jaiye… le ke aiye us ko bahir…
Daya smiled and moved.
Inside the room twelve years old boy standing in front of mirror and trying to set his hairs when he felt a smell of his favorite scant . He frowned and turned. He found his father applying the scant on his clothes.
Dad…..wo mera hai… rakhiye usey..
Daya put it back with: le mere baap ..rakh diya…
The boy again engross in his tashan when listens the voice of his father.
Ashu… tu chale gab hi.. ya me or teri maa chaley jaein…
Ashish said irritatingly: dad..dekhiye na… ye spikes nahi ban rahey …please help ….
Daya turned him towards himself and set his hairs then turned him again to the mirror.
Ab theek hain…?
Ashish smiled widely. Daya was about to go when he remember that he forgot to tie his shoe less, he sat on bed. Ashish turned to him and said.
Dad…. Please jaldi kariye…Avengers shuru honey mein… sirf 20 minutes baki hain… me ne bare papa sath dekhna hai wo…
Daya replied annoyingly: aik to tum dono ki ye sci fic habbits na….uffff…
Then stood up with : chalo….
….
Adi entered inside the house after coming back from his karate Class and saw Ashish sitting near Abhijeet and both were so much engrossed in some discussion. He looked at them , Ashish was eating chocolate and excitedly listening to the story which Abhijeet was telling him.
Feeling neglected Adi was about to go when Ashish called him.
Bhai… aap bhi aao na… dekho na.. barey papa… kitni interesting story suna rahey hain…discovery ki..
Adi made a face with: muje nahi sunna tu hi theek hai… batein bhi parhai wali karta hai….ye sab cheezain… tu hi sun…
And move to the back yard.
Ashish said while making so many faces: ye …bhai ko…science or parhai wagera se itni chir kiun hai… kia musibat hai bhaeee..
Abhijeet just sighed.
…
….
Daya ends the call with his informer and turned to go. There he found the teen age of his buddy sitting silently. Daya thought for a moment then move to him.
Bhai aaj thora zada mood off lag raha hai...
Adi said in annoyed tone : chachu aap to jaantey hi hain... phir...
Daya said : haain... me janta hun... kia janta hun...
to aap keh rahey hain... papa ne aap ko kuch nahi bataya...
Han... bataya tha...per..
Adi made a more annoyed face.
Daya said softly: Adi... naraz ho papa se...?
Adi shook his head in no but didnt replied.
adi... beta us ne tumhare bhale k liye hi...
aise bhala kiya unho ne... chachu...
per beta... tumhare liye wo kitna kuch...
Haan chachu... unho ne mere liye.. sirf mere liya kiya... per wo mere papa hain... caretaker to nahi...kabhi unho ne mujh se pucha... ke Adi.. tum kia bano ge... kabhi koi choice di...? nahi na... akhri baar kab unho ne mujh se baith ke idhar udhar ki baat ki thi ..yaad nahi muje... unhe meri sirf burai dikhti hai.. me fail hota nazar aata hun unhein... per me medal bhi to nahi dikha pata apne...
Abhijeet was in his study when Adi knocked the door. papa... me ander aaun...? haan aa jao... adi entered inside and found abhijeet busy in some work. he stood silently and was feeling nervous.
papa ko result dikhaun ga... to ghussa hon ge... nahi pehle gymnastic mein jo medal jeeta wo dikhata hun... nahi... result.. madel.. arey nahi nahi...
he was fighting with his thoughts when heard : han to aaj result tha na tumhara...
adi nodde nervously . Abhijeet said : to dikhao...
Adi forwarded the result card and stood there lowering his head.
abhijeet's facial expressions started changing . Seeing the color of his father's face Adi started shivering internally. after scanning the whole Abhijeet jerked his head and looked at adi
ye kia hai...
wo... papa ... res..result
wo to mujhe bhi dikh raha hai... per aisa result kiun aaya...?
wo papa me ne koshish..Adi looked down.
kia koshish haan?Sara saal uchal kood.. larai kar ke koshish... ye koshish hai... ?or uper se moo pe jawab diye ja rahey ho...
i m sorry papa... agli baar nahi ho ga sorry...
abhijeet pressed his teeth with: agli baar tumhare pass koi chance hi nahi ho ga... adersh shrivastav
k..kia matlab,,.. Adi asked fearfully
matlab ye... ke agar.. agley saal bhi yehi haal raha... to i will send you to the boarding school. saying this he stood up to move out.
Boarding... per papa me...
But Abhijeet moved out.
Adi whispered: Me ne aik gold medal bhi jeeta tha papa...
Daya really felt bad for him but this time he cant do sampathies with him because he is a teen ager young blood
so said: adi dekho beta...ye parents na bari ajeeb log hoty hain... ye baz dafa/... apne emotions theek se bahir nikal nahi paatey.. lekin is ka matlab ye nahi ke ye humari fikar nahi karte hum se pyar nahi karte...me maanta hun... abhi utna expressive nahi hai.. agar hai.. bhi to ghussa zada express karta hai..or pyar express karne mein bhi ghussa hi nikalta hai... is ke moo se,...per beta... wo tum se.. bahut pyar karta hai...he really loves u...
wo nahi chahta... ke zindagi mein... kabhi bhi... tumhe kisi pe dependent hona parey...
Adi said : to aap or Rajat uncle bhi to... Ayu or Chotey ke barey mein yehi sochtey hon ge.. per aap log to aise...actually chachu...me hun hi aisa... ke papa kabhi muje...
He stops .
this time daya spoke with some hurt: acha... ye to yaad raha... ke us ne kab kab daanta... per ye yaad nahi.. ke us ne kitna kitna pyar kiya
muje aaj bhi yaad hai... jab tumhe typhoid hua tha or ...
...
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Abhijeet and daya were sitting in beauru cafeteria and waiting for their order. Tarika had gone for some confrence..
Abhijeet said to daya : acha hua shreya aa gai... gher pe... nahi to bari problem ho jati... Adi to bukhar mein tumhe pata hi hai kesa ho jata hai...
hmm.. yaar bacha hai... ye to ho ga hi.. phir maa bhi pass nahi.. tum bhi yahan...
han ye to hai...acha... shreya ko kab nikalna hai... ?
6 baje... wese wo apni or Ashish ki packing kar ke aaii thi...to...
chalo acha hai...(then looked at his watch) arey yaar order kitni deir mein aaye ga.. jaldi se kha ke niklun me...
(then looked at daya annoyingly)
tum ne bhi muje aise hi apne sath... bitha liya... ab tak ghar pohanch bhi chuka hota/..
daya glared : baat suno... tum ne nashtey mein sirf aik rusk khaya tha... lunch bhi nahi kiya...ab ghar ja kar bhi karne waley nahi ho...
acha acha... ye mere karnamo ki list baad mein...(just then the order came)
daya said lo aa gaya order...
abhijeet sipped the coffee and about to take sandwich's bite when his cell phone rang
he recives the call with: han... shreya bolo...
and after listening something ... he stood up from his place...and cut the call with: me 20 mins mein pohanch raha hun bas...
Daya too stood up: kia hua tum aise...
he said hurriedly: arey yaar wo adi ... bohat ro raha hai... dawai nahi le raha.. vomiting bhi...me me nikalta hun..
daya said : acha ruko me bhi chalta hun.. or tum ye sandwhich...
But he moved out.
Aise daur ke nikla wo... jese,.. mano koi disaster hi ho gaya ho... (then looked at adi who was now looking down)ye pyar nahi tha beta...?
silence prevailed for some seconds.
saying this daya stood up and pat his sholder with: aik baar zara flashback mein ja ker dekho...
and move from there.
he came inside the lounge and found Abhijeet and Ashish playing some sot of game and laughing.
he called Ashish ashish ..beta ye mera cell lo... or rajat uncle ko fon kar ke pucho... wo ghar pe hain ya nahi... muje kaam hai un se...
Ashish left Abhijeet's hand and made a face: dad me... panja lara raha tha na...
Ashish...
seeing daya's face ashish took the cell phone and went.
Abhijeet already sensed that daya want to talk to him so he didnt interfere.
after ashish's departure daya started straight: to... bhatije pe bohat pyar aa raha tha.../?
abhijeet looked at him he said
kabhi adi ke bhi aise hi lad kar liya karo...us se aisa paish nahi aa saktey tum...?
abhijeet looked at other side with: muje ye lad pyar wagera jatana nahi aata...
daya glared at him: bekaar ki batein mat karo... mera personal experience hai...
adi's sleep broke because he was feeling nausea. He coughed . listening the voice shreya came in.
adi kia hua beta... uth gaye aap...
adi made so many faces and coughed again shreya came to him and patted his back :
kia hua... vomiting aaii hai...
he shook his head and said : chachi papa... papa ko phone chachi... and vomited out in the bag brought by shreya..
Shreya pat his back: beta koi baat nahi... koi nahi...
and wipe his face.
he cried suddenly: chachi papa... papa ke pass jana hai...
shrreya said : aap leto me papa ko call karti hun...
then place her hand on his forehead : arey bukhar to phir se...
he cried again: maa... papa... papa...
shreya was diling the number when another cry came
Ashish who had already moved to his brothers room found elder one crying he first tried to reach his bhaiya to give his condolence but unable to do so started accompanying him
shreya took him in her one arm and from the other she was rubbing adi's head who was not in mood of stop crying and she also talking to abhijeet.
after cutting the call shreya said: beta papa aa rahey hain.. bas...aap rona band karo...
aadi made a face
at the same time ashish: mik ..chocate...
when shreya didnt repled him he slapped on her face with his little hands
mik... mik...chocate...
shreya stood up and said to adi while ruffling her hairs : beta chachi abhi aii.. chutkoo ko milk de ke...
adi again about to cry so shreya said: beta rotey nahi na... good boy ho na...
adi just nodeed and shreya went
adi hide his face in pilow and started crying silently when felt a hand on his head.
he turned and just hug the figure sittig beside him
papa... me aap ko itaaaa yaad kar raha tha... mere sir mein... itaaaa dard bhi ho raha tha...
papa ruflled his hairs with: sorry mera bacha... me itaaa late ho gaya...
he said in muffled voice: papa... taangon mein bohat dard ho raha hai... or sir mein bhi ... (and suddenly started crying with voice)
acha..mera pyara beta... bas... aise rotey nahi na.. aap to brave boy ho...
but he cried more
papa... vomiting bhi hui... or.. or... chachi bhi pass baithi nahi...aap ...
his papa said : acha.. app do mint ruko(separated him) me aap ki ma ko call kar lun...
adi once again put his head in his father's lap with: nahi... aap yahin pass baitho...
he said bachey bas do... acha only one mint...
he shook his head with : nahi muje rehna hai aap ke pass(and started crying again now with much louder voice)
he pat Adi's head with:acha... nahi ja raha me kahin bhi apne bete ko chor ke...
but the sobs didnt stop so he said in secretive tone.
aap is tarha ro ge.. to Ashu kia sochey ga haan... ke mere bhaiiya.. aise rotey hain... bacho ki tarha...hawww...
sobs lowered a bit. He started patting his head and Adi unknowingly dozzed off feeling the sooth of fingers
at night his sleep broke due to thrust and he saw his father beside him in half lying posture with his hand still weaving his hairs..
he called him : papa...
at very first call he opened his eyes with : han beta kia hua...?
papa... pani..
his papa made him drink some water and he again slept peacefully.
after some more hours he feels some wet thing on his forehead which was providing him cool but due to med effect he was not able to open his eyes
in short during the whole night when ever he came in senses he found his father near him.
Adi called in trance: papa...
then looked around.
sach.. me.. me to bhul hi gaya tha...wo sara pyar.. wo sara lad... aik dafa... aik cheez ko mana kar diya... ya dant diya to...u can never be a father... chi...i m really sorry papa...
then said in determined tone:nahi... muje.. me papa se baat karun ga... abhi abhi sorry bolun ga...
he stood up to move in.
...
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Daya stood up with: us ke aney waley kal ke liye... us ka aaj barbad mat karo...Tumhara beta... tum se bahut pyar karta hai.. Abhijeet..usey is tarha kho mat dena...chalta hun...
Abhijeet sat there lost in his thoughts. After some time he started feeling relax like he found the way of a complicated journey like his mind become crystal clear... like now he know what he actually wants.
With fresh and clear mind he planned to go to the backyard whenland line interrupted.
He recive the call with hello..
Hello Abhijeet...
Adi entered inside with relaxed mind and saw his father busy in some phone call so he waited there. But after some time he move upstairs hearing his mother's call.
listening something from his Boss some lines appeared on abhijeet's forehead.
he ended the call with: g sir me samjh gaya...
Then sat and sighed.
i m sorry beta...
end of chappy..
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