I Hope you enjoyed my other 3 Chapters ( :

Feel free to comment and give me some of your awesome ideas for the story. That Chapter was a little OOC but I had to get her death somehow related to him. What is a better name Claire or Daisy? This is something I need to know for upcoming stories. It is either in this chapter or the next that brina goes. Sad, I know.

GoofyGoober:

Comment/Suggestion- This is really interesting! I can't wait to read what happens! =D

"With that I skipped to a breakfast of who knows what, I didn't look down
before eating the food." Hahaha! That is so Puck! =)

The only thing I would suggest is writing paragraphs, especially when two
people are talking. So, instead of,

"What did you do to me? I have a tail and dog ears." Sabrina cried. "What? I
didn't notice a difference; in fact you look better than you usually do." Puck
was grinning from ear to ear.

It would be,

"What did you do to me? I have a tail and dog ears." Sabrina cried.

"What? I didn't notice a difference; in fact you look better than you usually
do." Puck was grinning from ear to ear.

It would make it easier to read. But this story is good! Update soon! =D

Reply- Thank you! Yah, I have gotten that suggestion before, I will definitely use your example for the rest of my other chapters. The example helped me a whole lot.

Third Person's POV

Sabrina ran downstairs still crying from the fight with Puck. Her sister Daphne noticed this and began to ask why she crying. Sabrina brushed past Daphne without saying a word.

Daphne was so confused she just sat there with Elvis with her mouth open until she decided to talk to Puck. After all, her sister came running from his room.

She knocked carefully on the door. "Puck, are you in there?" Daphne whimpered.

"Come in Marshmallow. Did Grimm send you?" Puck said, clearly upset. Daphne looked up at Puck with a scared expression.

"Actually, that is what I came in here to talk about. She just ran by me, sobbing after coming out of your room. She darted out of the door with her hands on her eyes."

Sa-Grimm, I said Grimm, doesn't cry. In fact today seemed to be the first time she really broke down.

Puck knew he was to blame, but he wasn't going to worry, Sabrina could take care of herself. She'd probably be back by dinner time, at the very most. If she wasn't home by then, he'd get worried.

"Don't worry Marshmallow; Grimm is going to be fine." Little did he know how wrong he was. This was the day everything turned around for the worst.

Sabrina's POV

His words stung. I knew Puck and I never got along really well, but I didn't think he hated me. Tears began flowing down my face.

Did he really think I was ugly? I always thought he was kidding.

My stupid heart throbbed and my throat felt all dry and itchy. I ran, I ran from him, from my feelings, I didn't want to come back, I wouldn't ever have the guts to return.

I barely heard Daphne mumble something as I flew through the door.

I ran, and ran, and ran until I was gasping for breath and crying too.

I collapsed in a shady area. I didn't notice my surroundings, I was too busy scrunching my eyes up. I did feel a cold breeze though.

This didn't feel right, it felt cruel and unforgiving. I mustered up the little strength I had left and looked up.

I trembled with fear at the sight of the Scarlet Hand's fortress in front of me.

A dark figure approached me. I hurried to stand up. There wasn't much time until dusk, I could hide then, maybe.

I began to run again. The thought of safety jolted me awake.

Adrenaline surged through my body as I dodged my assailant. I noticed a boy with two pink wings up in the distance.

I needed to make it there, making it to that spot was the boundary between life and death for me.

And then I remembered the fight, would he save me, or would he decide he'd rather have me dead. Gone, nowhere to trouble him. I looked behind my shoulder and that confirmed my theory on who was coming after me, it was…

Puck's POV

It was an hour after dinner, this couldn't be a good sign. I decided to investigate outside to see if I could find her.

I flew around a bit and I was going to move onto the other side of the neighborhood but then I saw looked behind my back and saw her about a quarter mile away.

I landed in the shade of an ancient oak tree. I was standing, waiting for her to arrive.

As she got closer to me, I noticed she was scared. It was then that I noticed she was being chased by an enemy of ours.

Too surprised to move, I stood where I was, staring at her anxious face.

I was about to move when I realized it wouldn't do any good, it would be better to wait for her to reach me.

I became a bit more unnerved as I saw that the person following her was catching up to her. She was almost to me, but he was almost to her. He was…

Puck and Sabrina's POV

Nottingham!