Katzztar
2011-11-27 . chapter 3

Someone took you off watch list thinking you wouldn't update? PFFTT Makes me wonder how long they've been at FF.N, some stories takes 2 months to update due to any type of problems. Some stories may have a regular timing but then something happens ...like real life :job/exams/famliy emergency... then it could be 6 months to update. As a general rule I don't take anything off watch unless its more than 6 months ...although right now I have some on watch thats not been updated for 8 months, if I found them intertaining. I took off the ones thats been there a year though.

Sounds like Harry's up to something alright. For one, he's doing a shrinking potion over the summer ... at his muggle family's house. Two, he's mentioning the twins.

Thanks for the support, and that's hjust life. You win some, you lose some... but... oh well. I guess I just lost some, no worries... but... I'm not sure if this story will capture the interests of my audience as much as I hope... so... oh... never mind. :) (?)


2011-11-27 . chapter 4

I like cupcakes! And you get a waffle for updating! (#) ;) Sorry, I'm trying to be original... But I like waffles, and they're basically the same thing as pancakes excluding texture, so unless you don't like either, enjoy!

I'm rambling about a completely unrelated subject for no reason. I'll stop.

The story is very good so far, though my curiosity is only spiked more and more every chapter and its killing me a little bit inside. I want to know! Only don't rush the story, that would just be terrible. I like suspense, don't you fret! I'm also going to stop asking you questions, because clearly you're not going to answer them :P

And I hope I didn't sound condescending in either this review or my previous one, that was not my intention at all. I only meant to give you a bit of advice last time.

Mischief managed,

Rachel

It's a cute waffle! And nice originality!

Don't stop rambling. It's unbecoming, and that's what I am. Unbecoming. (I think...)

I can't tell anyone the story, as I had been writing an original story, told someone about it and they leaked, causing it to die hard...But I will answer questions, but suspensefully so that people will just grab on and wait for the next chapter.

Also, for you last comment, no offence taken. Everyone has a low point and some people just hit it harder than others. It did make me feel low at that point, but it's alright, it gave me a little inspiration! You got me off of my sore back end and got me typing up a couple of chapters... so don't feel bad!

And no offense, but next time... please just don't take this the wrong way, but put yourself in the authors shoes and think if it feels like a good or bad thing... Seriously though, don't take this the wrong way at all! I don't mean to hurt any feelings, and thanks for appologising (Is that spelled right? Oh well. Anyone is allowed to correct me here...) but it really was good advice and very eloquent clean up!

Nice use of the maurauder trade mark! (#)

Nanchih
2011-11-27 . chapter 4

Cupcake sounds good. What are the Twins going to do? Hedwig is rather obviously FEEDING Harry. Why hasn't Hermione sent the assignments yet? NOT like her to wait 3 days!

I hate that I can't tell you anything... I want to spoil, it's my nature... but I'm not going to ruin my story and spill, no matter how many people ask... *Runs and hides behing old TV with computer and screams* Just, wait for a few more letters and you'll get your answer... Just... I'm typing! OK? I'm typing!

Nice doing buisness with you...

Letters to the Order Chapter 4: Er, I guess…

The fourth letter from Harry was right on time. So no one worried. They were thinking that if the letters were EARLY, he was happy, healthy, and on top of the game. If the letters were ON TIME, he was having a boring summer. If the letters were LATE, he was in trouble.

No letters were early or late, so they figured Harry was just bored.

Hedwig plopped down on the table, obviously worn out from an unknown cause, then dropped the letter in front of Fred and George.

Dear Gred, Forge and everyone besides Dumbledore.

(Okay, fine. Dumbles too.)

I'm great. The summer is boring. When do I get out of here?

The world is an unhappy place for a Child without a godfather.

Whatever.

WHEN DO I GET OUT OF HERE?

Er, I guess… I meant… oh well, whatever.

Bye.

(PS. Send some treacle tart back with Hedwig…)

The Order felt appeased, and because of this, the two who were anxious were ever more nervous about Harry. Something was up, and if they didn't get a clue by the letter nearest to his birthday, they would do something about it.

AN: As this is the Holidays, and my only HW is to read, I suppose, if I can wrestle the computer out of the hands of my oppressors, I'll try to update once, twice or up to three times a week.

Happy Christmas!

If I get three updates, then, as I am about to go start the next chapter, I'll post soon as I finish!

Good luck!