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Me: will you do the honors Fang?
Fang: yes, she owns nothing!
Little sister: No! She owns the plot!
*Fang and LS argue*
Max-offf! Ari hand-chopped my windpipe, I glare at him and and drop to the ground sweeping my leg out and triping him. Swing body all the way around propeling myself up into the air. Unfortionatly when i landed i got punched right in the nose and i didnt need the blood gushing out to tell me that t was broken. In responce my fist whiped out and caught him underneath the jaw. His head flew backwards and i had the upper hand, thats when one of the idio teachers sht a pistol aiming at Ari but of course it hit me in the back. I flew forward and saw the edward guy take it out of his hand and threw him outside[windows had broken] Ignoring the pain i pushed myself up, cause yeah, I'd rather put up with a little pain than die from the hands of my little brother! I had to do a duck and roll to avoid getting kicked in the head by Ari, but as soon as his foot was out of range of my head i jumped to my feet and punched him in the face[ tomorow he'd definitly have something to show that he fought with me,hint, hint] I think we all know that i punch hard, so you can imagine how unsutling[not sure if i spelled that right] it was when he freakin' smiled! I spun around and wham! I got kicked in the head! I was thrown backward, right into Ari. "Ha, guess your little flock boy din't see you." I lashed out blindly, I couldn't focus my eyes on anything! I felt my hand make contact, i heard an oof! Now i knew how ggy felt, not being able to see anything... I dove forward and am ashamed to say that i, Maximum Ride actually cried out as my head got whacked with not Ari's fists, but ari's Talons! I know that wasn't all because i felt numb on my whole side, and when i put my hands there i felt something wet and gooey. I'd like to say that blackness consumed me but all i could see when i was awake was black. So I'm just going to say that i went to a little place where there wasn't things trying to kill me.
Fang- I was battling like 5 erasers, but i had it easy in some ways, Max was stuck with Ari and frankly Its pretty obvious he's stronger than all the other erasers} I looked over at Max, she was doing pretty good, but i caught my breathe when i saw her eyes, there was just something... off about them. I was about to go help her when a hit in the stomach jolted me back to reality, all of the flock had they're own problems, Max had always taken care of herself and she'd have to now. I punched the guy who had hit me in the head, who stumbled back and crumpled[what can i say, i hit hard, we all do] The other 4 erasers were backing away, i advanced on them. Finally when there was only 2 erasers left i did a roundhouse kick, but the eraser moved away. Now you gotta understand, i put all my strength into that kick. That guy had been taunting me about the flock... And when my kick hit its mark, i didnt see an eraser, no. I saw someone who i had grown up with! I watched in horror as Max stumbled back, right into Ari's grasp. I expected her to say something but... it was like she didnt even see me.
Thats when the eraser i had meant to get attaked. And he caught me completely off guard, i got hit in the head hard and then it was lights out Fang.
Iggy- the battle didn't last more than 20 miutes, i didnt see Fang or Max but i figured they might be fighting some outside. Okay, let me refrase that, i didnt hear them or sense them. Me and the flock finally finished up with erasers[we only killed some of them, a bunch ran away-cowards!} Nobody but us were left, Angel and Gazzy had forced everyone out. I smiled," Ha, that was easy!" I paused, expecting Max or Fang to make a comment, but i head naughta. I frowned, "wheres Max and Fang?" Thats when we heard a groan, a Fang groan. I looked in his direction and said," You okay dude? All the erasers are gone." "yeah, I'm good, is Max okay?" No answer, i hear Fang scramble to his feet, "Angel, do you hear Maxs thoughts?!" Pause, "No," We all look[ yah, i just felt for her color, obviously}
"I FOUND HER" i heard Nudge yell, but i could hear and certain uncontained amount of terror in her voice," Iggy, Max has blood all over!" I run over to where Nudge is bent over what I'm guessing is Max, i run my fingers over her ribs. "How did she get broken ribs? The erasers can't kick that hard." Silence, after a few seconds we hear a groan come from Max. I freeze, my fingers still touching the area of the broken rib. Max is known to uhh react badly when someones touching her when she wakes up[ i remember when Nudge made the mistake of shaking Max awake on christmas morning back when Jeb had just left us...} Thats when something really truly scared me," Max?" I heard Fang say," Fang?"
Fang- When Max opened her eyes i expected her to be mad at the fact that i kicked her. After a few seconds of an unresponding Max i just said,"Max?" What really horrified me was when Max didnt just roll her eyes," Fang?" Hesitently i waved my hand in front of her face, she didnt move, didnt respond. "Max, can you see me?" I was hoping she'd smile and say it was all a joke when she just shook her head.
Mmwahahahaha, cliff hanger! Is the famous and indestructuble Maximum Ride blind permanatly? Is the hit to the head the cause of ths or something else?! I'm only going to keep the vote going for so much longer, and Fang is winning so far. I'm going to give Edawrd a POV next time[maybe...] will the flock mov out of town? Find out in the next chapter! And if you review i will make the chapters longer! Do you like the idea of Fang and LS? Tell me your ideas people! And check out this community- awsome FAX stories.