Chapter 4 Fixed:
Well Kyo heard a loud THUD. He raced upstairs. "NO,NO,NO Tohru" he thought to himself. When he got upstairs he couldn't believe what he saw. Tohru was laid flat on the ground with pills all over the floor. Kyo ran and grabbed her. She was bleeding on her head. He seen she hit her head on the edge of the toilet of. "SHIGUURREE!" he screamed. Shigure ran upstairs and seen Kyo holding Tohru. "Oh God" he whispered. "ill call Hatori" with that he dashed downstairs leaving Kyo and Tohru. "Hang on a bit Tohru. Hatori's coming" tears were falling down his face. "im so sorry. I never ment for this to happen. Please don't leave me. Tohru I love you. Please hold on." When he was finished saying what he wanted to say Hatori called for him.
Tohru's POV:
Where am i? Where is everyone? I don't remember what happened. Wait. Now I remembered. I took over 30 or more pills and got light-headed and fell. Suddenly a bright light came. "what is that" I asked myself. Out of realization I was walking toward it. "Tohru!" it spoke. Then the voice hit me. "mom?" there she was standing in front of me. "mom" I whispered. She had a happy but sad look on her face. "my onigiri what are you doing here?" she asked. I hesitated for a little bit then finally spoke " I swallowed a bunch of pills and fell and I think I hit my head on something." I explained in one breathe. "honey why on earth would you do that? Did something happen?" she asked. When she asked that my tears filled my eyes. I took a deep breathe and said it. " Im pregnant and I found Kyo in his room kissing another girl." Water works came. "oh Tohru congrates and im so sorry. But look at me and listen closely okay" My mom said. I nodded and looked at her. "listen to what Kyo has to say. If you love him to the point of not letting go then stay with him. If your heart tells you to go then let go. Okay baby girl?" she explained. "you think so mom?" I looked at her. She smiled. "yes now open your eyes. I love you Tohru." "NO MOM DON'T LEAVE. I NEED YOU." I screamed till there was a flash of light. My eyes flashed open to be found in a white room.
Normal POV
Tohru looked around and realized she was in a hospital. Suddenly something orange was by her side. It was a sleeping Kyo. Tohru then freaked out a bit and fell out of bed which woke Kyo. "ow" Tohru whispered. "Tohru? Tohru! Your up thank god" he smiled till he seen her sad face and remembered what he did. "Tohru-"he began. 'Why Kyo? Give me an explanation or atleast an apology a meaningful one too."Tohru cried. Kyo looked down to his feet. "im sorry" wass he can get out. There was so much more he wanted to say. Tohru then became mad. She was never mad EVER. She clenched her fists. "im sorry? That's all you can say? After all those times we spent together you can only say sorry?" Tohru was fuming. Then she felt a lot of hurt coursing through her body . " don't say you love me if you don't." Tohru covered her face and started crying. Suddenly she was pushed against the wall by Kyo his arms wrapped around her. "What are you doing? Get off" Tohru yelled. "NO! Tohru im so sorry I never ment to hurt you. That girl is nothing to me." Kyo started off then he felt anger bubble inside of him for what he did. "Tohru please listen to me" she then looked up at him. "Don't. Ever. In. This. World. Think I don't love you. I love you with a all my heart." He said. Tohru was shocked. She didn't know what to say or do. "but why did you cheat on me with that other girl? Did I do something wrong? Did I hurt you in some way? Am I really that annoying to the extent of cheating on me?" she cried out. Kyo looked her with sad eyes. "no you didn't do anything. It was all me. Please believe me. I promise you I will never ever do It again. Please will you forgive me?" he pleaded. Tohru looked up in his eyes and seen he was telling the truth. Also she remembered what her mom had told her. She looked up.(tohru and kyo) "Promise?" "promise" "how do I know you will stay with me?"(normal now) Kyo smiled. "by this" he whispered. He got down on 1 knee in front of her. He could hear Tohru gasp. "Tohru Honda will you marry me?" Tohru was crying and was nodding her head fast and screamed "yes." Kyo then got up and kissed her then pulled her in a hug. "now im your s forever with a kid" he said. Tohru giggled at that and said I love you Kyo Sohma" he smiled. "I love you too Tohru Sohma"
The END
Authors Note: Longest chapter I wrote finally finished. Thanks to an author called G.R.A.B for helping me get back to writing and the supports from the reviews.
-BlAcKrOsE805 3:D