Extreme Makeover
Naruto Edition
Written By
Flashfire Freak
Author Note #1: I am back with another chapter of Extreme Makeover Naruto Edition, and this time, more chapters to follow. Each store will have its own chapter, so, you have been warned.
Chapter 4 – Staples
Hinata gets ready to tell Naruto her surprise. So, she goes up to Naruto and waits for him to stop talking to other people. Once Naruto is done talking, Hinata takes him to the far corner of the store, and on the way there, she prepares her self mentally, and emotionally. When they get there, Hinata takes a deep breath, and then starts talking, "Naruto,….. I need to ask you something."Naruto looks at Hinata questionably.
Hinata sighs, and then explains, "Naruto, do you like me?"
Naruto thinks for a minute, then responds, "What do you mean?"
Hinata stomps her foot in anger, then says, "I mean do you like my personality and such. I mean to say, will you be my boyfriend?"
Naruto smiles, and thinks, then finally replies, "Hinata, I don't want to be your boyfriend."
Hinata feels like she is going to cry, and not to her surprise, she cries quietly.
"Hinata, please don't cry, I mean to say is, I don't want to be your boyfriend because…… I love you, and I want to marry you." Stats Naruto.
Hinata looks at Naruto lovingly, and she says, "Sakura wanted me to hold these checks for you until I felt like you were responsible enough. I believe now is the time." Hinata hands Naruto the checks, and they leave the corner of the back of the store, hand in hand.
Meanwhile
Other part of the store, the construction crew is looking at desks and bookcases made from hardwood. When Naruto and Hinata get there, they come right in the middle of a conversation, in which no one knows that Naruto and Hinata are right behind them listening.
"I like the oak desk." Says Sakura.
"So, you aren't writing the checks or paying the bills. Besides, cherry looks cooler than oak. Besides, it lasts longer too." Stats Sasuke.
"But it is 3 times more expensive, and we don't have much money, and we still need to get some computers." Objects Sakura.
"I will get you both what you want." Says Naruto.
Sakura and Sasuke turn around and see Naruto and Hinata hand in hand.
"Hinata, what was the surprise?" asks Sakura.
"She asked me to be her boyfriend, and I said no, but I told her I wanted to be her husband, when we get enough yen to do that, until then, we will just wait." Says Naruto
End of Chapter 4
Author's Note #2: I want to tell everyone how much Weirdest1 has impacted my writing of Fanfiction. She has inspired me to write so many chapters of many of my fanfics. I want to honor her for that. She likes my writings, and she wants to read more and more and more all the time. I may even finish this series this weekend, just kidding. There will be more chapters to come.