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The train had arrived at Hogwarts and it was a brilliant evening, the castle looked magnificent. It was illuminated brightly and stuck out in contrast to the dark nights sky behind it and the hundreds of stars littering the sky sparkled and the first years gasped in delight. Every time Lily saw this view her breath caught and this time in particular the stars seemed to be shining brighter then usual and she stood there to bask in its beauty until she had to tear away from the sight and move with the rapidly growing crowds pushing her towards the carriages. Looking around Lily realised she couldn't see her friends anywhere but by this time she was already at the front of the queue and was pushed into a carriage. As she stumbled into the carriage she stopped when she hit something very solid and fell to the floor. Looking up she saw the handsome face of Sirius Black and groaned. Of all the carriages to be pushed into it HAD to be the marauders but she was torn from her thoughts when she felt strong arms lifting her onto the seat as she squealed in alarm. The carriage filled with laughter at Lily's little outburst and she turned to glare at the boys and came face to face with James and jumped so high she almost fell over again. Regaining her composure she shuffled to the edge of the seat and turned away from the boys who were still snickering in amusement. Once they reached the castle Lily practically flung herself out of the carriage and hurried towards the caste steps where her friends were searching for her and joined them in entering the great hall for the start of term feast.
James watched as Lily's auburn hair disappeared from the carriage and hurried out after her only to see her rushing off to her friends. Sirius got off after him and clapped him on the back and brought him out of his trance and the four of them made their way up to the castle going over their plans for the start of term prank which had become a tradition at the school. From first year the four of them had managed to cause some kind of disturbance and as they had grown so had the audacity of their pranks, getting grander and greater as they progressed through their education. This year would be no disappointment that was for sure..
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