Yay! I got added to a watch thing and got a review! And it's only been up for a DAY! Hoorah! Thank you bandidaciega!

Review:

bandidaciega
Really like this concept! Try to make the chapters longer, it will be even better

Thanks for the info, the first few chapters were on the iPod so I couldn't tell if it was long. I'll definitely try to do that. (As I write the shortest chapter in the book and base it on it :P )

Keep adding me to your thingy and reviewing it!

Update with Characters:

Agatha: Did you have to add the whole underwear thing in Nerd?

Me: Um... No but I thought it was funny.

Sophie: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! It was HILARIOUS.

Agatha: For now. But I know what's gonna happen! You're gonna *NerdyArtistGirl03 covers her mouth*

Me: No spoilers!

Agatha: Fine. But when IT happens, I am going to stick it in your guy's faces and laugh at you!

Sophie: What happens to me?

Agatha and Me: NO SPOILERS!

Anyway, M&M doesn't belong to me and in this version Belle is Sophie's Beatrix. Oops... Spoiler.

Agatha: Seriously Nerd?

Me: You will be the only person I will ever accept to call me Nerd. Even if it's in my username and one of my quotes is "I'm proud to be a nerd!" but who cares...

Sophie and Agatha: AHAHAHAHAAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA

Every four years and on the eleventh day of the eleventh month, parents send their children off to the School for Enlighted and Rebel, hoping they'd be accepted. They always only sent them for one of these two reasons:

They want to be rid of their children

They want the better for their children

Stefan, Sophie's father, made it look like it was the second one. Even though Sophie saw right through it. "He just wants to get rid of me. So he can marry the idiot, Honora." Sophie thought. She was angry. "He can marry her when I'm gone." Sophie thought.

Callis, Agatha's mother, wanted better for her daughter. But made it look like she wanted to be rid of her. Agatha simply grumbled.

There was a library in the small town of Gavaldon. Every couple years, yearbooks would appear. When the librarian was asked how he got these books, he replied with, "They appear at the doorstep."
This however, simply made the officials think, "Then someone must put them there." Which of course lead to months of questioning everyone in the town. Sadly for the townspeople, it was simply impossible to leave. Gavaldon was in the middle of a forest, trees and thorns everywhere. No way out. So everyone had to be questioned. Depressing for the citizens, happily for the officials.

Enough of that. Now, about the yearbooks. Every time one came in, it would come with a partner. A rebel one, and an enlightened one. The one from the School of Rebel, was a brown leather bound book that was large. The one from the School of Enlightened was white (made of silk bound to cardboard) with gold embellishments on the corners. Each had a picture of a star student every year. Inside, they both had the whole school photo, Prom pictures for the School of Enlightened, Trial of Survival, and Miss/Mr Rebel/Enlighted etc. etc. All parents would clamber to see if their children had one something. Even mothers and fathers who hate their children want to know if their own are good at something. The SE (School of Enlightened) yearbook was always laced with the smell of a rose. The SR (School of Rebel) was always laced with a murky smell of who knows what. These books were how people found out about their family. Usually.

Agatha awoke the next day and put on black knee high boots with silver clasps, Sophie awoke the next day and put on pink high heels. While Agatha put on ripped jeans and a concert T-Shirt with a band name that wasn't real (or so everyone thought. Gavaldon never got concerts) and black fingerless gloves, Sophie put on a hot pink tank with a white overshirt, a pink skirt, and a tan fedora. This was Sophie's casual. Agatha's outfit was her fancy. After looking at herself in the mirror, she eventually threw away the fedora because today was the day she would see if she'd be sent to the school and she didn't want to show up to SE and have hat hair. While Sophie was worrying about hat hair, Agatha was slumping out the door because her mother had pushed her. She took out the plastic bag her mother had given her and took the M&M cookies out of it. As she chewed on it and slouched, she spotted Sophie, talking to Belle. Agatha stalked up to them and put her cookie in her bag.
She heard Sophie's voice trying to stay nice to Belle. Belle was wearing a little pale blue dress with black boots.

"So..." Sophie said.

"Smart comment." Belle said. Sophie grunted.

"With words like that, there's no way you'll get in. Unless to the SR of course." Belle smirked. Sophie gasped. "You don't know a thing about the schools! You won't get in yourself either. I don't believe any word anyone says about you going instead of me. And we all already know I am not going to go to the SR. The whole town knows that's going to be Agatha!" Sophie hissed.

"Ooh. Finally a sentence." Belle said, unintimidated, "I better get to the line up. And we all know Agatha's just your Enlightenment Project."

It was Agatha's turn to gasp. They heard. They wandered to Agatha's bush she was hiding in. Agatha sprinted away. They didn't see because right as they neared the bush, Sophie said, "Ooh, now we're worrying about bushes that rustle. Great job Belle!"

Belle replied with "I heard something!"

"I know. It was a bush!"

"Shut up Sophie Elina Fiola!"

"Only if you shut up Belle Gertrude Huntress!"

"My middle name isn't Gertrude!"

"I suppose it's I'm Better!"

"Ooh nice comeback!"

"Shut up Belle Gertrude Huntress!"

"If my middle name is Gertrude you're fat!"

"I'm not fat!"

"My middle name isn't Gertrude!"

"Is too!"

"Is not"

Then etc. etc. Agatha smirked at her easy escape. Then the Bell. The Bell meant it was time to line up. So Agatha stomped out to get to it. Just at the right timing too, because Belle and Sophie had stopped arguing and were heading to line up too.

The line up went really fast. Considering the trio consisting of Agatha, Belle and Sophie were at the end of the line, having taking so long, and soon ended up to the middle in a minute. So far no one had gotten in. Hundreds of people had already left the line slumping. When they got there, Belle had finished pruning her hair and buffing her nails. She was at the front. This was where she got embarrassed. The man at the till was about to tell her whether or not she got in when Belle said, "Where's my schedule? I want to get to my dorm in the SE ASAP!" But the man at the till said, "Sorry Belle. You're not accepted into the school." Belle gasped. Now, if you remember, Belle was wearing a pale blue dress, but it was pretty long. She stepped on the front of it and the seam at the back of it. It ripped all the way down. Agatha and Sophie laughed so hard they were crying. Belle turned pink. But soon recovered her face and held the back of it and walked carefully away. But then Sophie yelled,

"I love your froggy boxers!"

Beatrix turned sideways and was blushing madly. She mumbled something. For some reason, Agatha turned pink as well.

"Ahem."

Agatha and Sophie turned. The till man said, "Sophie and Agatha, here are your schedules. Please join the other one at the other side."

They gasped.

"I can't believe it!" Sophie said, pink with color. But then, her face drained all the color out of her face and she stopped. "First year... of the rebels?!" Agatha and Sophie peered at her parchment schedule.

Sophie of Woods Beyond

Rebel, 1st Year
Theft Tower 66

Session Faculty

1:Theft Bilious Manley
2: Defence Lady Lesso
3: History of Rebels August Sader
4: Special Talents Sheeba Sheeks
5: -Lunch-
6: Stealth Lady Grelatt
7: Survival Rila the Water Sprite
(Forest Group #3)

"But... But... But if you're in Rebel... Than I'm in..." Agatha stammered as she looked at her white silk paper schedule.

Agatha of Woods Beyond

Enlightenment, 1st Year
Charity Tower 51

Session Faculty

1: Etiquette Pollux
2: Communication Uma
3: History of the Enlightened August Sader
4: Charity Prof. Clarissa Dovey
5: -Lunch-
6: Enlightenment Prof. Emma Anemone
7: Survival Rila the Water Sprite
(Forest Group #3)

"Um..." Agatha said, trying to make light of the situation. "At least we're in the same Forest Group... Whatever that is..."

Sophie glared. She opened her mouth, but right then a black horse picked Sophie and her miniskirt up and a white horse picked Agatha and her sensible jeans up. Sophie sat like a lady and pushed her skirt down. Agatha rode her horse like cowboy without reins. The horses bucked them to the schools quickly. Never underestimate the power of a horse. Agatha and Sophie sailed over to their separate schools, with an iron wall in between.

They were both knocked out for a while, but both were awaken by a voice, but two quite different ones.

Cliffhanger again? I don't know. Anyway, don't forget about my poll! I tried to make this one longer too. It's on my computer. So, I'm kind of leaving SGE and going on my own path now, so... yeah. Oh... character update.

Sophie: How come I get *NerdyArtist03 covers her mouth*

Me: I just said CLIFFHANGER! No spoilers.

Agatha: Fine. But I was about to ask the same question. Different name though.

Me: Shut up and deal with it.

Belle: How come my dress split in the back?

Me: Because it was badly sewn.

Belle: I sewed it.

Me: I repeat. Because it was badly sewn.

Belle: I'm gonna come back you know!

Me: I know. And you just gave a spoiler.

Belle: TOO BAD! I was publicly humiliated!

Me: In front of two people.

Agatha (To Sophie): I find it funny how we are just sitting here staring at their conversation.

Sophie (To Agatha): Let's go over that dance number.

Agatha: Whhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhy?

Also, I'm sorry 'bout all the undy jokes. Sorry! I just had to.