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Four {451}
Max's POV
As we headed towards the two 'Mountain dots', I scanned the ground for Total. I had put up mental blocks, but Angel was getting suspicious. Did I not mention that she could read minds? Whoops... Angel could also control minds. One of the many mutant powers we have laying around.
Anyhoo, as we got closer, the dots became more defined. It looked like two plumes of light purple smoke. They kind of reminded me of Fang, flying up in a spiralling beam of light, his wings tinting purple. I tilted my wing so that we were heading for the most southerly plume, and the others followed.
About 50 feet from the smoke, Angel gasped. "Total!" She turned to me, a cold look in her eye that she had learned from me. "You lied! He's down there! Petrified!" She scowled at me and swooped down towards to the trees beside the plume before I could stop her.
"I didn't know." I whispered to the wind.
"It's okay, Max. She'll forgive you." Gazzy said.
"Once she has Total, of course." Nudge butted in. "If she finds him hurt, she's gonna hate you sooooo bad! But then you'll probably suggest going to your Mom's, and she'll sulk until we get there, but then she'll see Akila and-" Iggy flew over and covered Nudge's mouth.
Akila, Total's doggy girlfriend, or should I say Fiancée, was huge, too heavy to fly with us around the country, so she stayed in Arizona with my mom, and my half sister Ella. Mom is a vet, so if anything happens to Total, or one of us for that matter, we can go see her and get all better.
At the moment, Mom had to get better herself, after being kidnapped by the Evil Mr. Chu last month. Mr. Chu owns some corporation that keeps polluting the environment, and my mom set up an organisation, the CSM, The Coalition to Stop Madness. Mom kept pissing Mr. Chu off, so he kidnapped her. We got her back, with a little help from the U.S Navy and some mutated fish called the Krelp.
Read my other books. I don't have time to explain every little detail.
Meanwhile, in the real world, I angled my wings to follow Angel. Hmmm. The smoke's coming from a clearing. I was about to land when I noticed the group of people below. I back-pedalled, trying to make sure no one saw me. Luckily, the group was facing the other way. One of them, a boy with bronze hair turned and saw me immediately. All I could do was hover there as the others turned and locked me into their vision.
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So. This is chapter four. I'm a bit distracted at the mo, I'm going to some camp thingy where you can only speak Latin, Ancient Greek, or Gailge (Irish). I have to try to get my latin and gailge back up to scratch. No easy task.
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