Hey mina-san, NinGo here with another chapter of GYGOD! Seeing as I'm tired and I'm for some reason writing this bit last….. I'll just do the disclaimer now.
I do not own Naruto or Yugioh Gx.
Chapter 6- Slap's, glass and rants! Not exactly Naruto's best day.
It was yet another day for Uzumaki Naruto at the Duel Academy, another day of classes, duels and unbearable stupidity from a certain red clad duo. Naruto grit his teeth as he lay on the Ra Yellow dormitory balcony, glaring at the sky as he recalled the other day's events.
XXXFlashbackXXX
"…and I attack the player directly!" 'Elemental Hero Featherman' flew at the screaming Manjoume, hitting him directly and causing him to fall to his hands and knees. After a few seconds to take in what just happened the crowd roared, twice as loud as they did at Naruto's duel. Said Ra Yellow was currently gaping in utter shock.
'That idiot actually won!' he thought astounded. What shocked him even more was that it wasn't just dumb luck that helped him win; he actually lured Manjoume into a trap! Again! You'd think the Obelisk, as arrogant as he was, would've learned from the last time. "You did it, Big Bro!" shouted the Blue-midget who was standing with Naruto and Misawa. He watched as Judai absorbed the attention. 'Cocky jackass!' he thought angrily, conveniently forgetting he did the same not ten minutes prior. Judai pointed to the defeated (mentally and literally) Obelisk.
"Gotcha! That was a fun duel!" he said. Naruto saw Manjoume glare at the idiot. Naruto blinked as he saw the midget and Misawa run up to the moron to congratulate him. He glared at the 'betrayal' his friend showed then looked up as the chairman spoke.
"You have shown me, Yuki Judai! Your trust in your deck, your passionate friendship with your monsters… and most importantly, a duelling soul that never gives up in a fight…" despite his current anger/shock Naruto pouted 'I have those too!' he whined childishly in his head. Haku facepalmed, was the boy bipolar or something? "These are things I'm sure everyone here as acknowledged. Naruto snorted internally, the day he acknowledged the boys 'luck' as a skill was the day he saw a flying pig do the Heimlich manoeuvre on a tuna sandwich because it swallowed the plot down the wrong pipe! "So, as the winner, Yuki-kun, you are… being promoted to Ra Yellow!" Naruto's eyes widened. 'No way!' he thought 'Oh god, I'm going to have to put up with his idiocy even more!' turning with a "Tch" he stormed of as his best friend welcomed his most hated person to the dorm. Thinking of Manjoume, he scoffed.
'If you want something done right, you have to do it yourself!'
XXXFlashback-endXXX
It had been a few days since then and to Naruto's relief the idiot turned down the offer, claiming to prefer red. 'What's wrong with yellow' he thought, once again forgetting he didn't like it at first either. 'Yellow is the blaze of the golden sun! Yellow is the burning heat of a certain hotdog condiment! And most of all…' he jumped to his feet pointing dramatically "IT'S THE COLOUR OF MY HAIR!" he yelled looking off into the distance.
"What is?" blinking, Naruto looked to the ground to see none other than Tenjoin Asuka looking at him oddly. Sweat poured down his face as he looked at her, before throwing himself to the floor. Asuka blinked at the strange action, before the eccentric-blonde popped back up, casually leaning against the side.
"Hey Asuka-san, sup." He said coolly, Asuka sweatdropped at the boy.
"Erm, not much?" she said almost asking. Naruto nodded before jumping of the balcony, causing the girl to let out a slight shriek as he before her in a crouch. Straightening, he grinned with his arms crossed behind his back.
"So, what can I do ya for?" he asked her. Recovering from her shock, she walked off, motioning for him to follow. Shrugging he did so, walking beside her. She was silent for a few minutes before looking up almost nervously.
"I was wondering if, if you'd like to talk for a bit." She requested, blushing invisibly. Blinking, Naruto pretended to mull it over.
"Hmmm let's see. Continue to stare at the sky all day or talk with a good friend." He tapped his chin playfully "Sure, why not!" he finished grinning. Her blush grew slightly, enough so that she noticed it. Thankful his eyes were closed from smiling, she quickly shook it off. 'What's wrong with me? He's just a friend. Besides, I need to focus on my Duelling.'
After a few minutes of chatting about nothing, the two of them sat next to the giant lake, and Asuka watched as Naruto skipped stones along the water. The water reminded her of her duel with Judai, which caused her to remember Naruto's behaviour towards the Slifer. Speaking up, she decided to question him on it.
"So, why do you dislike Judai so much?" his hand stopped mid-through, a dark look covering his face, unseen by the girl behind him. She frowned at his frozen position, before he followed through and threw the stone, causing it to plop loudly halfway across the lake. He turned to her, clueless expression on his face.
"What do you mean?" he asked, trying to play it off as nothing. Asuka wasn't convinced, however and pushed on.
"You know what I mean! You take any opportunity to insult him, and your nearly always glaring at him in class." She said, growing annoyed at her friends avoidance over the matter. Naruto took her growing annoyance the wrong way, however and snapped at the girl.
"YA WANNA KNOW WHY! BECAUSE HE'S AN IDIOT, AN INSUFFERABLE MORON! ALL HIS DUELS ARE WON DUE TO SHEER DUMB LUCK INSTEAD OF ACTUALL SKILL! AND HE PLAYS IT OFF LIKE IT'S NOTHING!" weeks of anger and annoyance were spewing out of him, unable to contain it anymore. Asuka stared at him, wide-eyed in shock and a little fear. "NOT ONLY IS HE ANNOYING AS FUCK, BUT HIS STUPID LITTLE BLUE CHEERLEADER IS ALMOST AS ANNOYING, IF NOT MORE SO! BUT AT LEAST HE ACCEPTS THE FACT THAT HE'S A NO GOOD, TALENTLESS, BUFF-"he was cut off as he felt a sharp slap to the face. He stared dumbly at Asuka, who had her arm outstretched, glaring at him. She turned away from him and began to walk off. Stopping, she turned her head.
"You know, I thought you were a nice person. But now I know your no better than Manjoume or any of the other Obelisk Blues!" turning again she walked of brisk pace. Naruto stared for a few moments, before recovering.
"Wait, Asuka!" he called out, to no avail. Staring at her retreating figure, he fell onto his backside, hands covering his face. He groaned, 'Forget Judai, I'm the biggest idiot on this island!'
Naruto was wondering around the Academy, dejected from earlier. Naruto looked at himself in his reflection in a window 'What's wrong with me lately? Also, why do I hate him so much?' he pondered, turning to look full on at the window. He blinked as his reflection blurred to show him, but in a different outfit. This outfit was an orange and black jacket, orange pants and a black headband. The image of him had its hands behind its head, grinning. The image shimmered as it was overlapped with one of Judai, in the exact same pose with the same grin. Feeling a rush of anger he suddenly punched the window, causing it to shatter into thousands of tiny pieces. Panting, he glared at where the window used to be, before a twinge in his hand made him look down. He stared at his hand, not really taking in the sight of shards of glass stuck in it, or the blood running down his arm. Not-so-carefully pulling the shards out, he dropped them on the ground and made his way back to his dorm room, holding his hand against his jacket.
'Is it because… he reminds me… of how I used to be…?'
Naruto was about to enter his dorm room when he heard a voice behind him. "Hey, Naruto" behind him was Misawa making his way over. "I just built a new deck and I want to tes- what happened to your hand!" he gasped. Naruto looked at it, the blood had dried and the wound closed. He looked up and grinned.
"Oh hey Misawa, what's up?" Misawa grabbed his hand.
"What happened to your hand" he repeated frantic. Naruto laughed and pulled it out of his grasp.
"Oh, this? I accidently spilt some paint on myself while I was, err, walking." He finished lamely. Misawa raised a brow. Naruto spoke again before he could say anything else. "So what was it you wanted, a duel?" Misawa looked him in the eye for a few seconds, and smiled.
"Yes, I need to test my new test deck." Nodding Naruto went inside to grab his deck and Ra Yellow custom disk, complete with a change of Jacket.
"Right, let's go!" nodding his head, Misawa followed his friend to one of the indoor duel arenas.
Twenty minutes later they were de-powering their disks. Naruto wiped some sweat from his brow.
"Damn Misawa that water deck is tough! You gonna keep it? He inquired. Misawa smirked at his friend as he pulled his deck out.
"Yes, after I've ironed out some of its flaws." The two of them made to leave but not before a voice called out to them.]"Oi, Uzumaki!" turning, they saw a green, spiky haired Obelisk in the standard Obelisk Blue jacket. "I want to duel you!" he declared, pointing at Naruto. Exchanging a glance with Misawa, he just shrugged and walked back onto the duelling field. The Obelisk smirked and stood opposite him.
Naruto grinned "So, what's your name. Ya know, so I can add it to my 'People I made cry' list!" The Obelisk growled and activated his disk.
"Yamashima Yuu, remember it well, for it'll be in your nightmares!" he growled. Naruto smirked.
"Is that what you say to girls as well, man you must be quite the charmer!" he said tauntingly. Yamashima's eyes narrowed.
"This coming from the biggest pervert in Duel Academy!" he snarled. Naruto frowned, offended. Yamashima smirked. "What's wrong, don't like it when it's flipped onto you, do you!" he sneered. Naruto smirked right back.
"Heh, I don't mind being flipped at all. The views much nicer!" he said, giggling slightly. Yamashima growled again. "Well, that's enough talking, neh?" Yamashima sneered at him.
"For once we agree."
"Duel!"
Naruto drew first. "I summon the monster card 'Akatsuki- Zetsu' in attack mode." A very tall, well, man probably wouldn't be the right term. Like the other 'Akatsuki' cards, the figure had a black cloak with red clouds. However, the cloak was wider to accommodate the giant plant jaws poking out of it! The mouth opened to reveal a man with green hair, his skin half black, half white, with yellow eyes, and all that was on the black side was a yellow pupil.
#Akatsuki- Zetsu- Plant/Earth lvl: 3#
#Atk/Def- 1000/1000#
"And I'll leave it at that." He finished. Misawa frowned; he hadn't seen that card yet. He smirked, seems like his frival was hiding some things from him. (Oooh you have no idea buddy!)
Yamashima frowned 'is he taunting me' "My turn! Draw!" looking over his hand he decided to start of strong. "I summon 'Gladiator Beast Darius' in attack mode!" A humanoid horse in red armour and a whip appeared on Yamashima's side of the field.
#Gladiator Beast Darius- Beast-warrior/Earth lvl: 4#
#Atk/Def- 1700/300#
Naruto raised a brow 'Huh, a 'Gladiator Beast' deck huh' he smirked 'looks like I couldn't have started with a better card!'
Yamashima pointed at 'Zetsu' "'Darius', attack his 'Akatsuki-Zetsu'!" The anthromorph neighed and charged at the Plant-man, swinging its whip. Naruto smirked.
"Not so fast, 'Zetsu's' special effect activates!" the plant-man shrugged of its cloak, revealing it to be genderless. It split in two just before the horse hit, causing the whip to miss. Yamashima's eyes widened.
"Wha-What the hell!" he shouted, incredibly weirded out by what he just saw. Where 'Zetsu' once was, was two 'men', one black and the other white. Naruto smirked.
"'Zetsu's' special effect, It activates when Zetsu is targeted by a monster for attack. By removing 'Zetsu' from play I can summon one 'Zetsu- black' and one 'Zetsu- white' token to take its place, negating your attack!" he finished with a smirk.
#Zetsu- Black/White Token- Earth#
#Atk/Def- 500/500#
Yamashima growled at the effect, it rendered his 'Gladiator Beast' deck's strategy useless! Putting down a facedown he ended his turn. Suddenly, the two 'Zetsu' tokens merged back together into their original form and Naruto grinned.
"Oh yeah, during the end phase of the turn the effect was activated, by removing the tokens, I can special summon 'Zetsu' back from out of play." He said as he drew a card and Yamashima frowned at the annoying effect. 'How am I supposed to beat that thing?' Misawa was staring at it intently, and being the genius that he was he had already figured out its weakness. Naruto summoned the card he drew. "I summon 'Akatsuki- Hidan' in attack mode!" A man with the typical Akatsuki robe appeared on the field, only this one was torn so half his torso was showing. He had a headband around his neck, and below that was some sort of pendent. In one hand he had a large, tri-bladed red scythe, and the other something that looked like a cylinder. His hair was silver and slicked back.
#Akatsuki- Hidan- Warrior/Dark lvl: 4#
#Atk/Def- 1800/0000#
Taking note of Yamashima's facedown, he decided to use 'Hidan's' effect. "I activate 'Akatsuki- Hidan's' special effect! By sacrificing 500 life points I can destroy one of your monsters!" Yamashima's eyes widened again at the effect used. 'Hidan's' skin turned black with a white skeletal decoration (best way I could describe it) and the cylinder extended into a spear. Burying the scythe into the ground, he held the spear with two hands and shoved it through his chest. 'Gladiator Beast Darius' shattered with a loud horsey scream. Naruto pointed at Yamashima, deciding to take a risk with his weaker monster, "Now 'Zetsu' attack him directly!" The Plant-man melted into the ground, and while Yamashima was frantically looking around for him, he emerged from behind him, slashing the duellist with a root like sword where his arm was. Yamashima cried out in pain and 'Zetsu' merged with the ground and reappeared next to 'Hidan', arm back to normal. Naruto smirked, 'Huh, looks like it's either not a counter trap, or he needs to have a monster on the field.'
#Naruto- 3500#
#Yamashima- 3000#
"Now I place a facedown and end my turn." Naruto finished with a taunting smirk. Yamashima glared at him, before drawing a card.
"I play the spell card, 'Gladiator Proving Ground' this card allows me to add 1 level 4 or lower 'Gladiator Beast' monster from my deck to my hand." Taking out his deck, he spread it out in his hand and picked a card, before shuffling his deck and putting it back in his disk. "Now, I summon 'Gladiator Beast Equeste' in attack mode." An armoured centaur with wings appeared on the field.
#Gladiator Beast Equeste- Winged Beast/Wind lvl: 4#
#Atk/Def- 1600/1200#
"Now I activate the spell card 'Shrink'! This card halves the attack of one monster on the field, and I choose 'Akatsuki-Hidan'!" Hidan turned into a chibi (now, take a few moments to imagine chibi Hidan!)
#AH- 900#
Yamashima smirked. "Now, 'GBE' (too lazy…) attack Hidan!" the centaur charged at the chibi monster, which caused several girls who came out of nowhere to boo. Misawa gaped at the sudden number of females, where did they come from! Naruto had a worried look on his face, before he smirked, catching Yamashima of guard.
"I activate the spell card, 'Kawarimi no Jutsu'! This card allows me to change your monsters target to another monster I control, and I choose 'Zetsu'!" In twin poofs of smoke, 'Zetsu' stood where 'Hidan' was, and vice versa. Before 'Equeste's' attack could connect, the plant-man once again split in half and avoided the attack. Yamashima growled in frustration, 'He's too damn slippery, almost like a ninja!' he though internally and angrily. He ended his turn.
Naruto smirked, drawing a card, this was way too easy. He looked at the facedown. 'Hmm, let's see if my theory was right.' "'Akatsuki-Hidan', attack his monster!" the now normal sized man (which had many of the girls drooling) charged at the centaur, waving his scythe with a crazed grin. Yamashima smirked, before he realised a fatal flaw 'Wait, 'Horn of the Phantom Beast' only works with a Beast-Warrior monster! SHIT' he watched helplessly as his monster was destroyed by the silver-haired-psycho.
#Naruto- 3500#
#Yamashima- 2800#
Naruto frowned 'eh? Is that really a trap card? Or maybe it's a spell card' he shrugged 'oh well, if it didn't activate then, then it won't activate now' "'Zetsu' attack directly." It did so.
#Naruto- 3500#
#Yamashima- 1800#
Yamashima held his body in pain. Drawing a card, he realised he had to make this turn count, otherwise it would all be over next turn. Looking at the card he smiled, this would buy him some time. "I summon 'Gladiator Beast Hoplomus' in defence mode." A giant rhino humanoid with large, armoured arms appeared in a crouching position with its arms crossed protectively.
#Gladiator Beast Hoplomus- Rock/Earth lvl: 4#
#Atk/Def- 700/2100#
"Next I equip it with the spell card (deep intake of breath recommended) 'Gladiator Beast's Battle Archfiend Shield'." A giant demonic looking shield appeared over the rock rhino's arms, hiding it completely from Naruto's view. Naruto frowned, not only did that monster have a high defence, but unless he was mistaken, that spell card would take a hit for the monster, so that meant Hidan's effect was out, unless he waited another turn then he could destroy it after. But that then gave his opponent an opportunity to sacrifice it to summon a strong monster. But, if he didn't use Hidan's effect, then Yamashima could order the rhino to attack Hidan. And it wouldn't be destroyed because of that shield. And also, because when a Gladiator Beast was attacked or attacks, it gets 'tagged' out with another one from his deck, and that monster would get a special effect from being special summoned that way. And that definitely be bad for him. Naruto's frown deepened when he finished analysing his difficult situation. Looking at his hand, he noticed that he had the trap card 'C0' (quick A/N, I made a mistake last chapter; traps can only be activated the turn after they're set. You guys think I should change it to a spell card, or keep it as a trap). If he was lucky enough, he could draw 'Akatsuki- Deidara' and plant the trap, activating it when Yamashima special summoned a 'Gladiator Beast' and destroying all the cards on the field.
Yamashima was enjoying the expression on his face. "Hey, Uzumaki!" Naruto looked up from his deck, which he had been staring at intently. "Are you ready to be defeated? I'm sure you've already figured out that this duel is mine next turn! Naruto looked at his hand, then blinked and resisted the urge to Facepalm V2. He forgot about 'Hidan's' other special ability. Shaking his head, he was glad Kaiba wasn't there to see this; he'd never live it down! 'The rush of adrenaline from this match is keeping me from thinking straight!' he realised. Deciding to use this chance to calm down, he asked Yamashima a question.
"Hey, Crappyshima!" he bristled at the nickname "Why did you randomly decide to duel me?" Yamashima closed his eyes for a few seconds before opening them, glaring at Naruto.
"You wanna know why? I'm sick of you!" raising a brow from the obscure answer, he asked him the obvious question.
"Why? Have I done something to offend you? Did I make out with your sister? Did I throw away one of your fan letters? Did I steal your pencil?" Yamashima was burning red with anger. Bursting, he snapped at the blonde.
"NO! I'm sick of the way you act so casual around the 'Queen of Obelisk Blue, Tenjoin Asuka-kun!" Naruto's eyes widened. He had forgotten about her, what with the punching a window, hanging with Misawa and duelling Yamashima and all. His mood immediately dropped when he remember how they parted earlier. Yamashima didn't notice his expression and carried on "You speak and flirt with her so casually, as if you think your friends! There's no way such a beauty, from Obelisk Blue no less, would actually be friends with a guy like you! You're unbearable! You swagger around the Academy like you own the place, while hating on Yuki Judai. Well you want to know something, you're not much better than he is!" The considerable crowd that had built up during the duel was staring at the scene in complete shock. Misawa was glaring furiously at the way he spoke to his best friend, and incidentally, his friend from Slifer Red. Naruto's head was bowed, fingernails breaking the skin on his palms; he was clutching them so tight. He could no longer hear Yamashima's rant. Instead he heard memories he had tried desperately to forget.
"Look, it's the demon boy!"
"Ugh! Where does he get off, walking around the village as if he belongs here?
"He's unbearable!"
Naruto grunted, grabbing his head at the painful memories, He was shaking and everyone looked at him worriedly, except Yamashima who was still ranting. Naruto started to growl, fingers gripping his hair tightly, bending over slightly, hand dropping to the floor, cards scattering. His head hurt so much, he couldn't take it anymore, he couldn-
A soft, familiar hand pressed on his shoulder. He looked to the left slightly, to see a softly smiling Haku next to him, emitting a calming aura. 'Don't listen to him, Naruto-kun. You're ok, you're safe. You're at Duel Academy, Kaiba's school.' Hearing both her voice and the familiar name, he calmed down slightly, grip on his hair loosening. Taking several deep breaths, he let his hands fall to the side. Standing upright, he sent a small, albeit shaky smile to Haku.
'Thanks' he mouthed to her. She just smiled, a tear going down her face. Seeing him like that reminded her of the nights she spent comforting him as he cried himself to sleep, and she hated seeing her first friend like that. Bending down, Naruto picked up his hand and drew a card from his deck. Smirking, he looked over at Yamashima who was still ranting. He shouted at him.
"HEY! Rantyshima!" the green-haired Obelisk stopped mid rant and looked at Naruto curiously. Naruto grinned "Get ready for your defeat!" The crowd watched as the Ra Yellow had regained his cool. Misawa smiled 'All right, he's calmed down!'
Yamashima sneered at the blonde. "Hah! What are you talking about? Unless you can't tell, I've got this duel in the palm of my hand!" Naruto's confident grin threw him off balance, however. Naruto smirked.
"First of all, I activate 'Hidan's special effect!" the silver haired man stabbed himself, decreasing Naruto's life points and destroying the equip spell. "Next, I sacrifice 'Akatsuki-Zetsu' to summon one of my most powerful cards! Come on out, 'Akatsuki- Uchiha Itachi'!" 'Zetsu shattered and a flock of crows appeared where he stood. They combined together to form a man in his early twenty's, with black hair in a ponytail, two lines running down his stoic face. He wore the typical Akatsuki robe with scratched out headband, this one with a symbol that vaguely resembled a leaf.
#Akatsuki- Uchiha Itachi- Warrior/Fire lvl: 6#
#Atk/Def- 2500/2200#
Yamashima's eyes widened at the powerful monster, before smirking. "So what? Even if you attack and destroy 'Hoplomus', I can special summon another 'Gladiator Beast' with a special effect, one that'll destroy your monster, so it's useless!" Yamashima cackled, after he beat the blonde-bastard, Tenjoin-kun will realise how awesome he is and leave that lowly Ra Yellow for him! If one could read his mind, they would call him deluded, but if they read Naruto's, they would call him screwed.
"Heh" Naruto chuckled "Normally you would be right, but" he picked a card from his hand "This card will bring about your defeat! I activate the spell card, 'Amaterasu'" The card in his hand showed a generic ninja, face set in a pained shriek as he was covered in black flames. "As long as I have a monster on my side of the field with 'Uchiha in its name, I can destroy one monster on your side of the field!" Yamashima gasped "That's right; I target 'Gladiator Beast Hoplomus'!" Itachi's eyes turned red, with a black pinwheel replacing the pupil. He closed his left eye as black flames flew out of his right one, covering 'Hoplomus' and destroying it. "Unfortunately, when a monster uses 'Amaterasu', it loses 500 attack and defence points."
#AUI- 2000/1700#
Naruto smirked "Unfortunately for you however, 'Itachi still has enough attack points to finish you off! 'Itachi', finish him, Grand Fireball Jutsu!" Yamashima's expression was one of utter fear/shock as a giant fireball flew at him. He screeched in agony as he felt the virtual flames lick his skin.
"GAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!" when the fire died down, he fell to his knees…
#Naruto- 3000#
#Yamashima- 0000#
…defeated.
Naruto walked of the field among cheers from the crowd. Stopping, he spoke to the near comatose boy over his shoulder. "Never doubt any of my friendships ever again, you fucking little shit!" Yamashima was on his knees, hands limp by his side, body and head bent slightly back, and his mouth wide open and his eyes pure white, smoke coming of his body. Naruto made his way out of the room, Misawa right behind him. Looking both ways, the genius spotted his friend leaning against the wall next to the doorway. He looked at him for a few moments, before asking him-
"Are you alright, Naruto?" he asked carefully. Naruto opened his eyes and nodded.
"Yeah, I'll be fine Daichi." Misawa blinked at the use of his first name, 'he's definitely not alright.' "I… I'm just gonna go for a walk." Nodding in understanding, the black haired boy watched his friend walk of slowly. Misawa looked at him, determined expression on his face.
'I'm going to find out what that was all about sooner or later, and when I do' he smiled 'well, I'm sure talking about it will help.' He walked back to the dorm, thinking about his friend, wondering what made him act the way he did. Suddenly he chuckled.
"I wonder when he'll realize that he won due to 'dumb luck'!" the genius's laughter rang throughout the corridor.
Naruto was walking through the forest that surrounded the Academy, finding the familiar setting relaxing, just what he needed after that stressful duel. Thinking about Yamashima's motivation made him think about Asuka, and what happened between them. He sighed 'I really need to apologise to her, I don't want to lose her as a friend. Or maybe miss out on a chance for more.' Going further into the forest, he froze completely when he heard a girly scream. One of fear, and he recognised the voice all too well. Turning sharply, he called out into the night.
"ASUKA!"
Chapter end
Wow, this chapter got pretty intense, didn't really expect that when I started typing. Once again my brain has taken over and put my body on autopilot! I was actually going to take a break today, but then I wrote a little bit, and then I wrote a lot, and here we go!
If you can't guess, this takes place during the daytime of episode 5, when Judai and co. explore the abandoned dorm.
Alright, question time!
Guest (what a name) says "I don't know who is who, except Naruto. Use the English names of the characters, and I'll probably continue reading."
Wow, forget asks, more like demands! Simple answer, no. You've managed to get to chapter 4, so you obviously aren't doing too badly! Why should I change my writing style just because one person demands me too? It just ain't happening! I may have been happy to do some other things, like change it from Osiris to Slifer (actually, that's pretty much the only thing I did for someone) but to actually change the Japanese names to English, in chapter 6, just to keep a single reader? I don't think so, if you don't like how I write, then you can ship off! I may be generally kind, and humble, but when you make such a demand, and not even say "please" it really pisses me off! And excuse me if I sound all high and mighty, but I think 'Guest', if that is indeed you're real name, is being very rude and it annoys me. However, I may have read it the wrong way, and 'Guest' could be a very nice person, so ill include a list of names, comparing the Japanese Names to the English names.
Judai Yuki- Jaden Yuki
Shou Marufuji- Cyrus Truesdale
Hayato Maeda- Chumley Huffington
Misawa Daichi- Bastion Misawa
Asuka Tenjoin- Alexis Rhodes
Manjoume Jun- Chazz Princeton
Daitokuji- Lyman Banner
Ryou Marufuji- Zane Truesdale (one of the few decent dub names, in my opinion)
Professor Chronos- Professor Crowler
Momoe- Mindy
Junko- Jasmine
Jim- Jim
Did I miss anyone? No, good! Sheesh, who says I don't aim to please? If after all that, you still don't want to carry on reading, you can just go and fuck off!
Uzunau999's is too long to type, so I'll give the basics
He/she has given me his/her idea for a Kisame card. And I must say, it's quite close to my original idea. I do, however already have an idea for Kisame, so I'll stick with mine. My reasoning is, my Kisame card has a secondary ability, and using your idea as well as that would make him a bit overpowered. Honestly though, thanks for the input and please, anyone who wants to contribute, send them to me. After all, your ideas may be better than my own. Once again, thanks, Uzunaru, and don't hesitate to send me any ideas for other cards, you're pretty good at this! Speaking of contributions, only two days left to submit your OC's, so hurry up before time runs out, any OC submitted after my update on Friday will be ignored. You've been warned!
Ok, quick little thank you to all the guys who have done repeat reviews- jlink, Mzr90, irnzenmonk, Nemo2002 and ryanshadow19!
Alrighty then, I'll see you guys Friday. Or should I say, you'll see me!
P.S. please tell me if you think I should change 'C0' to a magic or keep it as a trap. Or if I should just leave it, after all the show never exactly followed the rules, did it *cough*magical mallet*cough*