To the guest reviewer. Thank you for telling me what you think,but no thanks. Not everybody on this site writes the way you deem acceptable. We all have a different style and that is what makes us unique. If you don't like the way I write then don't read. If you are looking for a reaction,you wrote your abuse on the wrong story. As for the "big clumps" I find that way easier to organize my work. So that is how it will stay. Finally your language made you look foolish and immature. Maybe if you improve your own writing and stop picking on others there will be less drama.
Alex sat uncomfortably. Mr Pleasure continued to eat. "Alex?" he said. Alex looked to him. "What do you mean,sir?". "You are the Son of Lord Witfield. I did not think that the son of a lord would be shown how to use a gun". This is hadn't been on Alex's books. Thinking on his feet he said "My father wanted me to learn. encase of any potential situations". Mr Pleasure nodded. "Alex,do you love my daughter?". "Of course I do" Alex said truthfully in a sense. "Daisy I mean". Mr Pleasure said his arm gesturing to Daisy. Her blonde hair was piled onto her head. She was dressed in pink once more today. "Yes" said Alex lying through his teeth. Mr Pleasure smiled at him and replied. "Alex I knew you did,she just overacted". Alex nodded. Mr Pleasure smiled and nodded at a servant who came over and untied Alex's wrist. "Maybe after dinner,you and Daisy could go for a walk". Alex was served a drink and began to drink it. "Sir" he said. "Your wife,may I ask?". Mr Pleasure wiped his chin and put down his knife and fork. "Lisa" he said. "She is Daisy and Sabrina's mother". "She died giving birth to Sabrina". He clenched his fist on the table. "That little monster up the stairs killed my wife." "I loved that women and my children until she murdered her,she always had the devil look about her. She would kill me too if she got the chance". Alex couldn't believe that he was hearing this. Sabrina wasn't a murder. These people are insane he thought. "I did see a scar along her stomach" Alex said. Daisy smiled "yes" "Once when we were quite small,we were playing and she stopped and started to breathe heavily. I pushed her over and she became quite cross. She chased me around shouting at me. I screamed for father and threw things at her. I threw an old champagne bottle at her and she stopped. She was bleeding from her stomach and I thought she was dead. They fixed her in the house and she has been okay. She is the devil though and I now feel comfortable knowing that she's back and we can see her." Alex nodded. "I'm going to going to go upstairs". They nodded and Alex left the room. He closed the door and walked right into Mr Vu. He jumped. The man looked back. Alex said a phrase in Chinese. The man looked at him. Alex shook his head and moved around him. He went upstairs and along the corridor. He stopped outside Sabrina's door. There was a padlock on the door Alex walked on and opened his own door. He went inside and picked up his phone going into the bathroom. He pressed seven and was once more looking at the grumpy face of Mr Blunt. Alex told him everything from the camping,to the fighting,Mr Pleasure and his daughter's hatred for Sabrina and all about him and Sabrina's relationship. Mr Blunt sighed. "Anything on the mission?" "No" said Alex. "I've been busy" Mr Blunt said "Hmmm". "Find out and then you can come back. You've caused so much hassle. Like usual". Alex laughed and terminated the call.
Opening his window Alex slid out. He walked along the window ledge until he came to Sabrina's window. He chapped the glass. Sabrina's purple curtains moved back and he was looking into her face. She smiled and opened the window. Alex slipped inside and sat down on her bed. Sabrina came over and sat down. "Sab" said Alex "yeah?" said Sabrina. "Before I came here did you come out of your bedroom?" Sabrina breathed in and looked down. "I've never been allowed". "My family hate me". Alex looked at her hand. She had on a black ring. "What's that? he asked. "I have to wear it,it keeps the devil inside me apparently." Alex put his hand on hers and pulled the ring off her finger. "Alex no!" cried Sabrina. She started to cry then. Alex gently took her face."You're not evil,they are for doing this to you". "I'll sort this" said Alex. He kissed her on the cheek and then left the room. Sabrina slid the ring back onto her finger when he was gone. She was afraid of her father.
I'm aware it's short but I've had a long weekend.