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Ok so in this part… It gets some tiger rivalry between, read and find out! And here is a Manny and Ellie scene right now! : ) Enjoy and PLEASE review!
Chapter six- Doing everything wrong
Manny was sick of migrating in this heat! His feet hurt, he was tired and hungry and the leader of the mammoths would not let the animals rest until practically midnight!
"Diego got the easy way out," Manny muttered to Ellie, "I wish we could get a boat!"
Ellie groaned, "I really don't feel like walking anymore. All I want to do is lie down." Her usually bright emerald eyes had now faded to a dull green with her personality.
"Okay, next time, I don't care what anyone has to say, we are not migrating with out, Diego, Sid and Crash and Eddie." Manny said opposing the screwy way the migration was going now.
"I won't argue." Ellie said plainly then the distressed girl sighed, "I really regret convincing us to migrate separately. I miss Eddie and Crash, Diego… and even Sid!" She laughed at the end.
"I know what you mean." Manny murmured silently. "I miss 'em all too. " He looked at the ground as Ellie wrapped her trunk around his. He looked into her deep eyes. "But there is one good thing out of this whole ordeal."
"What's that?" Ellie asked.
"There's no one that I would rather migrate with than you."
Ellie smiled and the two stopped walking and kissed until a harsh voice interjected. "Keep moving!" An older mammoth yelled, "Geese these young whipper-snappers are always getting in the way." He said to one of his older friends.
Manny looked at Ellie and they both smiled and suppressed a laugh. "We'd better get moving I guess."
Back in the Ocean
Since Angel had left with her mother and promised to return to see him again, Diego had decided to go and find Gabriel in his boredom. Diego looked around the dock, the air was crisp with the sweet scent of autumn and sea-salt. He watched a few young cubs run by. He saw tigers talking merrily, a few were catching fish for dinner he presumed. He climbed to the upper level the boat. He stumbled on a step but didn't fall. He was obviously not used to steps. "Humans. How can they walk on these things?" He mumbled to himself. He got up to the upper level and saw Gabriel with some rope.
"Hey Gabe," He called.
Gabriel turned around, "Oh! Hi Diego, how's it goin'?"
"Not bad."
"So… you havin' fun with Angel?" Gabriel snickered, "taking her to the big dance tomorrow?"
Diego scoffed, "I… Okay, you got me,"
"So… how IS it going. Tell me everything!" Gabriel leaned into Diego as if they were high school human girls gossiping about the quarterback.
"Well, at first I didn't wanna go to the dance. I mean, I didn't really wanna make myself look like a complete retard." Diego laughed sheepishly.
"But you're going right?" Gabriel said suddenly with his tone raised, almost in a small panic.
"Yeah, Yeah, calm down."
"Did you ask her?" Gabriel said in a more hushed tone.
"No… why?"
"She had to ask you?"
"She asked me and at first I told her I wasn't into dances and after Cassie convinced me to-"
"Woah, woah, woah! Did you say that my daughter convinced you to take Angel? And THEN is when you said that you would wanna go with her?"
"Yeah… is that bad?" Diego said now a bit uncomfortable.
"Of course that's bad! Dating advice from a five-month-old cub! Did Angel still want to go with you?" Gabriel exclaimed, with an edge of doubt in his voice. His dark fur blowing in the sea's breeze.
Diego grinned, "yeah she did." Then he laughed, "I guess now that you'd think of it, it is kind of pathetic."
Gabriel agreed, "you're doing it all wrong." He added.
"Help me!" Diego said.
"Don't worry." Gabriel thought for a moment or two then his head popped up with a brilliant idea. "Jake! Get over here!" Gabriel gestured toward the tiger.
A tiger with a darker version of Diego's tawny appeared, his sharp dagger-like sabers were eye catching. "Yeah?" His voice surprised Diego with its softness, 'must be a good singer' Diego observed.
"Diego here wants to be with this… gorgeous, beautiful, intensely hot, girl!" Gabriel emphasized every adjective.
"Ohhhhh," Jake grinned turning toward Gabriel having his own conversation, "scale of one to ten?"
"Eleven, easily!" Gabriel said suddenly.
"Wow! Prettier than Gloria?"
"Uhm…" Gabriel said, not wanting to have this conversation quoted back to his mate. "Lets talk more about Diego's problem." Gabriel changed subject. "Diego's problem is that he's too shy."
"Not shy." Diego interjected.
"And," Gabriel continued ignoring Diego, "he had to listen to Cassie to get enough guts to take Angel to the dance. "
"As in your five-month-old daughter? That Cassie?" Jake's brown eyes wide with interest as the third girl to join in on the quarterback gossip.
"Yeah."
"Don't worry Diego." Jake assured him. "I'm running the dance, I will think of something."
"Thanks…" Diego said sarcastically.
"Oh!" Jake's sudden perk in voice, "we could…" He looked at Diego, then whispered to Gabriel who lifted his expression and then smiled slyly.
"That's good!" Gabriel smiled. The two faced Diego.
"What? What were you whispering about?"
Gabriel smiled and circled Diego like a hawk circling potential prey, "You'll find out tomorrow."
Meanwhile
Angel went with her mother on the lower level of the ship.
"Mom, how many times do I have to tell you, there is no chance that I will take that jerk back! Besides I already want…" Angel was about to say something that she had meant! She was about to say that she wanted Diego! But wait, how? They were good friends, yes, but Diego? She whipped the thought out of her mind. But she had this hammering curiosity, did Diego like her, she wondered.
Not seeming to notice Angel's slip up Joanne took Angel to Trevor.
"Angel, look Trevor!" Angel's mom squealed trying to make Angel excited.
Angel just looked at her mom and rolled her hard blue eyes. "Mom, you can't be serious."
"You never know…" Joanne cried, "There might still be an old spark somewhere, I'll meet you at dinner, kay sweetie?"
It was strange because it seemed like the only time her mother was cheerful is if it was around Trevor. 'Trying to b cheerful to make me take him back. Well that's not goanna work. Diego would never fall for that act –Diego! Ugh I've gotta stop thinking about him' Her thoughts seemed to be working against her. She couldn't believe it but she was almost half relieved to hear Trevor.
"Hi Angel." He said eagerly trying to make himself sound cool.
"Hi," She mumbled.
"So… What 'ya been up to?" Trevor asked, now uncomfortable talking to his ex.
"Oh you know. Just hanging out with Diego and stuff." Wow, was she seriously considering using Diego to make Gabriel jealous, this was so shallow of her but she kept going with it.
"Oh…" Gabriel said as an awkward silence consumed their conversation, the waves drifting off of the sides of the boat was the only sound for about a minute until Angel spoke up.
"Well this was fun, but I'd better get going. Speaking of Diego I have to meet him somewhere." Angel walked off when Trevor called her back.
"Angel, wait!" Trevor ran to her. "There's something I wanted to ask you."
"What?"
"Well, Angel, look you know that what happened last year was totally my mistake."
"Yeahhhh, and?"
"And well, I was just saying, I realize how stupid it was of me to dump you for that girl. I just want you to forgive me."
Angel sighed, "Okay I forgive you."
"Oh good! Then you'll want to go to the dance with me, right?"
"What? Oh no, sorry, I'm going with Diego." She smirked.
"What? Why?"
"Well you really want to know?"
"Yes!"
"Okay, it's 'cuz he actually treats me like a saber, instead of a slave. He actually cares for other animals! Did you see how he saved that little cub the other day? And not to mention, he is more… attractive than you! Sorry." Angel walked off but Trevor cut her off.
"You… are… rejecting… me?" He sounded out each word slowly as if to try and convince himself of their meaning.
"Yes, sorry you had your chance and, actually, I'm glad that you blew it because now, I have Diego."
"You try to leave me and I'll kill that—"
"Don't touch him!" Angel said now more defensive.
Trevor growled and swiped his claws across her shoulder. "Don't tell me what to do. You're going with me and that's final!"
Angel cried out in pain. "JERK!" She got her claws ready and swiped him ten-times harder across the face and ran away quickly.
"Don't think this is over bitch!" Trevor yelled back at the Angel. He looked to his side where there was a clay statue left on board by one of the humans. He cursed and smashed the clay figurine with his paw.
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