Clockwork
A Vocaloid fanfiction by DarkAoRin
Vocaloid ©Crypton ©Yamaha
Hiya guys! Rin here.
This new chapter is not a story, but a kind of message.
I just wanna say that after I read this story – my own story, the usage of Indonesian slang kinda discomfort me. It's just not beautiful. It's still a literary art though, but less beautiful for me myself. Sorry.
The only reason here is I think it's not suitable for the setting of the story.
HECK. IT'S CRINGEY! IT'S JUST WEIRD! I WONDER WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME BACK THEN. :"D
So I decided to remake this, make a new one. With good language. Not that I'm saying that slang language isn't good, but as I said before, the setting is in Japan and it's weird for using Indonesian slang. Sorry guys.
So, yeah, stay for the updates! LOVE YOU GUYS xxxoo
Hai guys! Rin di sini.
Chapter baru ini isinya bukan cerita yah, tapi semacam pesan.
Rin cuma pengen bilang kalau setelah Rin baca cerita ini – cerita Rin sendiri, penggunaan bahasa gaul tuh bikin Rin gak nyaman. Kayak gak indah gitu. Emang sih, tetap aja termasuk karya sastra, tapi kurang indah aja gitu menurut Rin sendiri. Maaf!
Alasannya adalah, Rin rasa nggak cocok dengan latar ceritanya.
HALAH. POKOKNYA BERASA ANEH, LAH! GAK SESUAI AJA GITUH! RIN SENDIRI HERAN KENAPA DULU RIN BIKIN KAYAK GITU. :"D (kayaknya sih ikutan temen author lain wkwk)
Jadi Rin udah memutuskan bikin ulang cerita ini, bikin yang baru. Dengan bahasa yang bagus. Bukannya Rin mau bilang pakai bahasa gaul itu nggak bagus, tapi seperti yang Rin bilang sebelunya, latar tempatnya kan di Jepang, dan gak cocok pakai bahasa gaul Indo. Maaf ya.
Okedeh, tunggu kelanjutannya ya! RIN SAYANG SEMUANYA /ciumpeluk/
